Write To This: Feb. 10th

FEBRUARY 10TH - FEBRUARY 17TH

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Bad pic for the first week back up...

possibly edit a verse in here.


Slowly sliding, slithering
While my health is withering
These chains confine me
All they do is deny me

Sitting here for all to see
Hanging, with not control
My movements?
They are not my own.

Blind to the others
No one sees the real me
Just the puppet I’ve become
Stuck inside this conundrum

How can I get out
What must I do
How can I do it
This I do not know.


Edit more in later... just a quick cypher style

With a tribal drum
heartbeat,
I asked you to
love me without
strings attached.
but I became
a raggedy puppet,
governed by you
and your
Ventriloquist antics.
If you leave me at a gig
I sniff your trail,
and find my way back home,
because I love you
with strings attached.

8 min. so w/e

Saved for my shit.

Saved.

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A show for you
-with only 1lt. of happiness

Picture a better timing;
for a taste of acidity.
Cause where I stand…
…is just lost time;
Running away from happiness.
-as I stay a slave
To you who all watch;
Though I am kind of shy…
…I can’t help but show you,
The new me and scars that smile.

I tried forgetting who I was;
But it didn’t help…
… Cause you all just kept staring.
My skin began to shiver;
Not cause I was nervous,
but because…
… my emotions felt too pervious.
-about you all staring
Can’t help but wonder,
Why I stay here strapped;
Someone can save me…
…it’s just I choose to be here.
-why?
I don’t know…
…but most times I feel good;
About me making you smile.
I guess it’s just too bad…
…that I can’t smile back.
I feel like this…
…right here, where I stand;
Is my punch drunk love.
Maybe the reason,
Behind the cries…
…is cause here;
Is the only time I see smiles.
-of enjoyment
So please don’t go yet;
At least let me remember,
Your faces…
…as I know you will all;
Forget Mine

Best of February 10th: Mr. Write!

Nice verse, probably would get some good reviews...

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