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im sparkin if ya crew keep talkin, end ya world, peasant
Shots go to midsection faster than abusive husbands hearing their girls pregnant
yappin in the chat n I’ll grab the gat, start duckin fast
If finger doesn’t wanna wrap it up, I’ll put his whole arm in a fukin cast
Ya prior bars a dyin hard, death is this lames fate
way boyznblack is banging Finger, its like a molestation turned gang rape
Dog im real, ya hoe cop a feel while you working late
you out there being proactive and im applying cream all over ya girls face
when I pull my peace, it wont be two fingers on my hand, son
What I wave in the air atcha face will make Kaepernick not wana stand up
...so many battles I'm exhausted really, yet I'll still off this silly
It's nonsense clearly, you work on the site but don't Post up packing heat it's like ya office chilly...
...as I type this shit, I'm thinking this guy should quit, his life's at risk
Cuz all it took was a little press on the Nos, to show this guy from AZ that life's a bitch...
...I don't KnowP, but he better moderate this bottle cuz this loss will def be damming his health
Cuz he couldn't get a win on finger if he was fanning himself...
...ahead of this jerk, kill him and confetti Disperse, every line just gets so deadly and worse
Almost clicked post but I'm over ready at first, he'll try to hide my forum post until he edits my verse...
...AI cross, there's no one that can hold me, gave em 60 shots on the way out, no overtime like Kobe
After this you'll hear em saying "you know he won" to knowP for bringing that light saber to a gunfight like Obi Wan l
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*Obi Wan Kenobi......
Got chopped off when I posted
0-0 all the way up
KnowP
Wrap it up was cool
Proactive old as fuck but the flip was cool liked the humor factor
Closer
Middlefinger
I felt u had to much filler in ur bars u gotta shorten the line length and get straight to point so ur bars have impact. Some of ur setup were more worded then ur finishers. Opener had potential but i felt overall the bar was overworded. Ur last 3 bars were very basic as a punch also.
V/P overall he was more consistent his bars i picked were displayedbetter. Middle has to work on being creatiive and reframe from forced multis.
I see a vote in the poll but no post? What kinda treachery is this?
Hmmm i thought votes were hiddenQuote:
Originally Posted by Middle Finger
im sparkin if ya crew keep talkin, end ya world, peasant
Shots go to midsection faster than abusive husbands hearing their girls pregnant
nice but the nameplay isn't all the way worked out right so 7/10
yappin in the chat n I’ll grab the gat, start duckin fast
If finger doesn’t wanna wrap it up, I’ll put his whole arm in a fukin cast
decent concept. The set up doesn't incorperate with the set up tho. Are you gonna shoot his arm in a cast? 6/10
Ya prior bars a dyin hard, death is this lames fate
way boyznblack is banging Finger, its like a molestation turned gang rape
eh, this may be a little TOO gay lol 5/10
Dog im real, ya hoe cop a feel while you working late
you out there being proactive and im applying cream all over ya girls face
decent but very indirect 5/10
when I pull my peace, it wont be two fingers on my hand, son
What I wave in the air atcha face will make Kaepernick not wana stand up
again not direct at all and too much gun talk here 5/10
vs
...so many battles I'm exhausted really, yet I'll still off this silly
It's nonsense clearly, you work on the site but don't Post up packing heat it's like ya office chilly...
naw, this didn't hit bro. And all around miss. 4/10
...as I type this shit, I'm thinking this guy should quit, his life's at risk
Cuz all it took was a little press on the Nos, to show this guy from AZ that life's a bitch...
I don't think this worked out either. The concept was there tho. 5/10
...I don't KnowP, but he better moderate this bottle cuz this loss will def be damming his health
Cuz he couldn't get a win on finger if he was fanning himself...
decent. But since finger is singular, it doesn't make full sense. I've never seen nobody fan themself with one finger. lol 5/10
...ahead of this jerk, kill him and confetti Disperse, every line just gets so deadly and worse
Almost clicked post but I'm over ready at first, he'll try to hide my forum post until he edits my verse...
/Lol. This was kinda funny but not hard hittong. 5/10
...AI cross, there's no one that can hold me, gave em 60 shots on the way out, no overtime like Kobe
After this you'll hear em saying "you know he won" to knowP for bringing that light saber to a gunfight like Obi Wan l
eh. sorry bro just not feeling this concept all the way around. 4/10
28/50
23/50
Well Knowp had some misses but he edged it with consistency.
im sparkin if ya crew keep talkin, end ya world, peasant
Shots go to midsection faster than abusive husbands hearing their girls pregnant
yappin in the chat n I’ll grab the gat, start duckin fast
If finger doesn’t wanna wrap it up, I’ll put his whole arm in a fukin cast
Dog im real, ya hoe cop a feel while you working late
you out there being proactive and im applying cream all over ya girls face
vs
...as I type this shit, I'm thinking this guy should quit, his life's at risk
Cuz all it took was a little press on the Nos, to show this guy from AZ that life's a bitch...
...I don't KnowP, but he better moderate this bottle cuz this loss will def be damming his health
Cuz he couldn't get a win on finger if he was fanning himself...
...ahead of this jerk, kill him and confetti Disperse, every line just gets so deadly and worse
Almost clicked post but I'm over ready at first, he'll try to hide my forum post until he edits my verse...
This was a toss up for me... had to hit the loud a few times... I was gone say a tie, but I think Middle F. got this because he used personals. Used ya name a bit and those hit. He also made that last hit on the you trying to edit his verse.. lol I know mods like that.............
Win on finger / fanning ur self
*vs*
Midsection
cast
Gang rape
Vote: kp
Reason: kp had a stronger verse wit more haymakers than mf.
@Klass u got to break down your vote man. come on.
...so many battles I'm exhausted really, yet I'll still off this silly
It's nonsense clearly, you work on the site but don't Post up packing heat it's like ya office chilly...
>>lite 1/5
...as I type this shit, I'm thinking this guy should quit, his life's at risk
Cuz all it took was a little press on the Nos, to show this guy from AZ that life's a bitch...
>>No 0/5
...I don't KnowP, but he better moderate this bottle cuz this loss will def be damming his health
Cuz he couldn't get a win on finger if he was fanning himself...
>>self hype but still cool 3/5
...ahead of this jerk, kill him and confetti Disperse, every line just gets so deadly and worse
Almost clicked post but I'm over ready at first, he'll try to hide my forum post until he edits my verse...
>>No 0/5
...AI cross, there's no one that can hold me, gave em 60 shots on the way out, no overtime like Kobe
After this you'll hear em saying "you know he won" to knowP for bringing that light saber to a gunfight like Obi Wan l
>>No 0/5
Total: 4/25
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im sparkin if ya crew keep talkin, end ya world, peasant
Shots go to midsection faster than abusive husbands hearing their girls pregnant
>>cool, good start 3/5
yappin in the chat n I’ll grab the gat, start duckin fast
If finger doesn’t wanna wrap it up, I’ll put his whole arm in a fukin cast
>>nice 3/5
Ya prior bars a dyin hard, death is this lames fate
way boyznblack is banging Finger, its like a molestation turned gang rape
>>haha 3/5
Dog im real, ya hoe cop a feel while you working late
you out there being proactive and im applying cream all over ya girls face
>>Lite 1/5
when I pull my peace, it wont be two fingers on my hand, son
What I wave in the air atcha face will make Kaepernick not wana stand up
>>No 0/5
Total: 10/25
Vote: kp
Overall this battle was 1sided, kp was more consistent wit harder hittin punches n haymakers. Good battle yall
knowp wins