Week 10: Blue Bayou (1-1) vs Slecht (2-4) BLUE WINS

https://i.postimg.cc/Z5nm0vZz/LLL-LOGO.png


LLL Season 24
Regular Season Rules

10 lines
(unless agreed upon by both battlers)

No Bullshit Allowed

MUST CHECK IN BY THURSDAY!!

VERSES DUE SATURDAY 11:59 PST

24 hour EXT must be granted by opponent

BATTLES CLOSE SUNDAY


@Blue Bayou @slecht

I'm 4-1 @King

Hi Slecht...

Hey @Blue Bayou


Let's make it a nice little classic here.

Let's go 16 lines.

Quote:

---

Originally Posted by Blue Bayou

Should be a good read
I'll take A Disciple plz thanks King bae

---

Quote:

---

Originally Posted by Blue Bayou

I'm your biggest fan and yet you continue to aggressively rip me to shreds...
Breaks my god damn hear

---

Quote:

---

Originally Posted by Blue Bayou

I'm your biggest fan and yet you continue to aggressively rip me to shreds...
Breaks my god damn hear

---

pathetic when you free post in the forum. Seeking attention is what I should mention.
who gives a fuck if sin rips you to shreds, leave that with ur priest during confessions
you're an old school player of this game but not a true threat in this match.
ur like bandicoot fan club letters, that means u destined to crash
this stick is aimed right at ya dome, erase ya facial feature is what I am hopin',
hit quick when blueface the club but Thotiana ain't trying to bust it open.
I'll light this blunt and after a few puffs in. I'll break you apart - I'll kit-kat you.
last time we heard blue a problem in the books, the three little pigs were hiding from the big bad wolf.
Unlike you with my bars, you got the type of bars that I will never fucking quote.
u and ur bae, king will get catch the heat with my opener like grandmas oven broke
Text is dead but I'll rescue the craft from rivals like u that are washed up idols
You'll never be the savior of this league, not even jesus..asked for a disciple
You'll be flying in the air with one hit cuz I'm notorious for doing mean things.
If you or any of your goons try to jet, blue. I'm giving your whole team wings.
If you don't want to say a word. I'll make you look like a dummy with this body.
put an arm on you and make you talk like Ventriloquism is my hobby.

Sorry man, prepping for a work trip.

I'll key something now so it's not a NS

Hope that's cool

- - - Updated - - -

there’s suspicion you’re a homo that likes to rub on & mack guys..
Mayfield questions about being gay even...stayin w/ a Chubb on ur Backside
right hook im gunna rip this slob..
have his head ‘going in a different direction’ like it didn’t get the job
crew’s a buncha little fuckboys. if they step i’ll bleed em then ride..
approach me w/ that Unity’s gunna see his boys say the opposite & leave em to die
wake me when this is over. yawnnn @ the played rhymes n’ lines you pen..
voters are into manure concepts. not the same ol’ shit you post time & time again
it’s nothin just to snuff this faker..
my punches are ‘all the best.’ like what his girl wished'em fore’ she left to fuck the neighbor
& have ya’ll seen his ex’s?! lookin like they came from a farm in Europe..
black book such Asses Pool i swore his ugly ass was quotin yard insurance
i won’t even hate on that trash house you’ve had for years in Boston..
it’s hard to have Curb Appeal when u got a buncha teeth & brains smeared across it
this guy a Ge, No! i’ll rob his drugs & his loot while yellin ‘that herbs gay’
square up w/ me he’ll end up w/ no money Anagram Gone...now that’s Wordplay!

Sin rip was alright... Crash was ok.. Kitkat you/big bad wolf doesnt rhyme for me plus u used the word "i'll" like 23 times in this bar kinda took away from it.. Bacon was corny..savior was ok.. Jet blue was good... Overall alot of mild jabs.. U were consistent with hits they just didnt pack to much weight... Blue had different direction which was cool.. Set up wasnt there but cool concept..manure was iight... All the best was alright...overall i thought blue concepts were stronger which made the punches stronger... I thought s had the better delivery n set up but lacked the punches that blue did
VOTE BLUE

Slecht had the opener, blue face, jet blue and closer. Not a
bad verse. Some lines stronger than others. Would of given u
baking but the wording was eh. Blue had different directions,
manure, curb appeal, & closer. Those were tie. Wasn’t feeling
a few ideas but those were tight. Going Blue for better misses/ideas
overall. This was a nice read.

V/BB

Quote:

---

Originally Posted by slecht

pathetic when you free post in the forum. Seeking attention is what I should mention.
who gives a fuck if sin rips you to shreds, leave that with ur priest during confessions
Good concept, poor wording.
you're an old school player of this game but not a true threat in this match.
ur like bandicoot fan club letters, that means u destined to crash
Not feeling.
this stick is aimed right at ya dome, erase ya facial feature is what I am hopin',
hit quick when blueface the club but Thotiana ain't trying to bust it open.
What
I'll light this blunt and after a few puffs in. I'll break you apart - I'll kit-kat you.
last time we heard blue a problem in the books, the three little pigs were hiding from the big bad wolf.
No
Unlike you with my bars, you got the type of bars that I will never fucking quote.
u and ur bae, king will get catch the heat with my opener like grandmas oven broke
No
Text is dead but I'll rescue the craft from rivals like u that are washed up idols
You'll never be the savior of this league, not even jesus..asked for a disciple
No
You'll be flying in the air with one hit cuz I'm notorious for doing mean things.
If you or any of your goons try to jet, blue. I'm giving your whole team wings.
Ok. Your best executed bar.
If you don't want to say a word. I'll make you look like a dummy with this body.
put an arm on you and make you talk like Ventriloquism is my hobby.
Ehhh.

---

Honestly, I didn't like most of these bars. The execution was really lacking in my opinion. You had a couple good concepts, but the flip wasn't harsh at all.

Quote:

---

Originally Posted by Blue Bayou

Sorry man, prepping for a work trip.

I'll key something now so it's not a NS

Hope that's cool

- - - Updated - - -

there’s suspicion you’re a homo that likes to rub on & mack guys..
Mayfield questions about being gay even...stayin w/ a Chubb on ur Backside
Thought this was funny.
right hook im gunna rip this slob..
have his head ‘going in a different direction’ like it didn’t get the job
Eh
crew’s a buncha little fuckboys. if they step i’ll bleed em then ride..
approach me w/ that Unity’s gunna see his boys say the opposite & leave em to die
Ok, good concept.
wake me when this is over. yawnnn @ the played rhymes n’ lines you pen..
voters are into manure concepts. not the same ol’ shit you post time & time again
This didn't work for me.
it’s nothin just to snuff this faker..
my punches are ‘all the best.’ like what his girl wished'em fore’ she left to fuck the neighbor
Eh ok.
& have ya’ll seen his ex’s?! lookin like they came from a farm in Europe..
black book such Asses Pool i swore his ugly ass was quotin yard insurance
Didn't get this one.
i won’t even hate on that trash house you’ve had for years in Boston..
it’s hard to have Curb Appeal when u got a buncha teeth & brains smeared across it
Eh.
this guy a Ge, No! i’ll rob his drugs & his loot while yellin ‘that herbs gay’
square up w/ me he’ll end up w/ no money Anagram Gone...now that’s Wordplay!
Ha ok.

---

Could tell this was a key. Even still, had a couple decent bars in there with solid concepts.

Blue gets it. His execution was significantly better even with a key.

Blue wins 3-0