Week 11: basic m (1-1) vs. Unfukwitable (5-4)

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@basic m @Unfukwitable

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Extension granted if be posts tomorrow. I'll drop my verse as well

@unfulwitable

Yo i can post tonigt forgot bout dude

@basic m @Unfukwitable verses due tonight.

He aint showin

Unfukwitable aka GR8

Quote:

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I got locked up... u tryna take a n/s or face these bars

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You took a L last week, history’ll repeat when im letting the cans go.
I’ll have my shooters wet ya top for cheap until ur cooked…Maruchan Bowl.
You were locked up against art and last week you were stomped.
Congrats, you’re the first i’ve seen put behind bars twice in 1 month.
My instruments of death? If its pulled u’ll be floored n buzzin.
The glockenspiel ur brains easy, it hits harder than that keyboard percussion.
Your bitch slobbed my crew, she loves domin us up cuz she’s a savage.
It makes sense she’s a necromancer, my whole team said her head was magic. @Barcotic put the smackdown on you, anybody thats barrin’ out stops em.
When legends go 1 on 1 w/ the Gr8 one, it usually leaves em rock bottom.
I fight dirty n aim to injure, its all fun until you hear the mack pop.
Beating me? Fag stop. When i spray it ur spinal tap from several back shots.

@basic m wins, open for feed

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Originally Posted by basic m

Unfukwitable aka GR8



You took a L last week, history’ll repeat when im letting the cans go.
I’ll have my shooters wet ya top for cheap until ur cooked…Maruchan Bowl.

☆☆☆☆☆

You were locked up against art and last week you were stomped.
Congrats, you’re the first i’ve seen put behind bars twice in 1 month.

☆☆☆☆☆

My instruments of death? If its pulled u’ll be floored n buzzin.
The glockenspiel ur brains easy, it hits harder than that keyboard percussion.

☆☆☆☆☆ i've seen the wordplay before but i enjoyed the flip

Your bitch slobbed my crew, she loves domin us up cuz she’s a savage.
It makes sense she’s a necromancer, my whole team said her head was magic.

☆☆☆☆☆

@Barcotic put the smackdown on you, anybody thats barrin’ out stops em.
When legends go 1 on 1 w/ the Gr8 one, it usually leaves em rock bottom.

☆ i've seen way too many the rock/rock bottom punches

I fight dirty n aim to injure, its all fun until you hear the mack pop.
Beating me? Fag stop. When i spray it ur spinal tap from several back shots.

☆☆☆

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Those first 4 bars were nuts. Trailed off at the end but this was a pretty mint verse.

You were locked up against art and last week you were stomped.
Congrats, you’re the first i’ve seen put behind bars twice in 1 month.
My instruments of death? If its pulled u’ll be floored n buzzin.
The glockenspiel ur brains easy, it hits harder than that keyboard percussion.
kinda forced.. but i fuck wit it.
Your bitch slobbed my crew, she loves domin us up cuz she’s a savage.
It makes sense she’s a necromancer, my whole team said her head was magic.
I like that concept.. might have to use that, cuz!
I fight dirty n aim to injure, its all fun until you hear the mack pop.
Beating me? Fag stop. When i spray it ur spinal tap from several back shots.


Verse aint bad.. Never read into much ya verses, but i fuck wit it. I like the necromancer line...

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Up.

glockenspiel & necromancer were both cool wps

not sure if the verse would've been enough beat unfuk tho

You took a L last week, history’ll repeat when im letting the cans go.
I’ll have my shooters wet ya top for cheap until ur cooked…Maruchan Bowl.
You were locked up against art and last week you were stomped.
Congrats, you’re the first i’ve seen put behind bars twice in 1 month.
the smackdown on you, anybody thats barrin’ out stops em.
When legends go 1 on 1 w/ the Gr8 one, it usually leaves em rock bottom.


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Liked these bars

First 4 Barz were nice.. gr8 was ehh n closer was decent.. overall solid verse