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I'm ready when you are.. don't try and extend past today
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You’re just as trash as him, but your bias got u thinkin u deserve cloutQuote:
Originally Posted by Fresh
But the fact you hate Jem.. has nothing to do with why your concepts never work out
He got PTSD from last time. You’ll be droppin tears if this hoe try me
But even after I make you cryotherapy sessions won’t heal you from this cold body
My gang would rush u for talking street. We woulda killed this kid quick
& You could try to stall, but the situation that urinal prove that you’re not built for this shit
It was fight or flight.. Fresh thought about it with a nervous little twitch
He took a moment & wade his options.. then we all watched as son turned into a bitch
You just a skinny, bird chest bitch. I don’t need to kill em
But if I have fifteen sent to this brittle kid, he might get sponsored by Feed the Children
He bothered me til I found his crib. Prepared to torture him til he‘s begging me to let up
I caught him in a dark room.. & well he finally got the picture once something negative developed
Fresh verse
Quote:
Originally Posted by Freshur bars are cheap n outdated... we all got low expectations
got that cinder block motel style.. people vote against you with no reservations
youve tried to shrug off past losses but history repeats, kid
when it comes to bitch shit ur a model.. but no way you'll keep this Victoria's Secret
u spineless fuck, i bet you KNOW u're a hack
carry weight? nah ur destined to fail.. guess you built your hopes off ya back
bro its a fact, you'll never get intimate with ya baeQuote:
Originally Posted by Amen talking about Letterman's nose
every time she try to look u in the eyes your nose just gets in the way
ur bitch writes letters that won't say what ur heart might
you'll read em and weep.. You never really did play your cards right
women don't like broke fucks, ur sex life is in danger
If you ever pull dimes I guarantee it's from the kindness of strangers
@Kill Spree @plethora @Blue Bayou @JEM. @Joe Boston @Barcotic @BraGGin Rights @Bahriman @Bash @slecht @Stranger @Exalted. @Echelon @King @GrimmReaperZ @Cookie s @Chemist @Networth @Meth @-Coop-
He got PTSD from last time. You’ll be droppin tears if this hoe try me
But even after I make you cryotherapy sessions won’t heal you from this cold body
My gang would rush u for talking street. We woulda killed this kid quick
& You could try to stall, but the situation that urinal prove that you’re not built for this shit
It was fight or flight.. Fresh thought about it with a nervous little twitch
He took a moment & wade his options.. then we all watched as son turned into a bitch
He bothered me til I found his crib. Prepared to torture him til he‘s begging me to let up
I caught him in a dark room.. & well he finally got the picture once something negative developed
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youve tried to shrug off past losses but history repeats, kid
when it comes to bitch shit ur a model.. but no way you'll keep this Victoria's Secret
ur bitch writes letters that won't say what ur heart might
you'll read em and weep.. You never really did play your cards right
felt like ones verse was more piercing to his opponent and had 2 bars a i felt was potent.. felt like the other was rappin cool but it wasnt that finals typa verse from him i think the VS bar is up in the air maybe a set up couldve helped it really be a haymaker or the way im imagining how u couldve spun the bar but props to both.. hopefully things can get more active here this read got me wanting to jump in a spar with someone... v/ Letterman
Cryotherapy bar
Urinal bar
Wade bar
Vs.
Victoria secret bar
You both still suck complete ass I see. But this looks like it needs a vote. I'll vote the letter guy because his content was hitting harder to me. Seriously though fresh u got better than what I remembered but letter just had a better verse
You're a retardQuote:
Originally Posted by Smash
Cryo was cool...
Urine line felt done before but came off fresh with the flip
Wade line was good n fresh
Dark room line was mild..came off little corny
Vs
VS line
Cards right
V. Letterman ..he had the stronger verse here..more quoteables n his misses weren't as bad as fresh.. fresh came ok..but dropped the ball on slot of his verse