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1w bars is fine... Need a 24 hour extension.... Won't be able to get much done tomorrow
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Originally Posted by Boyznblack voted for plethora in all of his battles from the moment he signed into the league, except for plethora's NS battles and the finals
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Originally Posted by Boyznblack talking about how he's knowledgable of theft and how to get away with it
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Originally Posted by Boyznblack suggesting he's a licensed black market guru distributor
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Originally Posted by Boyznblack doubles down on being a professional thief
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Originally Posted by Boyznblack saying Notti should be DQ'ed/Banned for flipping a concept
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Originally Posted by Notti giving Boyznblack his home addy so he could beat the shit out of him
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Originally Posted by Boyznblack switches from gunbar net gangster to anti-gunbar net gangster pacifist after Notti gives him his home addy
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Originally Posted by Boyznblack gets exposed for being a biter
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Originally Posted by Boyznblack acts all innocent and denies biting it, even tho he's a smack fanboy
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Originally Posted by Boyznblack no shows a noob after accepting the battle, reading his verse, and shitting himself
networth can't help u, take a load off ur cuties dickQuote:
Originally Posted by Boyznblack loses GBL finals against Klass and Plethora, Klass had 3 votes, Plethora had 5 votes, Boyznblack had 0 votes
want to see a dense sloth rescue boyz?, then go watch the goonies flick
u ns'ed dzaster, u was prolly laden with mad stress
frontlines hasn't seen a no show that bad since notti gave u his address
guy wanted to scrap, we noticed u switch ur gears
notti had a point when he punctum and left this emotional bitch in tears
u HYPOCRITE. fuck what a blunted fraud demand
flipped a played angle while U actually BIT and U wanted NOTTI banned
denied u bit charlie? #facts: ur a scandalous bitch
cuz u told us u hustle stolen property, then u jacked ur ammo from clips
i'm rofl @ the gbl finals tho, it's sad u think ur dope
mentioned u were proficient at larceny, wtf? u couldn't nab a single vote
saw u lobby for pleth, u throb when he frolics about
dawg all of us tossed our cookies after u gobbled his bahlsen ur mouth
screw ur gunflips, the lies u droppin get wild poser
cuz u wouldn't see boyz with AK-47's, if he was a somalian child soldier
allen knight clowned u, black's response? go silent
if u try to approach this guerilla with choppers?, that's kong: skull island
broke flaunt that ryu swag, ur decrepit/petite/light
shoryuken beat a caged/lenox, but i'd leave u WRECKED in a street fight
now u get the dragunov for the shade that u threw
so when i aim for ur bacchanalia, it ain't a festival the coroner takin u to
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Originally Posted by B Dot LESNAR
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Originally Posted by B Dot LESNAR
this'll be a clear body, no ifs, ands, maybes or debatable..and the sad part its no EFFORT FOR A BRAWLQuote:
Originally Posted by B Dot LESNAR
might think it's a draw, till we pop somethin open & u see money change...does that REGISTER AT ALL?
So whats the routine? U and Lenox IG hookup for votes after he slides in your DM chump?
We thought u were decent in the ring, but left runnin' to go suck in' that Cage, soon as u C 'eM punk
I see you wrestle with words but your whole hustle absurd and Frankly APPARENT
What, u got that Coco B?, where? Gun to ya throat..that bird by ya neck aint FRANKY THE PARROT
So Caged gets in a jam & u pop up like his statefarm agent, these last few weeks been ASTOUNDING TOO
Your activity was sketchy before, but now I guess Broke back…and we all know what that’s AMOUNTIN’ TO
You DOUBTIN’ WHO? Give ya ego a check for being mediocre at best, maybe on paper this SEEMS SAVAGE
Till ya’ll start gradin’ points and realize he can’t school a fuckin Rhodes scholar if B AVERAGE
Go critique my highlighted parts & colors, but thats for those who can't see the punches that LAND ON SPOT
those words are Red for the blind, for the weak & fraile im teaching braille..time to put HANDS ON DOT
You’ll get wrapped in plastic, can’t give em credit for using played discs & some NAMEDROPS
You sneaking jabs, but tryin’ to bring them old games back..knowing damn well that’s where the GAMESTOP!
And that’s when we follow u home, whoever in the same crib as LES BE IN, FUCKED
Cause they’ll see the strap…right after this pussy get ate…Ya getting LESBIAN FUCKED
2 years with 14 battles & no progression, do the math and let the fact SUM IT BEST
Cause we all watchin…still waitin for DOT to bubble with words..like an INCOMING TEXT
I bet that struck a chord, lower your tone, loc…for these crips with daggers show up where u SLEEP AT
pull the sheet back....this beautiful quote was a musical note…that’s A sharp instrument to leave B flat
Boyz a threat to any and all ANOINTED VETS, I made Caged quit.. & u coulda done the same and AVOID A MESS
instead they both get ADRESSed the same…tailor made losses, and I’ll let yall debate who WORE IT BEST
networth can't help u, take a load off ur cuties dick
want to see a dense sloth rescue boyz?, then go watch the goonies flick
denied u bit charlie? #facts: ur a scandalous bitch
cuz u told us u hustle stolen property, then u jacked ur ammo from clips
i'm rofl @ the gbl finals tho, it's sad u think ur dope
mentioned u were proficient at larceny, wtf? u couldn't nab a single vote
screw ur gunflips, the lies u droppin get wild poser
cuz u wouldn't see boyz with AK-47's, if he was a somalian child soldier
now u get the dragunov for the shade that u threw
so when i aim for ur bacchanalia, it ain't a festival the coroner takin u to
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So Caged gets in a jam & u pop up like his statefarm agent, these last few weeks been ASTOUNDING TOO
Your activity was sketchy before, but now I guess Broke back…and we all know what that’s AMOUNTIN’ TO
You DOUBTIN’ WHO? Give ya ego a check for being mediocre at best, maybe on paper this SEEMS SAVAGE
Till ya’ll start gradin’ points and realize he can’t school a fuckin Rhodes scholar if B AVERAGE
Go critique my highlighted parts & colors, but thats for those who can't see the punches that LAND ON SPOT
those words are Red for the blind, for the weak & fraile im teaching braille..time to put HANDS ON DOT
You’ll get wrapped in plastic, can’t give em credit for using played discs & some NAMEDROPS
You sneaking jabs, but tryin’ to bring them old games back..knowing damn well that’s where the GAMESTOP!
And that’s when we follow u home, whoever in the same crib as LES BE IN, FUCKED
Cause they’ll see the strap…right after this pussy get ate…Ya getting LESBIAN FUCKED
I bet that struck a chord, lower your tone, loc…for these crips with daggers show up where u SLEEP AT
pull the sheet back....this beautiful quote was a musical note…that’s A sharp instrument to leave B flat
So yea for some reason I was feelin this battle more than the champ match, possibly because there was simply more material. Either way, both of the battlers dropped well, with personals, nameplays and flipped concepts. Brock dropped a well structured verse with a very personal feel. Black dropped a long bar style choppy in wording text, with a harsh punchlines as the main focus. Each of the battlers had strong verses with a direct connection to their opponent and both had some high points throughout. Blacks downfall was wording and structure but didn't lack on the effectiveness of his punches. Brokes Achilles heel was the over use of Notti personals which became redundant fast.
Still, this was very close to even, but I gotta V/BnB 6 bars to 5
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networth can't help u, take a load off ur cuties dick
want to see a dense sloth rescue boyz?, then go watch the goonies flick
Nice
u ns'ed dzaster, u was prolly laden with mad stress
frontlines hasn't seen a no show that bad since notti gave u his address
Haha funny
guy wanted to scrap, we noticed u switch ur gears
notti had a point when he punctum and left this emotional bitch in tears
Eh, kinda weak follow on
u HYPOCRITE. fuck what a blunted fraud demand
flipped a played angle while U actually BIT and U wanted NOTTI banned
Lol, but feel like you've possibily spent a little too long on Notti punches
denied u bit charlie? #facts: ur a scandalous bitch
cuz u told us u hustle stolen property, then u jacked ur ammo from clips
Very nice! Good wordplay
i'm rofl @ the gbl finals tho, it's sad u think ur dope
mentioned u were proficient at larceny, wtf? u couldn't nab a single vote
Weak
saw u lobby for pleth, u throb when he frolics about
dawg all of us tossed our cookies after u gobbled his bahlsen ur mouth
screw ur gunflips, the lies u droppin get wild poser
cuz u wouldn't see boyz with AK-47's, if he was a somalian child soldier
haha funny and clever
allen knight clowned u, black's response? go silent
if u try to approach this guerilla with choppers?, that's kong: skull island
Haha nice concept, but I feel the phrasing could have been better
broke flaunt that ryu swag, ur decrepit/petite/light
shoryuken beat a caged/lenox, but i'd leave u WRECKED in a street fight
Kinda cool
now u get the dragunov for the shade that u threw
so when i aim for ur bacchanalia, it ain't a festival the coroner takin u to
Didn't hit
Vs
this'll be a clear body, no ifs, ands, maybes or debatable..and the sad part its no EFFORT FOR A BRAWL
might think it's a draw, till we pop somethin open & u see money change...does that REGISTER AT ALL?
Eh
So whats the routine? U and Lenox IG hookup for votes after he slides in your DM chump?
We thought u were decent in the ring, but left runnin' to go suck in' that Cage, soon as u C 'eM punk
Haha nice
I see you wrestle with words but your whole hustle absurd and Frankly APPARENT
What, u got that Coco B?, where? Gun to ya throat..that bird by ya neck aint FRANKY THE PARROT
Could have been worded better imo
So Caged gets in a jam & u pop up like his statefarm agent, these last few weeks been ASTOUNDING TOO
Your activity was sketchy before, but now I guess Broke back…and we all know what that’s AMOUNTIN’ TO
Haha i like this bar!
You DOUBTIN’ WHO? Give ya ego a check for being mediocre at best, maybe on paper this SEEMS SAVAGE
Till ya’ll start gradin’ points and realize he can’t school a fuckin Rhodes scholar if B AVERAGE
Haha decent
Go critique my highlighted parts & colors, but thats for those who can't see the punches that LAND ON SPOT
those words are Red for the blind, for the weak & fraile im teaching braille..time to put HANDS ON DOT
haha nice!
You’ll get wrapped in plastic, can’t give em credit for using played discs & some NAMEDROPS
You sneaking jabs, but tryin’ to bring them old games back..knowing damn well that’s where the GAMESTOP!
Sick concept
And that’s when we follow u home, whoever in the same crib as LES BE IN, FUCKED
Cause they’ll see the strap…right after this pussy get ate…Ya getting LESBIAN FUCKED
Haha weak but made me laugh
2 years with 14 battles & no progression, do the math and let the fact SUM IT BEST
Cause we all watchin…still waitin for DOT to bubble with words..like an INCOMING TEXT
Eh.
I bet that struck a chord, lower your tone, loc…for these crips with daggers show up where u SLEEP AT
pull the sheet back....this beautiful quote was a musical note…that’s A sharp instrument to leave B flat
Dope as fuck.
Boyz a threat to any and all ANOINTED VETS, I made Caged quit.. & u coulda done the same and AVOID A MESS
instead they both get ADRESSed the same…tailor made losses, and I’ll let yall debate who WORE IT BEST
Meh.
Real close battle. I feel dot was more consistent throughout, whereas Boyz had the best punches sprinkled around. I still have to give it to Dot though, seeing as he was just more consistently attacking his opponent with very little filler lines. Really good battle.
Vote: dot
B Dot Lesbian
networth can't help u, take a load off ur cuties dick
want to see a dense sloth rescue boyz?, then go watch the goonies flick
Cool reference good use of creativity on wp flip
u ns'ed dzaster, u was prolly laden with mad stress
frontlines hasn't seen a no show that bad since notti gave u his address
Basic of a personal ill give this a jab i just felt u couldve elaborated more creativity into notti giving him his address without a fl no show reference just bland to me
guy wanted to scrap, we noticed u switch ur gears
notti had a point when he punctum and left this emotional bitch in tears
Lol nice wordplay
u HYPOCRITE. fuck what a blunted fraud demand
flipped a played angle while U actually BIT and U wanted NOTTI banned
Another mild personal attack
denied u bit charlie? #facts: ur a scandalous bitch
cuz u told us u hustle stolen property, then u jacked ur ammo from clips
Lol good personal
i'm rofl @ the gbl finals tho, it's sad u think ur dope
mentioned u were proficient at larceny, wtf? u couldn't nab a single vote
Cool route felt you couldvd worded finisher better
saw u lobby for pleth, u throb when he frolics about
dawg all of us tossed our cookies after u gobbled his bahlsen ur mouth
Good wordplay lol
screw ur gunflips, the lies u droppin get wild poser
cuz u wouldn't see boyz with AK-47's, if he was a somalian child soldier
Lol good reference
allen knight clowned u, black's response? go silent
if u try to approach this guerilla with choppers?, that's kong: skull island
I didnt like the display of metaphore on finisher
broke flaunt that ryu swag, ur decrepit/petite/light
shoryuken beat a caged/lenox, but i'd leave u WRECKED in a street fight
Played wp i did like the angle though
now u get the dragunov for the shade that u threw
so when i aim for ur bacchanalia, it ain't a festival the coroner takin u to
Dope wordplay
Boyz
this'll be a clear body, no ifs, ands, maybes or debatable..and the sad part its no EFFORT FOR A BRAWL
might think it's a draw, till we pop somethin open & u see money change...does thatREGISTER AT ALL?
Lol i like the flip man so fuckin creative not harsh as a punch i could picture this more in a live battle visual
So whats the routine? U and Lenox IG hookup for votes after he slides in your DM chump?
We thought u were decent in the ring, but left runnin' to go suck in' that Cage, soon as u C 'eM punk
Played af wordplay sorry man
I see you wrestle with words but your whole hustle absurd and Frankly APPARENT
What, u got that Coco B?, where? Gun to ya throat..that bird by ya neck aint FRANKY THE PARROT
Reference was ok wording fumbled tho on finisher
So Caged gets in a jam & u pop up like his statefarm agent, these last few weeks beenASTOUNDING TOO
Your activity was sketchy before, but now I guess Broke back…and we all know what that’sAMOUNTIN’ TO
Broke back funny flip lenox giving it to him lol
You DOUBTIN’ WHO? Give ya ego a check for being mediocre at best, maybe on paper thisSEEMS SAVAGE
Till ya’ll start gradin’ points and realize he can’t school a fuckin Rhodes scholar if B AVERAGE
Nice but i seen this done before
Go critique my highlighted parts & colors, but thats for those who can't see the punches thatLAND ON SPOT
those words are Red for the blind, for the weak & fraile im teaching braille..time to put HANDS ON DOT
Fucking dope lmao
You’ll get wrapped in plastic, can’t give em credit for using played discs & someNAMEDROPS
You sneaking jabs, but tryin’ to bring them old games back..knowing damn well that’s where the GAMESTOP!
Damn nice creativity
And that’s when we follow u home, whoever in the same crib as LES BE IN, FUCKED
Cause they’ll see the strap…right after thispussy get ate…Ya getting LESBIAN FUCKED
Nah didnt like this
2 years with 14 battles & no progression, do the math and let the fact SUM IT BEST
Cause we all watchin…still waitin for DOT to bubble with words..like an INCOMING TEXT
Not bad
I bet that struck a chord, lower your tone, loc…for these crips with daggers show up where uSLEEP AT
pull the sheet back....this beautiful quote was a musical note…that’s A sharp instrument to leave B flat
Fuckkkk very nice harsh hit here i dug the creativie aspect of the route
Boyz a threat to any and all ANOINTED VETS, I made Caged quit.. & u coulda done the same and AVOID A MESS
instead they both get ADRESSed the same…tailor made losses, and I’ll let yall debate who WORE IT BEST
Nah
Well B dot had a couple personals mediocre that clips line was good though. Also had some decent wordplay attempts. Boyz surpised me here with creativity the hands on dot b flat and the gamestop bars did it for me.
V/Boyz n black
Les: goonies flick, notti address was a good personal, Nab a single vote, punctum.
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Boyz: b flat
Overall: im getting realllyyyy fucking tired of these bandwagon votes ... yall acting like a bunch of fucking pussy faggots. If u REALLY think Boyz beat les with that corny Stupid fucking wordplay, then u need to log the fuck off this site AND NEVER ASSOCIATE WITH BATTLING AGAIN. This site has really gone to shit and it's super fucking sad to see. Hence why I've trasitioned to a site with way less newbs and FAGGOTS.. I honestly doubt I'll stick around for LLL tbh. Lol smh
Vote: les
First of all, jesus @ Lesnar stalking BNB like that. haha. You pay way too much attention bro. Anyways.
networth can't help u, take a load off ur cuties dick
want to see a dense sloth rescue boyz?, then go watch the goonies flick
This was smooth as fuck. Nice wording, creative concept. Just fluent all around.
u ns'ed dzaster, u was prolly laden with mad stress
frontlines hasn't seen a no show that bad since notti gave u his address
Strong personal. Way to hit him being a bitch.
guy wanted to scrap, we noticed u switch ur gears
notti had a point when he punctum and left this emotional bitch in tears
Another solid Notti punch.
denied u bit charlie? #facts: ur a scandalous bitch
cuz u told us u hustle stolen property, then u jacked ur ammo from clips
Solid personal, creative play.
i'm rofl @ the gbl finals tho, it's sad u think ur dope
mentioned u were proficient at larceny, wtf? u couldn't nab a single vote
Haha, that was fire. Smooth as fuck punch
So you obviously had plenty of ammo to use. You've obviously done your homework. You had a lot of heavy personals that were worded very well and a lot of creative concepts. There were a few misses towards the end but nothing that really hurt you.
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So whats the routine? U and Lenox IG hookup for votes after he slides in your DM chump?
We thought u were decent in the ring, but left runnin' to go suck in' that Cage, soon as u C 'eM punk
This could've been much better if it wasn't so stretched out. Creative concept though.
So Caged gets in a jam & u pop up like his statefarm agent, these last few weeks been ASTOUNDING TOO
Your activity was sketchy before, but now I guess Broke back…and we all know what that’s AMOUNTIN’ TO
Not a huge fan of too/to but the concept is nice nonetheless. My biggest issue with your writing is how stretched out every line is. By the time I get to the punch, it's already lost momentum.
Go critique my highlighted parts & colors, but thats for those who can't see the punches that LAND ON SPOT
those words are Red for the blind, for the weak & fraile im teaching braille..time to put HANDS ON DOT
Creative concept
You’ll get wrapped in plastic, can’t give em credit for using played discs & some NAMEDROPS
You sneaking jabs, but tryin’ to bring them old games back..knowing damn well that’s where the GAMESTOP!
Cool concept
I bet that struck a chord, lower your tone, loc…for these crips with daggers show up where u SLEEP AT
pull the sheet back....this beautiful quote was a musical note…that’s A sharp instrument to leave B flat
Probably your best bar. The rhyme scheme kept it from weakening and the concept was dope
BNB, your verse would've been so much heavier had you shortened them lines to be more direct. Most of the time you've got dope concepts but by the time they get to the punchline the momentum has slipped because it took me a minute to get there. That b flat line was definitely your best.
Overall, Broke took this pretty easily based on the fact is was basically a battle of punch vs concept. You can have the sickest concepts in the industry but it ain't gonna get you a W if you can't word them proper enough for the connection. Vote Lesnar
networth can't help u, take a load off ur cuties dick
want to see a dense sloth rescue boyz?, then go watch the goonies flick
u ns'ed dzaster, u was prolly laden with mad stress
frontlines hasn't seen a no show that bad since notti gave u his address
denied u bit charlie? #facts: ur a scandalous bitch
cuz u told us u hustle stolen property, then u jacked ur ammo from clips
broke flaunt that ryu swag, ur decrepit/petite/light
shoryuken beat a caged/lenox, but i'd leave u WRECKED in a street fight
vs
So whats the routine? U and Lenox IG hookup for votes after he slides in your DM chump?
We thought u were decent in the ring, but left runnin' to go suck in' that Cage, soon as u C 'eM punk
So Caged gets in a jam & u pop up like his statefarm agent, these last few weeks been ASTOUNDING TOO
Your activity was sketchy before, but now I guess Broke back…and we all know what that’s AMOUNTIN’ TO
I bet that struck a chord, lower your tone, loc…for these crips with daggers show up where u SLEEP AT
pull the sheet back....this beautiful quote was a musical note…that’s A sharp instrument to leave B flat
cool battle i feel like i voted on it already but i don't see my vote anywhere... maybe i just read it a bunch of times but what ever. .... Broke took me more time to go through all of the damn quotes than to read your verse... overall you had some dope punches littered with a few misses... i think you stayed on notti a bit long but it was also a longer battle than most. there was also a line you had i think it was the name flip on the AK 47 i thought that concept was cool but the end didn't hit as hard as it could of...Boyz I'm out here trying to get used to your long bar style fucking hate it but il deal with it hahaha... you also had some dope flips the ones i quoted above ... i thought the broke back line was your best line... Cm dunked was a dope one also... i think you had to many name flips but again its along battle so your kinda reaching for material.... overall i just think broke had less misses than you did .. dope battle... keep it up
Vote Broke.
Broke Wins