Enough Said

Enough Said
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4HNgVmHSuVM

HOOK

Thought we were on even playing ground
But in your truth betrayal I found
When I realized I was hit, I could hardly make a sound
A nod and a smile, knew that ride was gonna be a while
Truth be told, I treated everyone the same
Level’s to this shit, but humanity ain’t a game

HOOK

Act like I wasn’t your model 4 figures ago
But on this fake shit, just thought you should know
Now you gonna make me show you, just how I do
Make you just another ex, my IOU
With a regret they pray to forget
Whether they admit it or not
All them regret fucking up their shot

HOOK
DRAKE
HOOK

For once I wish someone would notice my worth through my mask
Cause when I’m on top I’m way too cocky for the task
Don’t got time for the bullshit, sick of kissing frogs in hope of my prince
My king may be shakey, if he meet me rocky, and like it’s been all good ever since
Once again the true I thought I found came back negative
I don’t know Jay… Can I live?
Live in an existence where they take me for better or worse
Regardless if it’s a gift I portray or a curse
See me for me, appreciate what I bring to the table
Besides my wealth, but to find lesson in my fable
See where I have grown, a king, to share my thrown
20 years, and only one I found worthy to call my babies dad
Running um in, running um out, like tricking was a fad
But really, it ain’t all that bad
But really kinda sad
Can you talk to me, before I see?
Fuck that… I’m done – time to get back to me, the true me.
A cute ass motherfucking Barbie, no longer soft for them eyes that be killing me.


Me... 2.5 years prior to my pursuit!!!

http://i.imgur.com/SmGxfTMl.jpg

Fuck it though... back to cardio in the AM, ain't found none of them worthy yet!!! So Yeah, back to being up for 3 days like Jo Jo

I was feeling this one more then your usual stuff.. I'll drop more appropriate feed at a later time when I don't feel lazy tho.

I hear you... I'm dreading my links too but I'm gonna do it...

btw I never read your hooks.. not because they are bad, just because hooks are more meant to be heard in audio and usually flow different compared to the rest of the verse. You also tend to do a lot of repeated lines for your hooks.

Cool so I will PM u my feed on this no need to turn ur thread into a chat.

@Wordz ahgod nah you see, I write to the beat, the hook referenced is original hook within the beat (like a read a long) TRY IT, just listen and read ONE TIME LMAO

@The Great Father - Please delete

One link: http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...he-Death-of-Me
Two link: http://rapbattles.com/forum/forumdisplay.php?5-Open-Mic

I actually enjoyed this Cla. It was your typical style but the emotion was more evident for me. Theres obviously a lot of regret and hurt and a resounding feeling of "wishing it had of gone right the first time" I can relate to this. Had some nice metaphors in there, like the 4 figures ago line i liked that. Nice use of sleight of pen. Towards the end you wrote of being wiser for your mistakes and not going back to your old ways. I dug it, sincerely.

Thank you @Truth Iscariot

I don't use the word cocky...

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My pursuit of what bitch?

Where is the one I did to Chris Brown that started "Remember when we said"

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And when I say sould I meant dating Anthony cause I didn't realize they were just witches, I thought it was the devil himself.

I only read half but it's mostly suspicious especially AM cardio... I used to go to the gym mostly at 6pm and I really do refuse to live confused and abused and clapping and kissing my hands too.

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Who you bitching and why? And who?

I actually enjoyed this Cla.

It was your typical style but the emotion was more evident for me.

Theres obviously a lot of regret and hurt and a resounding feeling of "wishing it had of gone right the first time"

I can relate to this.

Had some nice metaphors in there, like the 4 figures ago line i liked that.

Nice use of sleight of pen.

Towards the end you wrote of being wiser for your mistakes and not going back to your old ways.

I dug it, sincerely.
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@sophiebrayden6 Thank you so much, that means a lot. And yes I was CLA919 too.

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I like to go back and re read my shit... it reminds me what I stand for... and nah I was a little offended but that's what I always wanted was an artist to perfect my ish and use it. This song reminds me of my angel - someone who is already dead but on my side.

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A cigarette and nod, I like your shirt, it's fun being white, wave - nah I didn't become that superficial I just wanted "us" "my family" "my creed" back. When I cry someone drops too and feels my pain... if it wasn't for this song - it was "Rise Up" when I truly knew you were there and finally fell the fuck out. Or the "Don't forget"... I can't be that bad if you're on my side and for me too. To be jealous is a compliment... it's like Smurfet in the movie - I just wanna be the best me and happy and baking cookies and shit. I'm tired of the drag. I'm tired of the fight, I'm tired of the evil. It's like never bang a bully back, I loved them all and I didn't need to see 'All of Me' or all of them - I used to see people for their best - now I have to learn not to tolerate them at their worst. Long story...