Lenny vs. Barcotic

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LLL SEASON XXl RULES!

verses due Saturday 11:59PST
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@Lenny

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Okay

Pussy ass niggas suck my dick you just made the WRONG move


Prepare

ur way passed ya prime dun, mike being a threat is up for serious question,
Cuz u'll never see a bar near me, even if siri opens google up with different suggestions.
ur slut got few qualities but the cooch tight, plus she know to call me papi.
So I'll be quick to take ur Busan, & run a train on that bitch till she looks like a fuckin zombie.
This Canadian fag be smokin cancer sticks to his massive dome, niggas swag be flavorless,
Shit... if I told him I be rollin with the leaves, he'd prolly start askin me who my favorite player is.
Ur way past ur prime.. I can name 5 rooks way better then this faggot is,
Better learn to live with ur demons, u been stuck in a slump longer then niggas with sleep paralysis.
Bitch I'm a beast.. ur bald and still got fleas..
Give ur bitch a doggy bone and watch her fall to her knees... LOL

Bumpin

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Originally Posted by Lenny

ur way passed ya prime dun, mike being a threat is up for serious question,
Cuz u'll never see a bar near me, even if siri opens google up with different suggestions.

☆☆☆☆☆

ur slut got few qualities but the cooch tight, plus she know to call me papi.
So I'll be quick to take ur Busan, & run a train on that bitch till she looks like a fuckin zombie.

☆☆☆☆☆ fire

This Canadian fag be smokin cancer sticks to his massive dome, niggas swag be flavorless,
Shit... if I told him I be rollin with the leaves, he'd prolly start askin me who my favorite player is.

☆☆☆☆☆

Ur way past ur prime.. I can name 5 rooks way better then this faggot is,
Better learn to live with ur demons, u been stuck in a slump longer then niggas with sleep paralysis.

☆☆☆☆☆

Bitch I'm a beast.. ur bald and still got fleas..
Give ur bitch a doggy bone and watch her fall to her knees... LOL

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4/5 bars were awesome. That "Train To Busan" bar was lotb to me. My only criticism is you're going to have to shorten the length of your bars. They're longwinded af. I know you extend them for impact purposes but you have to find a way to make them impact without taking too long to get there.

Thanks

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Originally Posted by Lenny

ur way passed ya prime dun, mike being a threat is up for serious question,
Cuz u'll never see a bar near me, even if siri opens google up with different suggestions.
ur slut got few qualities but the cooch tight, plus she know to call me papi.
So I'll be quick to take ur Busan, & run a train on that bitch till she looks like a fuckin zombie.
This Canadian fag be smokin cancer sticks to his massive dome, niggas swag be flavorless,
Shit... if I told him I be rollin with the leaves, he'd prolly start askin me who my favorite player is.
OPENER COULD HAVE BEEN WORDED HARSHER BUT THE NEXT TWO WERE TIGHT.
Ur way past ur prime.. I can name 5 rooks way better then this faggot is,
Better learn to live with ur demons, u been stuck in a slump longer then niggas with sleep paralysis.
Bitch I'm a beast.. ur bald and still got fleas..
Give ur bitch a doggy bone and watch her fall to her knees... LOL
PARALYSIS COULD OF BEEN BETTER, CLOSER WAS A THROWAWAY

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Needs feed.

Opener was meh, could've been worded better,
Bus an a bit of a reach but otherwise good,
3rd bar was okay
4th had potential badly executed
5th fuck no