Just spittin

The trouble with writing is I never know where to start
Every line I write I tend to just pick it apart
Scribble and scratch it out, nah that wasnt sick enough
Try somewhere new and see if this is where to pick it up
Im sick as fuck, thats why im up at 6am spittin a verse
its a gift and curse, got all these cats splittin disperse
My mind is so diverse, but really whats the meaning
Wrinkle out all the flaws like pickin up a shirt from dry cleaning
All you other cats spit verses that get boos and nahs
Im trying to spit some fire to have the crowd in oo's and ahs
I got a plethora of lines thats why they call me surplus
Its worthless, all you garbage emcees aint got no purpose
Whole team thinks Im dope when im spit and write though
I roll with a bunch of killers and dealers straight up psycho
Fuck this internet shit, its a circus this shits a playground
Come around talking mess to my squad, nigga just lay down

I guess.. wow man dont know hmmm.... this need to be a story man.... it would have been better your looking right for mad ill bars quotable shit right and your in the open mic idk man not a whack idea tho7gh you just either had to direct it towards storyline or just use mad ill dope quotable shit in averse that wasnt really that good.... dont know man i liked it right i really liked it but what was it abput what was this writing shot about.... passing the time i guess...

This was pretty simple but effective. I don’t know if it’s like top tier genius level shit but ....does it need to be? Nah. Something that really bugs me about the last living rap forums around is that they are starting to be less rap and more spoken word type vibe(which is cool in its own right), just not what I’m after. This straight rap vibe and I dig that. No idea who you are but stay writing man.

Generally if it's a hype piece it's need to be more explosive. What was nice was the flow. Content was relatively simple. But for a quick flex not too bad. Dug this...

I got a plethora of lines thats why they call me surplus
Its worthless, all you garbage emcees aint got no purpose

Stay jotting fam