12 Lines
Due Monday by midnight
@killer styles
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12 Lines
Due Monday by midnight
@killer styles
@Killer Stylez
Can I get the 24hr ext?
Damn, I'm ready to drop my verse right now... but if you really need that ext, I don't give a fuck
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@Bomb Bard
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Fuck it, imma drop my shit anyways.....
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http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...PEN-FOR-VOTES)
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...OPEN-FOR-VOTES
My two vote links....
It’s a catastrophe, sad to see, this wack textcee tryin to take a stab at me, with tired ass bars and wasted schemes…
Imma leave Bard fucking crippled, chop his legs off just to watch him try and “Chase his Dreams!”…
Your slackin B.. In this battle they only want to see hard hitting bars, like feins they want the dope-stuff…
Im sorry ya’ll, but this nigga’s hope-less, my verse will have to cover for the both-of-us…
Sendin dope ass blows, to explode-his-guts, he didn’t know he was facing the craziest…
After I kill him off, this bitch will put up the Bomb Bard name and come back reincarnated as an Alias…
You might be a Bomb, but im an Intercontinental Ballistic Missile with a mean Nuclear Warhead..
Got a target pinned on your forehead,enough explosives to leave ya whole city lying on the floor dead…
My shots put holes in ya lungs, steady Deflate’n shit, like Tom Brady and the Patriots…
No pussy get’n motherfucker, that’s why he play with kids, only time he bust’a nut is when he BabySits…
Fucking Faggot don’t you know child rapes a sin? Throw this Chomo off Trump Tower just to Make America Great Again!...
And if you safely land, I’ll take a sharp blade and filet-you-thin, then cut your fucking tongue out so you’ll never taste-a-win…
ill post tonightQuote:
Originally Posted by Killer Stylez
today i meant
U lost to Knowp?? garbage....
also U aint post 12 lines so I matched
I'll rape ur women while prego than punch Ur face in
Last battle we saw Know Pulse...So I'll shoot u to death like XXXTentacion
Ur trash nigga! Let this beating have U hurt..
Vs KnowP U posted Large font & we couldnt find a Bold Bar in fgts verse!
& ur wife? the whore I give'er Crack & then Bone'er
Soon as She get that Rakishi leaves U for the night to throw her ass in a corner
This a free verse, Cos I know U shit, This guy can blow dick
Personals/wit the Key,Style ..Yet one of those'll be better than wen U write focused
This fgt sucks, Gun buck till'e lapped up & doomed
I'll bus a Lick & Stick U in the head, & I aint need that type of Lovin from you
You’ll never champ here, faggits lame
But you’ll see me Hoist the belt, ur just another victim who got lashed for day
This nigga can't count, I posted 12 lines 6 bars....
@Bomb Bard write one more bar so we can open this for votes
@Killer Stylez Bomb sent me his bar to edit in. I cleaned this thread up it’s open for votes
Killer Styles
It’s a catastrophe, sad to see, this wack textcee tryin to take a stab at me, with tired ass bars and wasted schemes…
Imma leave Bard fucking crippled, chop his legs off just to watch him try and “Chase his Dreams!”…
I liked the chase his dreams part, I think that it could use a little word, the bar it's self is a bit too wordy, you're focusing too much on multies here and it takes away from the punch.
Your slackin B.. In this battle they only want to see hard hitting bars, like feins they want the dope-stuff…
Im sorry ya’ll, but this nigga’s hope-less, my verse will have to cover for the both-of-us…
dope stuff/both of us is a bit off in syllable count, sounds weird, I'm not really liking this though.
Sendin dope ass blows, to explode-his-guts, he didn’t know he was facing the craziest…
After I kill him off, this bitch will put up the Bomb Bard name and come back reincarnated as an Alias…
You're overdoing it with the bragging, punch is light.
You might be a Bomb, but im an Intercontinental Ballistic Missile with a mean Nuclear Warhead..
Got a target pinned on your forehead,enough explosives to leave ya whole city lying on the floor dead…
there is no punch here, you're just rambiling at this point.
My shots put holes in ya lungs, steady Deflate’n shit, like Tom Brady and the Patriots…
No pussy get’n motherfucker, that’s why he play with kids, only time he bust’a nut is when he BabySits…
This wasn't that good, the tom brady shit is played.
Fucking Faggot don’t you know child rapes a sin? Throw this Chomo off Trump Tower just to Make America Great Again!...
And if you safely land, I’ll take a sharp blade and filet-you-thin, then cut your fucking tongue out so you’ll never taste-a-win…
ehh, still more on the bragging side than an actual punch.. not feeling.
And you need to shorten your bars for the most part, they are long, so by the time you get to the punch the bar is already non-functiona.l
Bomb Bard
I'll rape ur women while prego than punch Ur face in
Last battle we saw Know Pulse...So I'll shoot u to death like XXXTentacion
too soon, this is kind of light, but it works.
Ur trash nigga! Let this beating have U hurt..
Vs KnowP U posted Large font & we couldnt find a Bold Bar in fgts verse!
haha nice punch/personal here...
& ur wife? the whore I give'er Crack & then Bone'er
Soon as She get that Rakishi leaves U for the night to throw her ass in a corner
not feeling this one much.
This a free verse, Cos I know U shit, This guy can blow dick
Personals/wit the Key,Style ..Yet one of those'll be better than wen U write focused
I'm not feeling this one either.
This fgt sucks, Gun buck till'e lapped up & doomed
I'll bus a Lick & Stick U in the head, & I aint need that type of Lovin from you
ehh, this was kind of corny rofl.
You’ll never champ here, faggits lame
But you’ll see me Hoist the belt, ur just another victim who got lashed for day
not a good way to close it off, your second bar was the killer.
You started off strong, and fell off towards the end, your 2nd bar did enough to win the battle though, I think you just did enough to win here because you know what you're doing.
V/Bomb ( better punches )
Neither of you sophomoric dick heads deserve a win. I am by far better than you both.
Not with a 1-2 record bitch.... either vote or don't post, and if you want to battle, set it you dick sucking fag
The record doesn't mean shit you anally plundering butt pirate scallywag. Anyone can honestly see that my verse was way better than his, but he still "won" because despite my superior flow and the fact that I rhymed circles around his retarded fucking head they gave it to the guy who they are long-time forum buddies with for obvious reasons, instead of the guy everyone hates because I am a dick to everyone. It's as simple as that, it has nothing to do with who was better, it's all about politics. Now I will set up the battle and kick your ass and we'll see if these bitches are willing to admit it when I rip you a new ass hole.
No pussy get’n motherfucker, that’s why he play with kids, only time he bust’a nut is when he BabySits…
Fucking Faggot don’t you know child rapes a sin? Throw this Chomo off Trump Tower just to Make America Great Again!...
vs
This a free verse, Cos I know U shit, This guy can blow dick
Personals/wit the Key,Style ..Yet one of those'll be better than wen U write focused
This fgt sucks, Gun buck till'e lapped up & doomed
I'll bus a Lick & Stick U in the head, & I aint need that type of Lovin from you
You’ll never champ here, faggits lame
But you’ll see me Hoist the belt, ur just another victim who got lashed for day
Killer had some good attempts but a lot of filler
Bomb had a better over all flow to his verses and more punches connected
Vote Bomb Bard
Good Battle
It’s a catastrophe, sad to see, this wack textcee tryin to take a stab at me, with tired ass bars and wasted schemes…
Imma leave Bard fucking crippled, chop his legs off just to watch him try and “Chase his Dreams!”…
( this is 2018, u cant use a legs off/chase bar..thats just terrible..even worst is u made it the opener)
Your slackin B.. In this battle they only want to see hard hitting bars, like feins they want the dope-stuff…
Im sorry ya’ll, but this nigga’s hope-less, my verse will have to cover for the both-of-us…
( filler.... and dope stuff/ hope-less don't rhyme)
Sendin dope ass blows, to explode-his-guts, he didn’t know he was facing the craziest…
After I kill him off, this bitch will put up the Bomb Bard name and come back reincarnated as an Alias…
( FILLER....u aren't saying anything)
You might be a Bomb, but im an Intercontinental Ballistic Missile with a mean Nuclear Warhead..
Got a target pinned on your forehead,enough explosives to leave ya whole city lying on the floor dead…
(filler again.... u are rambling on...also, these aren't personals, u are just throwing his name into the bar with no relevance)
My shots put holes in ya lungs, steady Deflate’n shit, like Tom Brady and the Patriots…
No pussy get’n motherfucker, that’s why he play with kids, only time he bust’a nut is when he BabySits…
( its 2018, patriots/deflate ?.... c'mon)
Fucking Faggot don’t you know child rapes a sin? Throw this Chomo off Trump Tower just to Make America Great Again!...
And if you safely land, I’ll take a sharp blade and filet-you-thin, then cut your fucking tongue out so you’ll never taste-a-win…
( filler and this is clearly your only decent bar and its not saying much...
Back to the drawing board...u have a lot to work on ....your punches aren't punches, ur shit is too wordy and It babbles on....
vs
I'll rape ur women while prego than punch Ur face in
Last battle we saw Know Pulse...So I'll shoot u to death like XXXTentacion
( good idea...terrrrrrible wording... this is made worst for the fact that its what u opened with)
Ur trash nigga! Let this beating have U hurt..
Vs KnowP U posted Large font & we couldnt find a Bold Bar in fgts verse!
( decent....not a hard hitter)
& ur wife? the whore I give'er Crack & then Bone'er
Soon as She get that Rakishi leaves U for the night to throw her ass in a corner
(no, just no....smh)
This a free verse, Cos I know U shit, This guy can blow dick
Personals/wit the Key,Style ..Yet one of those'll be better than wen U write focused
(filler...and no)
This fgt sucks, Gun buck till'e lapped up & doomed
I'll bus a Lick & Stick U in the head, & I aint need that type of Lovin from you
( smh...)
You’ll never champ here, faggits lame
But you’ll see me Hoist the belt, ur just another victim who got lashed for day
(bad....even worst is u made it the closer)
I can see Bomb sayin he keystyled this knowing his opponent is low tier, but u still should put a lil more effort, people have to read this......easy win for Bomb....since his opponent is just terrible in every aspect
V- Bomb
Been open for a month, Bomb wins 3-0 sweep