death ghost

shrine messiah, worship myself in cleanliness and solitude, solemn mood
solemn food, fast for a fortnight, fast for forty days and forty nights
fast for forty days and forty nights, storm the night
storm a tide, forming tides with synchronicity breast strokes
I chime the best notes, zest code, vexed mode
jest cold, best boast, breath soul, death ghost
death ghost of dohm, wrote shine on psalms
read disciples palms, they're needed for greatness
seeds of girth, seeds of earth, bow down to the shore
bow to the shore, where you watch the beach and high tides
I ride the high tides with whatever fate I have
for I have hope in faith, and faith in hope
breathless soul, zest of soul, sin of ghost
seer and ghost, kin of souls
heartless in control, starless with a soul
solstice will be rose, as I see the darkness in my sol

I like it because for the new age style the rhyme scheme actually makes sense and not just a bunch of words that rhyme... I like the off beats - Also just a heads up but every time you post you are supposed to provide 2 feedbacks on the board and post those links. I get in trouble for that a lot.