Two New Tracks, Will RTF

Hey, what's up. My buddy T-Higgz just did a couple free verse tracks the other day and I figured I would see what everybody thinks. Feel free to be as critical as possible because we know we need work!

Song 1: None Of Yall Better

Verse 1: T-Higgz
Verse 2: Deuce G
Verse 3: 1st 8 - Deuce G, 2nd 8 - T-Higgz

Song 2: Just Another Day

Verse 1: Deuce G
Verse 2: T-Higgz

Songs can be found here >> http://brootforce.site90.net

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first track has a hot beat, the flow is okay but its pretty simple, the delivery needs work, needs to be more enthusiastic and feel the vibe that the beat is giving off. the 2nd verse was hot, flow was down delivery was pretty good but felt in some parts words were a little rushed but not too bad. 3rd verse was the best i thought, flow stayed on point throughout.

" just a day " 1st verse, flow was more complex, delivery was better and rhymes were not too bad. 2nd verse pretty basic throughout

i liked the first track more overall. not bad drops

Thanks for the feed man. Yeah I'm Deuce G and I'm trying to teach T-Higgz to get better. We have only been working together for a few weeks so we will gel more soon. He is a little cocky though so he thought he had better drops than me and doesn't believe that I came better haha. I'll let him know what ya said, which is basically what I've told him all along. Yeah, some of my lines got rushed because i wrote my parts in 15 mins without rehearsing before recording because he has some verses already written that he wanted to lay down so it wasn't perfected. I may go back and fix them soon.

If you eva wanna collab or anything, hit me up!

haha he will learn sooner or later, and yeah i usually record right after i write too cause the energy is there but yeah man ill deff hit you up in the near future for a collab

I was definitely feeling the 2 years the best!

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Originally Posted by 7ElevenBeats

I was definitely feeling the 2 years the best!

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Thanks man. I kinda messsed on up it but I was in a hurry to get it done that day so I might go back and re-record it to fix the mistakes. I appreciate the listen!