10 lines
due??
house rules
g/l
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10 lines
due??
house rules
g/l
due within 2hours?
i guess
yo ill drop later tonight, if thats alright
its 3am here i'll drop now...
The first 21... counts all the guns that salute em
the second 21 is countin all the ones that'll shoot em'
he's a bum and it suits em' he's essentially ...scrubby scum
whats with ya 1990's style? that was last Century...21
why you even tryin queer? ya plain shit, it aint flyin here
So I gotta show i'm Over 21...like I'm Buyin Beer!
This punk'll get beat, leave this chump, slumped in defeat
Gotta Chunky Physique, but 21 is still gettin JUMPed in the STREET!
Sent him packin, now he actin like the World is Gonna End
Only 21 we'll remember...is in December...Twenty Ten!
key
logic your text is shit written, It's weak and gettting ignored
So I'm going to pull a Chris Brown, and Beat this Bitch to the Floor/
Call me Tyson cause it's over in a few punches ring the bell
Hit me? No way, Only way this dude's going' to connect is DSL!/
Why’d we even battle? I slap him so hard his head detach
Blood flowin in a patch rb forum know you throw as much heat as a red stick match/
This battle aint worthy of good line, you lack in style
You couldn’t cut up bars if you were in jail an packin a file/
I asked a dude about you I said you know syco logic, he said yeh look at his pic he is just a confused faggit./
yo soz took so long had family over.
First bar- chris brown and rhianna(i know its old, i had family over and couldnt concentrate)
third bar- red stick match is a brand of matches... ie matches dont throw much heat
four- bars in jail.
five - his advatar.
The first 21... counts all the guns that salute em
the second 21 is countin all the ones that'll shoot em'
he's a bum and it suits em' he's essentially ...scrubby scum
whats with ya 1990's style? that was last Century...21
Vs nothing
2121 didnt came harder in this battle as you could have...
Syco's drop aint that good too cuz ya repeated the same thing 21 in almost all the bars
time and again...But Nice personals though....
V-syco
The first 21... counts all the guns that salute em
the second 21 is countin all the ones that'll shoot em'
This punk'll get beat, leave this chump, slumped in defeat
Gotta Chunky Physique, but 21 is still gettin JUMPed in the STREET!
vs.
Why’d we even battle? I slap him so hard his head detach
Blood flowin in a patch rb forum know you throw as much heat as a red stick match
easy win to syco here, easy to see 21 had sumthin going on cause your other battles have had alot better style. Syco like the opener and the 2nd bar, decent punches, good name useage and tightly constructed concepts. was lolin' on the 'Jumped' quote not a great line and had some word issues but still funny as. 21 only thing for me that stood out was the 'match' bar, it was streched in the punch but the initial concept was decent. apart from this you just had some played lines and nothing that was hard hitting, a dissapointment really cause i was expecting a decent battle here.
v/ syco
This fuckin dumbass bit his whole first bar...lmfao its off a recent battle too smh
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...759/index.html
but dont dq em' llol i want my 5 points
Tru...and thats funny you brought that up becuz i remember reading that battle between u and tense...^^^
CATEGORIES...
PUNCHES-SYCO
PERSONALS-SYCO
NAMEPLAY/WORDPLAY-SYCO
MULTIES-SYCO
CREATIVITY-SYCO
BASICALLY PRETTY ONE SIDED...
MY FAV LINE...
why you even tryin queer? ya plain shit, it aint flyin here
So I gotta show i'm Over 21...like I'm Buyin Beer!
DOPE HAHAHA^^^
VOTE-SYCO
Syco-logic- (best bars)
why you even tryin queer? ya plain shit, it aint flyin here
So I gotta show i'm Over 21...like I'm Buyin Beer!
vs.
2121- (best bars)
Call me Tyson cause it's over in a few punches ring the bell
Hit me? No way, Only way this dude's going' to connect is DSL!/
Multies: even
Metas: SL
Punches: SL
Personals: SL
Vocab: SL
Yo, 2121, I know u can come waaaaaay better than this. I understand u were distracted with fam. Unfortunately this hampered ur verse and left Syco in for the kill. Next time don't battle if ur gonna be distracted; it'll seriously hurt. Nice shit Syco.
vote=Syco
My battles plz:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...148/index.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...259/index.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...159/index.html
The first 21... counts all the guns that salute em
the second 21 is countin all the ones that'll shoot em'
he's a bum and it suits em' he's essentially ...scrubby scum
whats with ya 1990's style? that was last Century...21
why you even tryin queer? ya plain shit, it aint flyin here
vs
logic your text is shit written, It's weak and gettting ignored
So I'm going to pull a Chris Brown, and Beat this Bitch to the Floor/
there u have it...21 that was ur only decent bar adn change ur structure up pleez
v/syco...rtf
v/sysco
21/21-hes not a writter hes a bitter