Week 10 - Contender's Match: Plot (2-0) vs Plethora (3-2) Plethora wins.

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Due Dates:

Verses are due Friday and will be open until Sunday.
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One sided battles may get closed early.
Extensions are 24 hours



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Minimum of 10, maximum of 16 (unless higher limit agreed upon)
If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first.


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@Plot @plethora

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@Plot @plethora
Due tonight

Guys a no show

Ext..

type to have no battles & STILL be under .500, so forfeit & quit
either Finish Sub-Zero or I'll make sure u break even on some scorpion shit - Plethora vs Bash

detach his scapula, docs gonna needle & thread it back on that child
once they Sonya Blade together ima finish him mortal kombat style - Plethora vs Justice Grimm


Always making Mortal Kombat refs, I'll just make him a John Doe
Keeps going back and forward with those punches like he cant finish the combo.
Read a few battles, common factor is structuring a bar so it hurts
You should just quit text and make a phone app: Plets problems with words.
Nerd cant handle a contender, he don't deserve a shot at the title
Coz with his history of no shows, its no mystery he'll struggle with a rival.
Wouldn't last one round in the ring with Plot, the one twos immaculate
When I double-check his chin just to prove my opinion is accurate.
It's monotonous killing these wacks, and he's next for the motions
This is just another dead body disposal, drop Plet in the ocean.

@plethora You have until midnight, pimp.

Plot aka Robocop..



go ahead.. pamper ur white trash gf but she taking me home later
after Plot Spoiler she exposing everything before we get to the trailer
named urself Robocop?? nah its tubes when i pull the steel knife
cuz we dont see the machine connection til ur hooked up to one in real life
ur girl died from a transmitted disease. that bar slut was equal opportunity
even amen Mr. Knightowl ways, knowing what she meant to the latino community
gave Cop warning, said take one more step & i'll seal ur fate
told him stop & Posthumous not know who i am, until it was too late
drew the gauge, but then decided to throw hands with no caution
cuz figured after i Maul Cop he'll be as useless as Joe Boston

Quote:

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Originally Posted by Plot

type to have no battles & STILL be under .500, so forfeit & quit
either Finish Sub-Zero or I'll make sure u break even on some scorpion shit - Plethora vs Bash

detach his scapula, docs gonna needle & thread it back on that child
once they Sonya Blade together ima finish him mortal kombat style - Plethora vs Justice Grimm


Always making Mortal Kombat refs, I'll just make him a John Doe
Keeps going back and forward with those punches like he cant finish the combo.
Nice. Creative wp and good personal. It's cool you flipped it into something that's also a Mortal Kombat reference. The wording is adequate but I think could have been a little stronger for the punch - instead of just pointing out that he makes Mortal Kombat refs/keeps doing them, you could make the language a little harsher/more judgemental... "your style is predictable... all you do is go back & forward w/ those punches..."
Read a few battles, common factor is structuring a bar so it hurts
You should just quit text and make a phone app: Plets problems with words.
Not bad. Delivered well.
Nerd cant handle a contender, he don't deserve a shot at the title
Coz with his history of no shows, its no mystery he'll struggle with a rival.
OK the wording and the personal are excellent but unfortunately that arrival/a rival wp is reeeeally old. I don't hate this because of the personal/wording but it's kind of a nothing bar because of the wp
Wouldn't last one round in the ring with Plot, the one twos immaculate
When I double-check his chin just to prove my opinion is accurate.
Yep. I like this. Haven't seen that wp before. Well worded
It's monotonous killing these wacks, and he's next for the motions
This is just another dead body disposal, drop Plet in the ocean.
Hmmmm I'm not sure if I'm on board with abbreviating his name to Plet rather than Pleth... but if we go along with that then the rest of this is good. I'm gonna call this one OKish/so-so overall bc I'm not sure how I feel about "Plet"

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Quote:

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Originally Posted by plethora

Plot aka Robocop..



go ahead.. pamper ur white trash gf but she taking me home later
after Plot Spoiler she exposing everything before we get to the trailer
Niiice. Tie ins all worded really well. Great open
named urself Robocop?? nah its tubes when i pull the steel knife
cuz we dont see the machine connection til ur hooked up to one in real life
Cool np flip
ur girl died from a transmitted disease. that bar slut was equal opportunity
even amen Mr. Knightowl ways, knowing what she meant to the latino community
Had to google. I guess this works... I'm not crazy about it
gave Cop warning, said take one more step & i'll seal ur fate
told him stop & Posthumous not know who i am, until it was too late
Nahhh... that's corny to me
drew the gauge, but then decided to throw hands with no caution
cuz figured after i Maul Cop he'll be as useless as Joe Boston
OK. I guess JB is a mall cop... wordplay is alright but it's light

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Uhhh... I am surprised to say it but I think Plot got this. Best verse I've seen from him yet. Pleth's opener was easily LOTB and I thought this was a wrap after I read it, but apart from that there was a miss and then two meh bars... I think Plot was a little more consistent with stuff I thought was cool

Quote:

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Originally Posted by Plot

type to have no battles & STILL be under .500, so forfeit & quit
either Finish Sub-Zero or I'll make sure u break even on some scorpion shit - Plethora vs Bash

detach his scapula, docs gonna needle & thread it back on that child
once they Sonya Blade together ima finish him mortal kombat style - Plethora vs Justice Grimm


Always making Mortal Kombat refs, I'll just make him a John Doe
Keeps going back and forward with those punches like he cant finish the combo.
Cool
Read a few battles, common factor is structuring a bar so it hurts
You should just quit text and make a phone app: Plets problems with words.
Not feeling this one, the wording is off
Nerd cant handle a contender, he don't deserve a shot at the title
Coz with his history of no shows, its no mystery he'll struggle with a rival.
Decent jab. No haymaker but it’s clever
Wouldn't last one round in the ring with Plot, the one twos immaculate
When I double-check his chin just to prove my opinion is accurate.
This is all right. More a jab than a haymaker again IMO
It's monotonous killing these wacks, and he's next for the motions
This is just another dead body disposal, drop Plet in the ocean.
Clean flip, I waffle a little on calling him plet but not enough for this to miss for me

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Vs

Quote:

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Originally Posted by plethora

Plot aka Robocop..



go ahead.. pamper ur white trash gf but she taking me home later
after Plot Spoiler she exposing everything before we get to the trailer
Slick. I like this
named urself Robocop?? nah its tubes when i pull the steel knife
cuz we dont see the machine connection til ur hooked up to one in real life
Solid
ur girl died from a transmitted disease. that bar slut was equal opportunity
even amen Mr. Knightowl ways, knowing what she meant to the latino community
I get the reference, wording just seems a little stretched to me
gave Cop warning, said take one more step & i'll seal ur fate
told him stop & Posthumous not know who i am, until it was too late
Decent
drew the gauge, but then decided to throw hands with no caution
cuz figured after i Maul Cop he'll be as useless as Joe Boston
Not wild about this one

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Tough one to call honestly, pleth missed for me with Knightowl and Maul Cop while Plot only had phone app as a miss. That said Pleth’s first two connected better for me than anything I saw in Plot’s verse, so that carries my vote here.

V/ Plethora

I like all the bars... except post humous

Sorry to keep it short but I got Plot here.

V/ plot

Quote:

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Originally Posted by Plot

type to have no battles & STILL be under .500, so forfeit & quit
either Finish Sub-Zero or I'll make sure u break even on some scorpion shit - Plethora vs Bash

detach his scapula, docs gonna needle & thread it back on that child
once they Sonya Blade together ima finish him mortal kombat style - Plethora vs Justice Grimm


Always making Mortal Kombat refs, I'll just make him a John Doe
Keeps going back and forward with those punches like he cant finish the combo.
This was a decent jab w/ the personal.
Read a few battles, common factor is structuring a bar so it hurts
You should just quit text and make a phone app: Plets problems with words.
This wasn't bad. Light jab.
Nerd cant handle a contender, he don't deserve a shot at the title
Coz with his history of no shows, its no mystery he'll struggle with a rival.
I liked this. Good jab.
Wouldn't last one round in the ring with Plot, the one twos immaculate
When I double-check his chin just to prove my opinion is accurate.
This was dope. Both the concept & execution.
It's monotonous killing these wacks, and he's next for the motions
This is just another dead body disposal, drop Plet in the ocean.
[B]This was solid.

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Quote:

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Originally Posted by plethora

Plot aka Robocop..



go ahead.. pamper ur white trash gf but she taking me home later
after Plot Spoiler she exposing everything before we get to the trailer
Dope.
named urself Robocop?? nah its tubes when i pull the steel knife
cuz we dont see the machine connection til ur hooked up to one in real life
Decent jab.
ur girl died from a transmitted disease. that bar slut was equal opportunity
even amen Mr. Knightowl ways, knowing what she meant to the latino community
This was creative, and set up nicely. Good stuff.
gave Cop warning, said take one more step & i'll seal ur fate
told him stop & Posthumous not know who i am, until it was too late
Not big on this.
drew the gauge, but then decided to throw hands with no caution
cuz figured after i Maul Cop he'll be as useless as Joe Boston
[B]I like the maul cop np, but not the execution here.

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Close match. Tough call. I got Plot edging this based on consistency.

Vote - Plot

Always making Mortal Kombat refs, I'll just make him a John Doe
Keeps going back and forward with those punches like he cant finish the combo.
cool.
Read a few battles, common factor is structuring a bar so it hurts
You should just quit text and make a phone app: Plets problems with words.
ehh..
Nerd cant handle a contender, he don't deserve a shot at the title
Coz with his history of no shows, its no mystery he'll struggle with a rival.
nice..
Wouldn't last one round in the ring with Plot, the one twos immaculate
When I double-check his chin just to prove my opinion is accurate.
okay..
It's monotonous killing these wacks, and he's next for the motions
This is just another dead body disposal, drop Plet in the ocean.
okay..

vs

go ahead.. pamper ur white trash gf but she taking me home later
after Plot Spoiler she exposing everything before we get to the trailer
nice..
named urself Robocop?? nah its tubes when i pull the steel knife
cuz we dont see the machine connection til ur hooked up to one in real life
fire..
ur girl died from a transmitted disease. that bar slut was equal opportunity
even amen Mr. Knightowl ways, knowing what she meant to the latino community
not really..
gave Cop warning, said take one more step & i'll seal ur fate
told him stop & Posthumous not know who i am, until it was too late
okay..
drew the gauge, but then decided to throw hands with no caution
cuz figured after i Maul Cop he'll be as useless as Joe Boston
nice flip on this...

I felt Pleth came with a slightly more solid verse this round..

V/Pleth

Tbh I wasn’t feeling anything from plot. Opener could have been much better and everything els fell flat imo



Vs


go ahead.. pamper ur white trash gf but she taking me home later
after Plot Spoiler she exposing everything before we get to the trailer
[b2named urself Robocop?? nah its tubes when i pull the steel knife
cuz we dont see the machine connection til ur hooked up to one in real life[/b]
gave Cop warning, said take one more step & i'll seal ur fate
told him stop & Posthumous not know who i am, until it was too late

Closer was funny


Pretty one sided battle here. Pleth had more personals and was wittier


V/pleth

3-3

type to have no battles & STILL be under .500, so forfeit & quit
either Finish Sub-Zero or I'll make sure u break even on some scorpion shit - Plethora vs Bash
3 1/2 not bad
detach his scapula, docs gonna needle & thread it back on that child
once they Sonya Blade together ima finish him mortal kombat style - Plethora vs Justice Grimm
1 1/2 kind of a stretch
Always making Mortal Kombat refs, I'll just make him a John Doe
Keeps going back and forward with those punches like he cant finish the combo.
2
Read a few battles, common factor is structuring a bar so it hurts
You should just quit text and make a phone app: Plets problems with words.
1 bad wording ...
Nerd cant handle a contender, he don't deserve a shot at the title
Coz with his history of no shows, its no mystery he'll struggle with a rival.
1 1/2 seems like filler
Wouldn't last one round in the ring with Plot, the one twos immaculate
When I double-check his chin just to prove my opinion is accurate.
1 1/2 filler but flowed well
It's monotonous killing these wacks, and he's next for the motions
This is just another dead body disposal, drop Plet in the ocean.
1 bad closer

12 points




go ahead.. pamper ur white trash gf but she taking me home later
after Plot Spoiler she exposing everything before we get to the trailer
lol 4 killer bars
named urself Robocop?? nah its tubes when i pull the steel knife
cuz we dont see the machine connection til ur hooked up to one in real life
3 1/2
ur girl died from a transmitted disease. that bar slut was equal opportunity
even amen Mr. Knightowl ways, knowing what she meant to the latino community
1
gave Cop warning, said take one more step & i'll seal ur fate
told him stop & Posthumous not know who i am, until it was too late
2,, the meta was weird
drew the gauge, but then decided to throw hands with no caution
cuz figured after i Maul Cop he'll be as useless as Joe Boston
2 same... why say mall cop.. i get the useless part just need to click more


12 1/2

Plethora didn't post a full verse a still squeezed out a win... more witty with better wordplay

vote plethora

@Amen could you hit this with a vote please if you got time

Always making Mortal Kombat refs, I'll just make him a John Doe
Keeps going back and forward with those punches like he cant finish the combo.
decent

Read a few battles, common factor is structuring a bar so it hurts
You should just quit text and make a phone app: Plets problems with words.
ehh

Nerd cant handle a contender, he don't deserve a shot at the title
Coz with his history of no shows, its no mystery he'll struggle with a rival.
ok

Wouldn't last one round in the ring with Plot, the one twos immaculate
When I double-check his chin just to prove my opinion is accurate.
lol ok

It's monotonous killing these wacks, and he's next for the motions
This is just another dead body disposal, drop Plet in the ocean.
decent


vs.

go ahead.. pamper ur white trash gf but she taking me home later
after Plot Spoiler she exposing everything before we get to the trailer
lmao

named urself Robocop?? nah its tubes when i pull the steel knife
cuz we dont see the machine connection til ur hooked up to one in real life
lolll this dope

ur girl died from a transmitted disease. that bar slut was equal opportunity
even amen Mr. Knightowl ways, knowing what she meant to the latino community
nah

gave Cop warning, said take one more step & i'll seal ur fate
told him stop & Posthumous not know who i am, until it was too late
ok

drew the gauge, but then decided to throw hands with no caution
cuz figured after i Maul Cop he'll be as useless as Joe Boston
no


I got plethora tkaing this comfortably.. plot had played concept and plethora was fresh .. not bad though.. but that's the winner !!

lol i didnt catch that... plethora still got my vote ...

ive got pleth but it was close. his first 2 were a bit stonger to me than plots double an opener

v plet

Plethora wins 6-3.