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10 @Authentic.
Veteran since 2003 theres not a mothefucker Joe Fear
Bars im gonna takes Cores Light cuz we all think hes equivalent to shitty beer
Could care less about your Hiatus here in the real world ur not labeled as Hard
Get on a Board n talk shit, in these streets shots have u spinning in the air like Red Gerard
Your BitchCard has been exposed so one night with ur chick ill be inside her
She'll be snorting kilos ill just leave my whitesox behind like Esteban Loaiza
In the home ur not a provider wife tells me ur beyond broke
I laugh how easy it is for to get her ass out for me, i can call u butt of the joke
I'll fucking Choke you out until u turn several differents colors
Watch Malik your blood all over those clothes have it look like a scene from Newyork Undercover
Ima artist wit these bars.. my creativity flow with out me thinkin
have Joe screamin, but Michelle have yo body leakin when the K singin..
So you probably gotta lot of tension to let go, but no way to express it
that's why Joe B a fag, catch him in a wig w.high heels on.. tryna a dress it
I'd troll this billy goat all day, but he'd Hardy walk across that bridge
Hang his body over it... drop him... then Swanton Dive onto that nigga ribs!
and if you Irish just forget it now.. Ya luck aint far as the 4 leaf clover
I'll fold ya, boxer style like in ya sig, then slump yo ass w.yo body rollin over
I own dudes.. w.these half ass verses barely goin hard and I easily embody dude
and im not Daylyt, but Joe suck so good, im thinkin gay thoughts.. ALL 'cause of YOU!
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Your BitchCard has been exposed so one night with ur chick ill be inside her
She'll be snorting kilos ill just leave my whitesox behind like Esteban Loaiza
I'll fucking Choke you out until u turn several differents colors
Watch Malik your blood all over those clothes have it look like a scene from Newyork Undercover
vs
So you probably gotta lot of tension to let go, but no way to express it
that's why Joe B a fag, catch him in a wig w.high heels on.. tryna a dress it
PAUSE!!! Had the wtf face at Authentics last bar. Anyway, Auths misdirections need a little work. nothing landed creative. almost statementish. Joe had a few good flips but the rest were butchered. even the ones quoted need a little help but still dropped some decent hits.
v. joe
Bump
bump
Seems like I could take you both down 2-1... Y'all ain't heavy, Not even pieces of weight/ Teach you both ta be a man,
Probably haven't Never even Eatn a steak/ When you pee, ya gotta shake/ Don't be cheesy on ah date/Who the hell am I kidding,
They all grown up, for them its to late. ??;)
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Boston:
Veteran since 2003 theres not a mothefucker Joe Fear
Bars im gonna takes Cores Light cuz we all think hes equivalent to shitty beer
Not sure if I fully get this, is Authentic's name Corey? If so, not bad!
Could care less about your Hiatus here in the real world ur not labeled as Hard
Get on a Board n talk shit, in these streets shots have u spinning in the air like Red Gerard
Not bad
Your BitchCard has been exposed so one night with ur chick ill be inside her
She'll be snorting kilos ill just leave my whitesox behind like Esteban Loaiza
Nice try but found this a little reachy
In the home ur not a provider wife tells me ur beyond broke
I laugh how easy it is for to get her ass out for me, i can call u butt of the joke
Same as above, little bit of a reach, the concept is a little played out IMO
I'll fucking Choke you out until u turn several differents colors
Watch Malik your blood all over those clothes have it look like a scene from Newyork Undercover
This was the line of the battle IMO nice
Authentic:
Ima artist wit these bars.. my creativity flow with out me thinkin
have Joe screamin, but Michelle have yo body leakin when the K singin..
This was decent
So you probably gotta lot of tension to let go, but no way to express it
that's why Joe B a fag, catch him in a wig w.high heels on.. tryna a dress it
Best line for you IMO
I'd troll this billy goat all day, but he'd Hardy walk across that bridge
Hang his body over it... drop him... then Swanton Dive onto that nigga ribs!
Reach IMO
and if you Irish just forget it now.. Ya luck aint far as the 4 leaf clover
I'll fold ya, boxer style like in ya sig, then slump yo ass w.yo body rollin over
This was good
I own dudes.. w.these half ass verses barely goin hard and I easily embody dude
and im not Daylyt, but Joe suck so good, im thinkin gay thoughts.. ALL 'cause of YOU!
It's a no for me dawg
This was very close IMO, I think Joe Boston overall tried some fresher concepts and had the best line. Thats what edged it for me...good battle though!
Vote: Joe Boston.
2-0 uppin
Im not sure how AV vote add up, but... ok. Bump.. nonetheless.
2-0 Joe upppin for a few more votes.
hes equivalent to shitty beer
shots have u spinning in the air like Red Gerard
ill just leave my whitesox behind like Esteban Loaiza
Watch Malik your blood all over those clothes have it look like a scene from Newyork Undercover
not so sound like a broken record, cause ive told u this 1,000 times Joe but.... in a 5 bar battle u used "like" 3 times... learn to use metaphors, not similes...u compare 2 things in 3 of ya bars, so those 3 bars are essentially just mimicking each others set up...u also dropped 3 names, stop name dropping famous people, u do it in EVERY battle and its not creative.... good to see u back though...
VS
Ima artist wit these bars.. my creativity flow with out me thinkin
have Joe screamin, but Michelle have yo body leakin when the K singin..
(my shell/michelle aint the same)
So you probably gotta lot of tension to let go, but no way to express it
that's why Joe B a fag, catch him in a wig w.high heels on.. tryna a dress it
( decent here)
I'd troll this billy goat all day, but he'd Hardy walk across that bridge
Hang his body over it... drop him... then Swanton Dive onto that nigga ribs!
( filler...the troll/billy goat/hardy/dive...didn't work)
and if you Irish just forget it now.. Ya luck aint far as the 4 leaf clover
I'll fold ya, boxer style like in ya sig, then slump yo ass w.yo body rollin over
( filler)
I own dudes.. w.these half ass verses barely goin hard and I easily embody dude
and im not Daylyt, but Joe suck so good, im thinkin gay thoughts.. ALL 'cause of YOU!
( terrrrrrrrible)
shit....Joe u coulda won this I think, but u stick to a method that's not working..try switchin some shit up, try writing bars and avoiding using the word " like" or referencing a famous person or event... if u find it difficult to do, then u know ur style is predictable and repetitive...
Authentic,, u barely got a win here and that's cause Joe is stubborn,..chill with the gay bar at the end though... I had to Pause the whole vote after that bar,,,
V- AUthentic
2-1 lets get more votes on this
Veteran since 2003 theres not a mothefucker Joe Fear
Bars im gonna takes Cores Light cuz we all think hes equivalent to shitty beer
decent opener
Could care less about your Hiatus here in the real world ur not labeled as Hard
Get on a Board n talk shit, in these streets shots have u spinning in the air like Red Gerard
meh, okay
Your BitchCard has been exposed so one night with ur chick ill be inside her
She'll be snorting kilos ill just leave my whitesox behind like Esteban Loaiza
Nice
In the home ur not a provider wife tells me ur beyond broke
I laugh how easy it is for to get her ass out for me, i can call u butt of the joke
nice
I'll fucking Choke you out until u turn several differents colors
Watch Malik your blood all over those clothes have it look like a scene from Newyork Undercover
dope closer
Authentic:
Ima artist wit these bars.. my creativity flow with out me thinkin
have Joe screamin, but Michelle have yo body leakin when the K singin..
decent opener
So you probably gotta lot of tension to let go, but no way to express it
that's why Joe B a fag, catch him in a wig w.high heels on.. tryna a dress it
dope
I'd troll this billy goat all day, but he'd Hardy walk across that bridge
Hang his body over it... drop him... then Swanton Dive onto that nigga ribs!
no
and if you Irish just forget it now.. Ya luck aint far as the 4 leaf clover
I'll fold ya, boxer style like in ya sig, then slump yo ass w.yo body rollin over
no
I own dudes.. w.these half ass verses barely goin hard and I easily embody dude
and im not Daylyt, but Joe suck so good, im thinkin gay thoughts.. ALL 'cause of YOU!
decent closer, could have been way better
overall very close battle , if authentic could have came alittle harder he would have had it , but as it stands right now
vote:joe
3-1 uppin