Raw Mentality

I been, slept on & crept on my hearts Teflon I'm upper echelon
Even when I lack my best form thru a fresh storm, Razor just press on
Thru hard-times he perform see that's how success born
Satan rushed, I juke'd right then stiff arm'd his left horn
When approached with bull-shit I get ta Matodoring
I don't analyze the torment, to me the data is foreign
When shit fishy, I spots every fraud they try to lure-in
Sitting on horses in my ride w/ a stick, Ralph Lauren
Razor make the wrong choice they preparing a cell for em
So I think long-term guess I'm getting older maturing
Putting the hammer back & plus pushing the drawer in
Pick a hole in your cup of wrath when it starts pouring
You can't stop it, but you can prevent letting more in
I vacation thru trials, because in it I'm only touring
No matter were my body is my mind stay's soaring

Nice little piece here. Some parts read iffy due to the wording and punctuation but overall, I felt it.
That left hour line was vicious. Third line read was a bit awkward..

I fuck with the data line too.


7/10

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Left horn.

thanks for the feedback @slecht

I liked it I could relate a lot. It makes me want to have another outburst and start yelling at the people who do know again but what ever I'll sit here and shut up and just wait for everyone to catch up. (I'll put it on my own feed)