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Ten lines
Due Tuesday
House rules
Young Grandma has a penis
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Checkin in..
hink you can actually beat me? Well let's see..
Because to Know and to realize are 2 different things..
And you ain't done either yet, I should slap ya like a loser..
This guy's a legend? Yea on a site with 5 active users..
I happen to be a vet, I was here when it was Poppin..
And yea you probably got alot of wins, when the site started dropping..
I use to be a hot read, running these leagues..
You itching to win this? Well my trigger finger got fleas
No tease..how'd I get stuck with a dude named nope?
Only motion he gets is inside the court, do us a favor abort..
G'luck
@RealizE I may need an ext
Called me out of retirement, now I'm firing, aimed to precision
The scope I'm aiming at your mouth with won't receive kudos at dentist visits
Rediculous isn't it, you will live in a box with your favorite suit on
I'll get rid of you almost for free, make discount more than a Groupon
Too wrong, colder than ya girl panties letting cum shots linger
She thanos, u gave that hoe a ring and she disappeared with the snap of a finger
You don't have that animal instinct, you won't survive in the ring with me
With the rifle I'll go ape and pick off ya head without looking for things to eat
Get smeared in ya living room for crossing a face like mine
Have yo ass slumped over on the couch like the lazy boy refused to recline
hink you can actually beat me? Well let's see..
Because to Know and to realize are 2 different things..
......Simple
And you ain't done either yet, I should slap ya like a loser..
This guy's a legend? Yea on a site with 5 active users..
Punch at the site more than KnowP.... more of a jab than anything hard hitting
I happen to be a vet, I was here when it was Poppin..
And yea you probably got alot of wins, when the site started dropping..
Again a jab at best, directed at the site....
I use to be a hot read, running these leagues..
You itching to win this? Well my trigger finger got fleas
simple...nothing hard hitting
No tease..how'd I get stuck with a dude named nope?
Only motion he gets is inside the court, do us a favor abort..
Weak closer....
Called me out of retirement, now I'm firing, aimed to precision
The scope I'm aiming at your mouth with won't receive kudos at dentist visits
Ehh...Ok opener, not GREAT by any means tho
Rediculous isn't it, you will live in a box with your favorite suit on
I'll get rid of you almost for free, make discount more than a Groupon
Decent....I like the set up, finish could've been worded better...
Too wrong, colder than ya girl panties letting cum shots linger
She thanos, u gave that hoe a ring and she disappeared with the snap of a finger
Decent
You don't have that animal instinct, you won't survive in the ring with me
With the rifle I'll go ape and pick off ya head without looking for things to eat
Cool set up and punch
Get smeared in ya living room for crossing a face like mine
Have yo ass slumped over on the couch like the lazy boy refused to recline
Decent closer
VOTE: KnowP
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Inmate vs. moonrocks[MOONROCKSWINS]
Bomb Bard Vs Bob5768[Open For Votes]
No votes..
can we get one thooooo
hink you can actually beat me? Well let's see..
Because to Know and to realize are 2 different things..
( I see what u were trying here, but its not really a bar, more of a distinction and it serves as no real punch)
And you ain't done either yet, I should slap ya like a loser..
This guy's a legend? Yea on a site with 5 active users..
( I always like observational bars, but this has been done before and done better...)
I happen to be a vet, I was here when it was Poppin..
And yea you probably got alot of wins, when the site started dropping..
( this is just a continuation of the last bar, which wasn't done well in itself)
I use to be a hot read, running these leagues..
You itching to win this? Well my trigger finger got fleas
( this is terrible)
No tease..how'd I get stuck with a dude named nope?
Only motion he gets is inside the court, do us a favor abort..
( this is equally bad...even worse it was picked as the closer)
VS
Called me out of retirement, now I'm firing, aimed to precision
The scope I'm aiming at your mouth with won't receive kudos at dentist visits
( lol...dude, this doesn't rhyme.... smh, decent bar that didn't rhyme?)
Rediculous isn't it, you will live in a box with your favorite suit on
I'll get rid of you almost for free, make discount more than a Groupon
( this is decent...first line doesn't have a thing to do with the 2nd...try making ya first bars not filler)
Too wrong, colder than ya girl panties letting cum shots linger
She thanos, u gave that hoe a ring and she disappeared with the snap of a finger
(eh...this is worded so oddly...its a decent bar, but its literally referencing nothing, unless u had a quote from him saying he was engaged or married,,,,etc...get it? reference)
You don't have that animal instinct, you won't survive in the ring with me
With the rifle I'll go ape and pick off ya head without looking for things to eat
( no)
Get smeared in ya living room for crossing a face like mine
Have yo ass slumped over on the couch like the lazy boy refused to recline
( this is weak, especially for a closer....)
Realize... back to the drawing board, really no advice...just try not to be so simple with it...
KnowP...enjoy retirement... ur getting too old for this Danny Glover....lol
Vote= KnowP... having a better verse than realize.... u both came simple with it though....
lmao honest feed isn't welcome anymore
upp
hink you can actually beat me? Well let's see..
Because to Know and to realize are 2 different things..
And you ain't done either yet, I should slap ya like a loser..
This guy's a legend? Yea on a site with 5 active users..
I happen to be a vet, I was here when it was Poppin..
And yea you probably got alot of wins, when the site started dropping..
v
Too wrong, colder than ya girl panties letting cum shots linger
She thanos, u gave that hoe a ring and she disappeared with the snap of a finger
Vote: Realize
good battle, but felt like realize was more direct with his lines the "only reason why your winning bcuz theres no competition" angle was effective
hink you can actually beat me? Well let's see..
Because to Know and to realize are 2 different things..
And you ain't done either yet, I should slap ya like a loser..
This guy's a legend? Yea on a site with 5 active users..
And yea you probably got alot of wins, when the site started dropping..
I use to be a hot read, running these leagues..
You itching to win this? Well my trigger finger got fleas
Vs.
Called me out of retirement, now I'm firing, aimed to precision
The scope I'm aiming at your mouth with won't receive kudos at dentist visits
Rediculous isn't it, you will live in a box with your favorite suit on
I'll get rid of you almost for free, make discount more than a Groupon
Too wrong, colder than ya girl panties letting cum shots linger
She thanos, u gave that hoe a ring and she disappeared with the snap of a finger
You don't have that animal instinct, you won't survive in the ring with me
With the rifle I'll go ape and pick off ya head without looking for things to eat
V- KnowP
That ape line was fireeeeeeee
3- 1 uppp
Up up up and away
VsQuote:
Originally Posted by KnowP
Weak shit lol.. Didnt really feel much.. Real was a little statementish and knowp seemed like it was gonna hit then fell flat each time.. Tough call but i guess Vote: knowp .. Better attempts i guessQuote:
Originally Posted by RealizE
knowp wins