@Allen Knight
12-20 lines
Due Wednesday before midnight.
Good luck
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@Allen Knight
12-20 lines
Due Wednesday before midnight.
Good luck
here, my bad just seen this.
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12 from me this time @Allen Knight
A spar with Allen Knight for me is all in a day....
Battle LIFE, right? All the 'hardest parts' are 'common-plays'..
Herb with them 'green lines', in a 'static phase'....
So... I bet you get 'beat' if your 'heart displayed'..
Similar to your girl wanting to move in, you blew it. A drastic twist.
Like, I wasn't gonna do this, but screw it. Get Allen Wrenched.
So get on that high horse and dance about, grab the lance and joust.
Show it's something you'd die for while fans would shout, who's left 'standing'* out?
After LIFE, Allen Knight, serves on as the sacrifice.
What, a battle-cry? Pacified. Murder you just to pass the time.
Less wrecks happen trafficking Crash is missing I'm often moving. (You don't say)
Dead heads wanting an Activision, I'll answer the Call of Duty. ("You don't play")
*- I usually never do footnotes but,
(Standing as in stands for fans/stans, standing, and as in records/standings)
all i do is take money u aint got half of it, gettin gwap is lit u faggot bitch
ain't a pile up when im stackin shit, im coppin 4 Cars Crash u'll look like u made a flip by accident
i'll catch u while ur sleepin... dreamin of uzi's flexin
cannon burned this bitch ina bed of his own skin rotting away like the movie Seven
faggot u owe money to everyone, niggas hate this geek
cuz we all kno CC Pizza shit & i'll cut'em up in sections for everyone to take a piece
wanna throw hands pussy? my fist'll fold a scrub
cuz i'll duck & send C-4 uppercutts to the face till his nose explodes w/ blood
u a gambleholic.. while ur chick needs dick...u chillen w/ a bookie instead
she wanted standards & your Execute girl so i slayed the pussy in your bed
faggot i'll murder u & cut ya up till ur corpse stunk dawg
i'll have Car parts dismembered & thrown around a spot like its a fuckin junk yard
key im drunk
it came down to an extra quotable that allen had.
he had the junk jard line,
i fucked with carsons intro but
knight was a bit more aggresive.
if you need a full break down, let me know
So yea...
A spar with Allen Knight for me is all in a day....
Battle LIFE, right? All the 'hardest parts' are 'common-plays'..
^MEH(Maybe/mediocre)
Herb with them 'green lines', in a 'static phase'....
So... I bet you get 'beat' if your 'heart displayed'..
^decent, not setup well tho
Similar to your girl wanting to move in, you blew it. A drastic twist.
Like, I wasn't gonna do this, but screw it. Get Allen Wrenched.
^cool misdirected wordplay(although played) but poorly setup again
So get on that high horse and dance about, grab the lance and joust.
Show it's something you'd die for while fans would shout, who's left 'standing'* out?
^Very cool concept and smooth flow, coulda hit harder idk how but yea good one
After LIFE, Allen Knight, serves on as the sacrifice.
What, a battle-cry? Pacified. Murder you just to pass the time.
^Cool setup but the punch didn't end it well.. this is another maybe
Less wrecks happen trafficking Crash is missing I'm often moving. (You don't say)
Dead heads wanting an Activision, I'll answer the Call of Duty. ("You don't play")
^ moderately Decent.. not quite a diss but not terrible, should've opened with this if not trashing it all together
vs
all i do is take money u aint got half of it, gettin gwap is lit u faggot bitch
ain't a pile up when im stackin shit, im coppin 4 Cars Crash u'll look like u made a flip by accident
^nice bar overall, although stretched in wording
i'll catch u while ur sleepin... dreamin of uzi's flexin
cannon burned this bitch ina bed of his own skin rotting away like the movie Seven
^MEH, strangely put together in the end although setup well it didnt sting as much as it prolly coulda
faggot u owe money to everyone, niggas hate this geek
cuz we all kno CC Pizza shit & i'll cut'em up in sections for everyone to take a piece
^setup coulda took this to a new level but it wasnt really there and this punch nearly missed.. decent here.
wanna throw hands pussy? my fist'll fold a scrub
cuz i'll duck & send C-4 uppercutts to the face till his nose explodes w/ blood
^Wordy.. but a dope punch overall
u a gambleholic.. while ur chick needs dick...u chillen w/ a bookie instead
she wanted standards & your Execute girl so i slayed the pussy in your bed
^not a bad bar.. again with the structure tho, its stretchy tbh
faggot i'll murder u & cut ya up till ur corpse stunk dawg
i'll have Car parts dismembered & thrown around a spot like its a fuckin junk yard
^Too long winded frfr but the concept was a cool nameplay
Interesting battle here.. Never seen Crash before but for a new poster to the site he doesn't really disappoint..he already has a good flow and a decent structure, just needs work on the setups and punches like everyone does when they switch from audio to text(which im assuming he did) Allen seemed to deliver well constructed punches and we've come to expect that for the most part so even some of cool ones weren't surprising from him(although his structure did surprise me). Conceptually I think Crash was a bit more slick but in terms of consistency throughout and direct hits with punches, AK took it. 4-2
V/ Allen
Two Best Bars:
A spar with Allen Knight for me is all in a day....
Battle LIFE, right? All the 'hardest parts' are 'common-plays'..
vs.
all i do is take money u aint got half of it, gettin gwap is lit u faggot bitch
ain't a pile up when im stackin shit, im coppin 4 Cars Crash u'll look like u made a flip by accident
Crash said: "common-plays" or also common place, points for diversity, which worked well with the setup being a bit average for his starting line. I liked the flow here though.
Allen: on these bars he was able to effortlessly include Crash's name into the flow without referencing him specifically. The structure and complexity of the bar is what impressed me while still keeping the rhythm and flow connected.
Overall Vote: Crash, he was much more consistent with relevant punches.