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Rules:
Due: September 8th, 2011.
No Show = One Year Ban
30 Lines, no more no less.
Both opponents must compliment Token in check ins or will be banned for 15 seconds.
Good Luck.. and may the winner be declared almost as good as Token
Extended to September 12th
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token is pretty!
token has cool usertitles.
thats it, thats all i got for you. lmao
Verse edited out and sent to token.
double
rofl
yall clowns kill me
none of ur lines is deadly, so dont try n disrespect me
its funny i got better wording then u, n i cant even type it correctly
i heard your fat as fuck, so laugh it up, but lose some weight
if ur tnl's lead off batter, its only cuz u use that on all the food u make
cats dont fuck with u faggot, n homeys? u dont got many
f we ever profile ur friends, its cuz thats the only place u got any
n ive bodied u four times, it was nothing to eat dude
if your pleading the fifth, its just u on aim sayin i shoulda been dq'd
nothin u draft is godly, plus u have a habit of actin oddly
ur so gay if u had a straight jacket, itd scream "get this faggot off me"
ur not a fuckin vet, ur fatass gets stuffed n swept
so its funny ills over the tourney, n still isnt half way past ur stomach yet
n fuck how fake ur acting, or how many times u have dreams
it doesnt matter what color u make ur username, ull never be a black king
your moms like sex wit pigs, shes such a mess n big
if we ever seen that bitch cut, hopefully itd be across her neck n wrists
i show bitches fast cars, n there panties n face drops
when you show a bitch fast cars,its probably on aim linkin her to aesop
you aint packing heat, "smokin yall" is whack n weak
the only thing ur posts got in common wit ur usertitle, is ther both lackin a G
ur caught in confusion ,poker n foods gon be this fuckers death
cuz anytime the chips is up,u dont know whether to eat em or place another bet
in the ring my fists is rugged, im known to leave u ripped n busted
the last time you tried to sun god, u got killed like apollo did by the russian
n no chics gon let u smash dude, they think ur trash to
you aint seen a bitch on the matress king, since u caught ur mom fuckin that dude
n we all think ur a whack cat, u run wit newbies u cant mask that
so congrats on champing something ten times, that every other champ laughs at
im better at text, modding, ur unknown n respected less
so if we ever seen a king tut, all itd teach us is how to be second best
Quote:
Originally Posted by Gow in FL Mag Last year
Quote:
Originally Posted by Gow in LLL mag
Quote:
Originally Posted by Gow in Gauntlet chat
You went from garbage to elite, then back to garbage in a year
N I'd say get off my dick but thats been the one consistant part of your career
His love life's a State of Disaster, theres 0 chicks on this guys team
Only time gow caught a bitch's eye's when Florida was in the middle of Irene
Women love my confidence n thats why you'll always be single, man
I'm proud cuz I stack chips, he's proud cuz he can deepthroat a Pringles can
He wont show his face cuz he'd get roasted a hundred times
We'll never see Warren SAP, but his shit wording shows he Rushes Lines
I'ma flame G. He'll still be smoking while me n his chick go out cruising
If you torch-ur opponents gow, its cuz its agonizing to hear you bitch about losing
I wanna speak some truth, cuz despite what cats believe commonly...
Gow does NOT use aim for votes...
...instead he sways for 15 minutes then asks em to vote honestly
He's one of the nerdiest kids, four-eyed faggot'll get murdered with hits
N While this bitch is working spreadsheets, I'll spread sheets while working his bitch
Ya text is an abomination, such a mismatch its almost wrong to face him
Cuz I'm destined for Legends, and he's destined to hate vote my nomination
N he cant close with women, if he ever had game you can tell its gone
Fuck getting a girl in the mood, he can't even turn spell check on
I'm pulling Cards, showing he's a gutless pussy n a hopeless square
Gow's seen as One of a Kind...cuz this coward never shows a pair
Recycling, biting, flipping...after all that you just should of quit
Cuz the shady shit that Gow pulls makes Brandons whole family look legit
Typical fake thug from the burbs, at least be a nerd with some pride
If 'Warsaw ghetto's aroud him, its cuz I'm 'bout to burn him alive
He says his girl's crazy for him n she falls apart if he walks outta the house
I could see her wither without him...but its way less awkward without
Gow'll use any concept, whether its stolen or fed to him secretly
He writes without prejudice, n struggles to type all words equally
The awards stopped coming in, time has diminished his punch
He just came in 2nd for Most Overrated, n that was his best finish in months
:RBman:
Breakdown
God of War
none of ur lines is deadly, so dont try n disrespect me
its funny i got better wording then u, n i cant even type it correctly
^Nothing special.
i heard your fat as fuck, so laugh it up, but lose some weight
if ur tnl's lead off batter, its only cuz u use that on all the food u make
^Okay.
cats dont fuck with u faggot, n homeys? u dont got many
f we ever profile ur friends, its cuz thats the only place u got any
^Well, your just throwin little jabs that are just barley clipping him.
n ive bodied u four times, it was nothing to eat dude
if your pleading the fifth, its just u on aim sayin i shoulda been dq'd
^Nah.. Again with a little jab.
nothin u draft is godly, plus u have a habit of actin oddly
ur so gay if u had a straight jacket, itd scream "get this faggot off me"
^Tight. I liked this. Finally hit em with a 'straight' that connected
ur not a fuckin vet, ur fatass gets stuffed n swept
so its funny ills over the tourney, n still isnt half way past ur stomach yet
^"ills ove the tourney" - I don't overstand so I can't hold this against you.
n fuck how fake ur acting, or how many times u have dreams
it doesnt matter what color u make ur username, ull never be a black king
^Okay.. a jab.
your moms like sex wit pigs, shes such a mess n big
if we ever seen that bitch cut, hopefully itd be across her neck n wrists
^Damn. That's a violent, fucked up thing to say about someones mom. Wordplay on 'cut' was alright. Not that clever. Kinda like a head bump if this were a boxing match.
i show bitches fast cars, n there panties n face drops
when you show a bitch fast cars,its probably on aim linkin her to aesop
^Not feeling this.
you aint packing heat, "smokin yall" is whack n weak
the only thing ur posts got in common wit ur usertitle, is ther both lackin a G
^Nice hit. Another punch connected.
ur caught in confusion ,poker n foods gon be this fuckers death
cuz anytime the chips is up,u dont know whether to eat em or place another bet
^Played concept that has been flipped to hell in the past.
in the ring my fists is rugged, im known to leave u ripped n busted
the last time you tried to sun god, u got killed like apollo did by the russian
^Aight. Little self glory here, like a dance move mocking the opponent. Prematurely though, so it's not that affective.
n no chics gon let u smash dude, they think ur trash to
you aint seen a bitch on the matress king, since u caught ur mom fuckin that dude
^Uh... this concept could have worked way better if you had a different approach. But you just grazed him with this.
n we all think ur a whack cat, u run wit newbies u cant mask that
so congrats on champing something ten times, that every other champ laughs at
^Okay. little jab at the three second mark.
im better at text, modding, ur unknown n respected less
so if we ever seen a king tut, all itd teach us is how to be second best
^Ugh. Weak closer.
VS.
King
You went from garbage to elite, then back to garbage in a year
N I'd say get off my dick but thats been the one consistant part of your career
^Alright good start.
His love life's a State of Disaster, theres 0 chicks on this guys team
Only time gow caught a bitch's eye's when Florida was in the middle of Irene
^Eh.
Women love my confidence n thats why you'll always be single, man
I'm proud cuz I stack chips, he's proud cuz he can deepthroat a Pringles can
^Okay. Just a jab.
He wont show his face cuz he'd get roasted a hundred times
We'll never see Warren SAP, but his shit wording shows he Rushes Lines
^I'm not sure how Warren SAP relates to him. But the 'rushing lines' concept is okay
I'ma flame G. He'll still be smoking while me n his chick go out cruising
If you torch-ur opponents gow, its cuz its agonizing to hear you bitch about losing
^Alright. Another jab.
I wanna speak some truth, cuz despite what cats believe commonly...
Gow does NOT use aim for votes...
...instead he sways for 15 minutes then asks em to vote honestly
^Really extended set up that lost its flow because of the lack of multiple rhyming words. Good attempt at a personal but it fails because of wording problems.
He's one of the nerdiest kids, four-eyed faggot'll get murdered with hits
N While this bitch is working spreadsheets, I'll spread sheets while working his bitch
^Okay. You threw another jab.
Ya text is an abomination, such a mismatch its almost wrong to face him
Cuz I'm destined for Legends, and he's destined to hate vote my nomination
^Kinda funny. This one counts.
N he cant close with women, if he ever had game you can tell its gone
Fuck getting a girl in the mood, he can't even turn spell check on
^Eh. Not affective.
I'm pulling Cards, showing he's a gutless pussy n a hopeless square
Gow's seen as One of a Kind...cuz this coward never shows a pair
^Uh, barley grazing him with this line
Recycling, biting, flipping...after all that you just should of quit
Cuz the shady shit that Gow pulls makes Brandons whole family look legit
^I don't know who Brandon is so I can't hold this against you.
Typical fake thug from the burbs, at least be a nerd with some pride
If 'Warsaw ghetto's aroud him, its cuz I'm 'bout to burn him alive
^Yo, you just made me look up the words "Warsaw ghetto' so I can overstand this line. It was a pretty fucked up place in Germany a long time ago. But besides that, this nameplay line was just 'okay'.
He says his girl's crazy for him n she falls apart if he walks outta the house
I could see her wither without him...but its way less awkward without
^This is not bad.
Gow'll use any concept, whether its stolen or fed to him secretly
He writes without prejudice, n struggles to type all words equally
^Eh
The awards stopped coming in, time has diminished his punch
He just came in 2nd for Most Overrated, n that was his best finish in months
^alright...
Bottom Line
So this was close. After I broke down the verses I had to read them again. My conclusion is that I liked Kings verse and I leaned toward King on this battle because he only needed ONE haymaker in place of one of his missed punches to take over this battle. But ultimately it came down to my two favorite bars in the battle. Which were; usertitle/lacking a G, and Straight Jacket/faggot off me. Both came from God of War... So thats who I vote for.
Vote: God of War
vote god of war
I cant be fucked breaking all those lines down
lol. Yeah the verses shoulda been shorter. Damn, that was 30 lines a piece. But I had just smoked some krypti-chronic-kutta-like weed.. And me being high while reading causes me to over analyze shit sometimes. I don't even know how long that took to break down lol...
none of ur lines is deadly, so dont try n disrespect me
its funny i got better wording then u, n i cant even type it correctly
good opener
i heard your fat as fuck, so laugh it up, but lose some weight
if ur tnl's lead off batter, its only cuz u use that on all the food u make
eh...
cats dont fuck with u faggot, n homeys? u dont got many
f we ever profile ur friends, its cuz thats the only place u got any
lol... cool
n ive bodied u four times, it was nothing to eat dude
if your pleading the fifth, its just u on aim sayin i shoulda been dq'd
ok
nothin u draft is godly, plus u have a habit of actin oddly
ur so gay if u had a straight jacket, itd scream "get this faggot off me"
rofl... good one!
ur not a fuckin vet, ur fatass gets stuffed n swept
so its funny ills over the tourney, n still isnt half way past ur stomach yet
personal I'm missing, I guess...
n fuck how fake ur acting, or how many times u have dreams
it doesnt matter what color u make ur username, ull never be a black king
ok
your moms like sex wit pigs, shes such a mess n big
if we ever seen that bitch cut, hopefully itd be across her neck n wrists
cool
i show bitches fast cars, n there panties n face drops
when you show a bitch fast cars,its probably on aim linkin her to aesop
decent
you aint packing heat, "smokin yall" is whack n weak
the only thing ur posts got in common wit ur usertitle, is ther both lackin a G
cool
ur caught in confusion ,poker n foods gon be this fuckers death
cuz anytime the chips is up,u dont know whether to eat em or place another bet
lol...
in the ring my fists is rugged, im known to leave u ripped n busted
the last time you tried to sun god, u got killed like apollo did by the russian
nice
n no chics gon let u smash dude, they think ur trash to
you aint seen a bitch on the matress king, since u caught ur mom fuckin that dude
lmao... I liked this!
n we all think ur a whack cat, u run wit newbies u cant mask that
so congrats on champing something ten times, that every other champ laughs at
nice
im better at text, modding, ur unknown n respected less
so if we ever seen a king tut, all itd teach us is how to be second best
kind of a reach, but ok...
vs.
You went from garbage to elite, then back to garbage in a year
N I'd say get off my dick but thats been the one consistant part of your career
lol... good opener
His love life's a State of Disaster, theres 0 chicks on this guys team
Only time gow caught a bitch's eye's when Florida was in the middle of Irene
decent
Women love my confidence n thats why you'll always be single, man
I'm proud cuz I stack chips, he's proud cuz he can deepthroat a Pringles can
roflmao... nice!
He wont show his face cuz he'd get roasted a hundred times
We'll never see Warren SAP, but his shit wording shows he Rushes Lines
ok
I'ma flame G. He'll still be smoking while me n his chick go out cruising
If you torch-ur opponents gow, its cuz its agonizing to hear you bitch about losing
decent
I wanna speak some truth, cuz despite what cats believe commonly...
Gow does NOT use aim for votes...
...instead he sways for 15 minutes then asks em to vote honestly
lmao... good hit
He's one of the nerdiest kids, four-eyed faggot'll get murdered with hits
N While this bitch is working spreadsheets, I'll spread sheets while working his bitch
cool
Ya text is an abomination, such a mismatch its almost wrong to face him
Cuz I'm destined for Legends, and he's destined to hate vote my nomination
lol... this was cool, too
N he cant close with women, if he ever had game you can tell its gone
Fuck getting a girl in the mood, he can't even turn spell check on
lol
I'm pulling Cards, showing he's a gutless pussy n a hopeless square
Gow's seen as One of a Kind...cuz this coward never shows a pair
pair/nuts been played... this was okish
Recycling, biting, flipping...after all that you just should of quit
Cuz the shady shit that Gow pulls makes Brandons whole family look legit
nice
Typical fake thug from the burbs, at least be a nerd with some pride
If 'Warsaw ghetto's aroud him, its cuz I'm 'bout to burn him alive
decent
He says his girl's crazy for him n she falls apart if he walks outta the house
I could see her wither without him...but its way less awkward without
decent
Gow'll use any concept, whether its stolen or fed to him secretly
He writes without prejudice, n struggles to type all words equally
lol
The awards stopped coming in, time has diminished his punch
He just came in 2nd for Most Overrated, n that was his best finish in months
cool
Fuck, this is close! Both of y'all had some nice hits, both had one good miss, the rest were decent... let me re-read. Smfh... can I call a tie?
King had a played concept that really stuck out, GoW's closer reached a bit and had that miss... that is really the only difference that I can see. So I gotta vote king for coming one bar better, I guess. I hate voting on close battles, but props to both for showing up on this!
vote- King
none of ur lines is deadly, so dont try n disrespect me
its funny i got better wording then u, n i cant even type it correctly
cats dont fuck with u faggot, n homeys? u dont got many
f we ever profile ur friends, its cuz thats the only place u got any
nothin u draft is godly, plus u have a habit of actin oddly
ur so gay if u had a straight jacket, itd scream "get this faggot off me"
ur caught in confusion ,poker n foods gon be this fuckers death
cuz anytime the chips is up,u dont know whether to eat em or place another bet
n no chics gon let u smash dude, they think ur trash to
you aint seen a bitch on the matress king, since u caught ur mom fuckin that dude
n we all think ur a whack cat, u run wit newbies u cant mask that
so congrats on champing something ten times, that every other champ laughs at
vs.
You went from garbage to elite, then back to garbage in a year
N I'd say get off my dick but thats been the one consistant part of your career
He wont show his face cuz he'd get roasted a hundred times
We'll never see Warren SAP, but his shit wording shows he Rushes Lines
I'ma flame G. He'll still be smoking while me n his chick go out cruising
If you torch-ur opponents gow, its cuz its agonizing to hear you bitch about losing
He's one of the nerdiest kids, four-eyed faggot'll get murdered with hits
N While this bitch is working spreadsheets, I'll spread sheets while working his bitch
I'm pulling Cards, showing he's a gutless pussy n a hopeless square
Gow's seen as One of a Kind...cuz this coward never shows a pair
Recycling, biting, flipping...after all that you just should of quit
Cuz the shady shit that Gow pulls makes Brandons whole family look legit
Close battle.
I've been reading this over and over for about 20 mins making sure I get it right.
GOW you can with the usual gow quality stuff didn't really step out of your comfort zone too much. Same style and blueprint to your verse. I quoted those lines because to me they were the ones that hit with it's all. In other words the whole bar was good setup was proper, wording was good, sting was there. I didn't like too much of the first half but you got it going nicely in the second half. Impressive amount of hits considering it is a 30 liner. Some lines seemed like so many you've done before. You made them hit though i can't lie.
King You had an impressive amount of continuous hits. I really enjoyed your delivery in this battle. Your quotes were more of just hard hitting, some had wording issues in the set ups but all in all you had a consistent verse. To me though you used things from aim and other quotes. But you didn't use them to be the main most powerful part of your verse, when I use them i like them to be a reallly hard punch or else i just leave them out.
I am voting as fair as possible. So I hope King doesn't think this is a hate vote.
My vote is for GOW On the basis that he had no quotes or aim convos, yet was able to deliver as many quotes out of a 30 line battle. I think that takes very good writting ability, when it comes to punches atleast. This isn't close at all but i feel kings advantage wasn't taken correctly.
V/gow.
v/ GOW
Dude be killing the mid-tier on the reg niggaaaaaaaa
4-1 gow
Token you can close this. Good shit gow.
gow wins