Wak

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psalm
the verses of these herbs are interllectic, and all equal death name brand like ''stussy''~
these kids crack me up, hey johnny pull ur pig in the blanket dick outta 'djb's pussy~
lay ur faces on concrete, so the white blanket can over peal after~
bless the vengance so wack waste of human spots so u'll feel the pig blood like 'carrie' in the rafter~
i told these bitches to fantasize so they chased there non-existing dreams~
they worse the mercanary with 1st grade rhyme schemes~
as i listin to there lyrics its sounds wack with a plus beat~
hey ''i smell pussy'' is that u 6 feet?~
no maybe its djb with his hot sticky dischage oozin depleeted with heat~
watch as they get arsed a full mouth as they revieve negative feed n' votes~
hit n' run is bullshit, now everyone will follow us as we piss on ur words and quotes

Def
I know i pledged to try and keep my cool,
but hit n run couldn't get ass from a mule,
Now let's define the meanin of a hit n run,
1 it's the reason for all the support in a chld support fund,
2 it's the reason men turn cross gender,
They like a cross between a fruitcake and juice in a blender,
Trisixual, they'll try anything twice,
Y u think Psyk and 6 feet turned dyke,
And word and djb both turned inta tranny,
butt fuckin each otha to rash each other's fanny,
Traded they boxers in or a purple set of panties,
And a green sig that labels em all as cowards,
And lose more votes than president Eisenhower,
After they get a battle they talk smack and act tuff,
Makin disses on peole less understandable than Kenny's *muff*,
They squad about ta get crushed and none of em see it comin,
prolly cuz they too busy tuckin they tail and runnin,
Thinkin they gettin cunnin but really the gettin stupid,
Droppin they 'shit' anywhere like wild animals poopin,
i think it's time they regrouped and came wit a betta concept,
Cuz ya shit ain't workin like given a name wit a bomb threat,
calm Def slow down and give yaself a breather,
We all know that hit n runs effrots are less than meager,
Psalm could be tha preacher and all of y'all couldn't repent,
cuz the way that i see things now...all of y'all DEF bent.......

Y'all know what this iz......more comin soon 2....NEED I SAY MORE....

Hmm.. some alright shit...

Could work alot more overall - probably structure too. But otherwise, nice job.

ACTUALLY NOT BAD IM GONNA BE FAIR ON THIS........
PSALMS YOU HAD GREAT DIRECT ATTACKS BUT PUNCHLINES LAGGED AND YOU TRIED TO GET PERSONAL BUT LACKED THE UMPH THIS WASNT BAD AT ALL SO DONT GET ME WRONG.

DEF DIDNT DO AS GOOD BUT WASNT BAD HIS PUNCHES REALLY WERE DORMENT.
HIS INTENT AND STRUCTURE NEEDED SOME HELP PSALM I KNOW U A LIL AND I THINK YOU COULD HIT ALOT HARDER.

for a diss track this was good no disrespect and we beafen......but psalms this would be better as you solo and def you need to build to a more solid attack.

^^ word solid track boys... punches werent to complex but not stoopid. vocab was pretty good.im pissed off im only in there once you dont even have most of the crew in there TSK TSK TSK. but not to bad for a diss track. id say 7th psalm came the hardest but it wasmt that hard to be honest. oh by the way if you dont like what im saying you know where you can find me. aiight good work people one.

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I liked it I thought it was funny and advanced. And you reminded me of stuff too like balance and weigh. Like started school placed in Nursery, bounced up to kindergarten, I think I skipped first, missed most of 8th, left back in 9th, skipped 10th and graduated 6 months early right on time any way. And that be life too. There used to be a game called Oregon Trail which taught me young we all start with 100 it just depends on how its divied (portioned) out. And ironic I am the one running around getting mad cause I ain't bi either (rest his poor soul - eyes rolling) but anyways... In regards to threats and lighting mother fuckers up - oh and the hit and run concept. I had this chick that used to start with me all the time and run - so I beat her down on the police station lawn. THEN she pulls her kid that she left in the car after starting and driving like that - slamming on her breaks in the middle of the highway trying to get me to hit her. A bitch will be a bitch BUT THEN she does it again with kids in the car and I didn't notice until we were going 90 down a main road and a sippy cup flies out the window SO - theres two sides to every story which this reminded me of too - and anybody that throw and run just a pussy to me.