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@Joe Boston @VERITAS
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2:00 minimum, 4:00 maximum
match time limit of whoever posts first
verses due Sunday, September 17
12 am PST
Must vote on every battle on the card.
@Joe Boston @VERITAS
Go ahead and post it. I will reply.
Ight guess ill do the honors lol
https://youtu.be/QAYwfd-smQY
This was over within Beritas verse reaching 2 minutes.
Joe
.. that was one of your worst performances I've ever seen, the rust is real.
Okay so here is my review:
Joe, your problem is some of your content wasn't delivered as crisp as I prefer. You had the right idea going after his background, I just wish the bars would have hit harder and you would of put more emphasis on not only making them harsh, but delivering them with emotion and confidence. What you want is crowd reaction with every bar. Something to get their attention, and you have to say it with confidence that you KNOW it's a dope bar. People won't always react to it, but you have to give them a reason to pop. If you don't feel comfortable, they will recognize it and it will impact your performance.
Veritas, I thought you won this but I do have some criticism. You were far too relaxed. If you were in an open mic forum or a live battle, your presence would have come off as awkward and stiff in presentation. I was waiting for you to snap but you never did. To elaborate, when I say snap I mean deliver your punches with emphasis. What I heard were a ton of similes and roast jokes being read without any emotion, just straightforward banter as if you were casually joking the guy by reading off your screen. What I recommend is for you to build up your punches. Not just with multis or whatever, but with cockiness. Braggadocio. If you're going to clown the guy then entertain me while you're doing it. You said some funny stuff but I can't remember any of it because you didn't take the time to 1. build it up 2. give it time to set in 3. emphasize each punchline with emotion. You want your performance to be memorable, not just because of the content, but how you presented yourself.
Props to both.
v-Veritas
V easy
Learn to vote properly u non boston native fruitcakeQuote:
Originally Posted by Greed
Can you teach me these mystical arts of charisma you speak of?Quote:
Originally Posted by B Dot LESNAR
You develop it by going on stage in front of crowds and performing. By jumping in freestyle ciphers. By entertaining a party. You have to act as if you're not reading it, it doesn't matter that you are, just as long as you're giv i ng it personality. You don't seem like a reserved, laid back dude.Quote:
Originally Posted by VERITAS
I don't really go to parties......i live in the woods. I am kind of a private person.
Would you recommend me go8ng out and screaming insults at the trees sir?
That doesn't mean anything, tbh. You have to pause to allow people to get the punch, you can do that by building up the bar, then when you deliver your punch, such as your similes for example, give it personality, make it feel as if you want your audience to react to it. Don't be so quick to go into your next joke or punchline. You strike me as a guy that can be intimidating but lighthearted at the same time. Blend that. Be aggressive, not Dizaster aggressive, but enough to where people take you seriously, then when you use humor, act the part, you want people to laugh right, then be humorous not in just how you reading the bar, but by expressing just how funny it is to you.
I'm listening.....please continue....
Just give your material personality. Be alive. If you're going to joke, do it in a regular everyday manner. Watch some comedy standups, notice how comedians just talk to the audience, and when they deliver the punch they give it a moment to set in and do it with personality. You want to connect with the listener, and you want them to clearly understand what you're saying, that's where the emphasis comes in. Watch some Pat Stay battles. When he says funny shit, he makes you laugh not just because what he said, but how he said it.
Say it with personality.
I understand your words....i will work on it. Do you think you could post a video of you spitting hot funny bars as an example?
I'll post an audio of me reading a verse to give you an idea. When I get a chance I'll record and send a pm to you.
You will read it with personality yes?
Take my advice or don't, bro. It doesn't really matter to me. If you feel you're at the point where you know how good you are then you shouldn't let anybody tell you differently. Just keep in mind you won't improve either.
Breakdown:Quote:
Originally Posted by Joe Boston
Boston - terrible cadence, corny lines
V - monotone cadence, hot lines
Why the hostility? I am legit looking forward to your example for educational purposes. I just wasn't clear if you were going to shoe me how i was being....or shoe me how you wanted me to be? I am hoping the latter.Quote:
Originally Posted by B Dot LESNAR
Yo Boston Joe fuckin sucks
Veritas killed it
Veritas video isn't playing for me.
Think you have to click the link that says watch on youtubeQuote:
Originally Posted by Amen
Hey smarty pants, there is NO FUCKING LINK that says; "Watch on youtube" or else I would have clicked it, dick bag.
There is a Youtube play box and when you click play, it says the video is no longer available.
When I click it a msg pops up saying watch on YouTube? I click that link DRE! You cunt!... and it works fineQuote:
Originally Posted by Amen
- - - Updated - - -
https://m.youtube.com/watch?feature=...&v=w6x-mvTH95M
Here's the link you pos
Think he has a private channelQuote:
Originally Posted by Amen
I saw if, guys in the middle of the woods .. pretty fucking weird lol
peeped these off the ncs link thought boston did his thing. i mean Veritas came in riggity raw though. dude is pretty tough on these vid battles. i think V is prolly one of the funner people to view and listen to. he delivered one of his harder verses on this and it outshined JB IMO.
idk wht type of votes yall looking for, but i got- Veritas here. nice showing guise
lol @ how bad boe joston is
jesus fucking christ i almost didn't make it into his verse because the preamble before was cringe but then when he actually started doing-what-he-might-call-rapping i couldn't stomach more than twenty seconds.
it's unbelievable how much he fucking sucks. have some goddamn self-respect.
Eat a lot of dick and die for me please thank youQuote:
Originally Posted by English
Quote:
Originally Posted by English
Lol'ed at have some self respect.
V Wins
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