LLL Week 11: Blue Bayou (8-1) vs Crash Carson (0-0) - OPEN 4 VOTES

verses due: FRIDAY 11:59PST
AUTOMATIC EXTENSION HAS BEEN GIVEN IF NEEDED, DUE TO THE WEEK STRETCH
Minimum Lines = 12 Lines
Maximum Lines = 20 Lines



Extension: Up to opponent IF verse completed & posted/sent. Otherwise at the Moderators discretion.

VOTING CLOSES SUNDAY NIGHT/MONDAY MORNING
BATTLES SET SHORTLY AFTER!


2 No-Shows = Season Ban

NO BITING OR RECYCLING!!!!
Biting results in a SEASON BAN
Recycle Once = DQ
RECYCLE TWICE = BANNED FOR SEASON

Edits:
First Person can't edit after second person posts their verse
Second person can't edit once dropping unless they request and have been given permission from a mod (i.e. spelling errors, duplicate words or something minor)
*The thought process here is this will limit the amount of power given to the second poster in tweaking verses while waiting for votes to come in (which have been slow), and will force people to realllly look over their verses, or PM them to mods, before posting. PM'ing to myself or Reef Flex is encouraged.


CHECKS,VERSES VOTES ONLY IN BATTLE THREADS!!!!!

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Check.


Update - probably posting tonight or tomorrow

You think your bar stats showing you're the grand champ?
My ink make this mark back lower than a tramp stamp.
There's something afoot with this leg-end I can't stand,
making me wish I got seated Weelz, but King set it "God Damn It".
Blue arriving upon a throne, I'm riding in this alone..
Not trying to get attention, just vying to get a vote..
I know how it goes, different strokes for different folks,
but if a hard attack miss C irony slit your throat.
I war to retire yours I'm here to meddle 'til rust develops,
I'll forge these fire works and be here to tell 'em the dust has settled.
In all your worthless rap career, you couldnt act half as clever,
this might be my first battle here, but it's your last battle ever.
Your angles and lines clearly seem to have lost their shape n'
the day you died is revealed when you thinkin' Car' been dated.
'Cause every timeline's blew by - you only react when shook like carbonation.
You're trying to farm feed 'til it's dry then bale, I'm throwin' hay makers for occupation.
Your fate has been decided.. This battle is prophecy,
what I'm building struck sure enough to collapse your philosophy.
You're a joke with no punchline, so when I laugh it's not comedy.
Your lines are shaky and go nowhere like fractal geometry.
Stop trying to peddle that garbage, Blue. Nobody buy you.
You'll never get the job done if you're not holdin' the right tools.
You're a fake fuck. You're a wanna-be, pussy,
the flesh-light type to the up and coming new rookie.
I may seem the underdog, but I'm a vet. Put you under, dog, it's weak.
Gettin' pissy and territorial. You the wiz? Check the fucking log and see.
I took your bitch. What you read when I rock it? Done it raw and deep.
I'm not new to her, dig in without spades, planting seeds to son you properly.
When I head over, heels get a surprise when they feel mine.
Throwing up sick flows because I'm ill rhyming.
Just know you'll never get votes, unless ChyllTyrant finally ends his silence.
I'll spike your melon 'til the thorn buries I'm still wild'in.
Sure, yeah all of the league would probably believe I'm not top tier,
yet all of the league would also agree I'm not topped here.
I'll hit your nose with lines so dope it make your top tear.
You spin and go, then decline and slow like a top teeters.
I'll take the steps n' endure the stares, take flight like the elevator was broke.
You can't lift this room drop anchor, I mop the floor with you, "B Almighty" is done with Rome.
Sum' forum, I "bossed in", couldn't Judge Joe? The math is more than Just for show.
And now B don't want the L. U gassed, on E, don't want the smoke.

20. (Update for spelling)

40 lines fuck

will post soon & on time

okay w/e here's 40 to match

he’s heading in the wrong direction FAST. a wack bum & rattled cat
dunno what’s up w/ Crash Course but he looks like he needs one in battle rap
40 garbage lines of you claimin that you’re rhymin as a felon
if we tell you make that Discontinue it’s cuz we’re not buyin’ what you’re sellin
a peon gettin his free on, threw fists but left gory n’ fractured
wouldn’t see Hans Landa punch rewatchin fight scenes from Inglorious Bastards
i titty fuck bitches to warm em up, how fast their panties drop is alarmin’
but as far as your dick Corset’s only seen around tits if we’re talkin the garment
serious, they run in fear if he approaches droppin some light quotes
when it comes to Carson Day only show interest talkin The Voice host
it’s sad really. you’ve barely pulled a bitch in your life
girls see you & go Tellez faster than Montoya for a hit in the ninth
never seen you get acknowledgment from women cuz you’re flex is a sham
sure you’ve seen Waves Crash. spending nights at the beach having sex w/ a man
never get votes so Crash lives his life salty & whinin’
he’s a cry-baby Sodastream never stops pourin like a faulty appliance
what’s w/ the ON? can’t even get ya name straight witcha bummy ass
shoulda stopped at Crash Cars. you're bout to leave this battle a dummy smashed
this sloppy peasant bout to catch karate lessons
chop em up. now there’s close to 1000cc’s like Bugatti engines
not modest in the slightest dawg but know you’re not the hardest spittin
if i say ya Humble it’s cuz ya lowly drone out the lyrics of your garbage writtens
& as for punching my head off haha carry on with ur taunts & talk shit..
go ahead bro, commanding my face. your girl does when she wants her box licked
he’s not very rebellious either, not a guy that gets loud for change
when crash is Mutiny’s killing the volume on his wack SoundClick page
RB what changed w/ the game?! lately it’s so lame it’s insane
there’s literally been No Activity. CAT Scans will show the same for his brain
so stay out the way cuz i’m mad, aimin straight for your face w/ a jab
im hot af & Luka describe ya talent to the point we think you play for the Mavs
said you hate baseball. well that point is true to the topic
a Flyballs got nothin on the Popout i’ll make ya shoulder do from it’s socket
i let my girl down gently and told her “stay strong it’s done”
there's beauty enclosure…your dog faced bitch looks like she belongs in one
still let her give me handy’s tho. way she leaves my ballsack empty's great
grabs my cock & gets the Tip-Off so often she takes jump balls in the NBA
& if you think I don’t let her suck me off your dead wrong
can’t help it man she’s very Direct. i just have to take it Head On
life’s over when i’m aimin the tech
shot’s aimed to kill so don’t get it twisted Crash your fatal be death

Crash Carson -

Very good battle rap here. You know the essential, and brought a good battle rap here. I enjoyed it quite a bit, with your eclectic rhyming and good verbosity. Good punchlines and finesse. Good work. Keep writing!

Blue Bayou -

Good work here. You're quire talented. Nice one here, man. Some of these punchlines were funny, and cool. Nice one here, man. Keep writing!

Close battle, I have blue bayou winning..

V/ Blue Bayou

40 lines? ... Eh

Crash: I liked the setups you used, but I felt the executions weren't enough to convince an efficient punchline. Some of your word usage were slightly off grammatical wise. Along with a few filler bars to complete a 20 bar battle. I see potential with tremendous improvement s. Just work on your transitions more than just jabbing shadow swings.

Blue: The beginning came off short with little effort to show than your usual material. I understand this was a lengthy battle, but I've seen MUCH better from you in previous events. However, I fuck with the cool nameplay elements hitting in a good direction. Crash course line was dope among other quoteable suggestions. The flow was cool and like I mentioned to crash. A few filler bars being used that was eh.. Not a battle performance attacking your opponent though blue. Your nameplays were the highlight of this battle more.

Overall: I have to give the victory to Blue Bayou. His punches were more rounded in an experience battler stance. Crash your verse wasn't that bad just work on your connections more. Proofread your verse and maybe ask a non voter for options if this is suitable to stand alone. Good long ass battle guys..