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Due by Monday midnight
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Im the myth I’m the man…so I’ll kill ‘em where he stands
Whether a it’s by the clip or the hands…
I’m sayin…
Ayooooooo!!!
He a simp to the fullest, we all know chick’s regret fakes
If this ‘beta max’ out on style, I bet it’s as vintage as cassette tapes
Night time ur life line’ll kick the shit, dump n go yo
The pump’ll blow bro, u’ll catch a night cap w/ a bigger audience than unc n ocho
All that bark n no heart, yeah I’m gettin ballsy, sure
If he talk he’s floored, I move squares like him upon entrance like doggy doors
I suck at geometry but drawin rounds my only hobby
Only surface area I can relate to, is the lake I’ve decided to dump his body
Tired of tricks like u, always pretending ur dooms brutal
Last time u pulled the stick to stay alive, u almost drowned w/ ur pool noodle
i pray and hope that you dont battle me with this lack of intensity and lame ass flowQuote:
Originally Posted by Ryno
or the only edging u'll be doing is haven ur masturbation ruined...to think u "came this close"
u got 10 in the chamber? ALL that gas with no jewls dropping i betQuote:
Originally Posted by Ryno
i got 10 in the chamber too, so i like your odds of winning the first round....of russian roulette
ur service is an elite tradition, knowing the documents u'd give ur life for is a wise decision
you want to uphold the constitution so a gunhole will help you focus on the body and de composition
got a girl and you love her, ill open up her mind and legs traveling the globe for a summer
if she around me i fuck her, created the perfect atmosphere 4 engaging orbital thrusters
i'd fold Ryno with my eyes closed, hands tied, blind fold
u acting John Wayne till this Gacy the resemblance to reports the guy that survived wrote
(all homo intended)
Night time ur life line’ll kick the shit, dump n go yo
The pump’ll blow bro, u’ll catch a night cap w/ a bigger audience than unc n ocho
Coool
Tired of tricks like u, always pretending ur dooms brutal
Last time u pulled the stick to stay alive, u almost drowned w/ ur pool noodle
Pool noodle never referred to as a stick but I liked this.
Surface area bar cool too
i pray and hope that you dont battle me with this lack of intensity and lame ass flow
or the only edging u'll be doing is haven ur masturbation ruined...to think u "came this close"
No you didn't do this
The rest of the verse was interesting. Not bad.
both came so fresh and so clean
I felt like MV ending more creative compare to Ryno
vote-MV
And your vote is for ??Quote:
Originally Posted by Aero
Just my presence is enough tbh.
I'll vote but next time thank me for being here first.
Ryon wins.
All that bark n no heart, yeah I’m gettin ballsy, sure
If he talk he’s floored, I move squares like him upon entrance like doggy doors
str8
I suck at geometry but drawin rounds my only hobby
Only surface area I can relate to, is the lake I’ve decided to dump his body
picking up the pace... i like this
Tired of tricks like u, always pretending ur dooms brutal
Last time u pulled the stick to stay alive, u almost drowned w/ ur pool noodle
a repeat on gun bars..
your verse had poor finishes(first 2 puns) and redundancies("All that bark n no heart"... "he talk he’s floored") like it's your first time rapping
vs
u got 10 in the chamber? ALL that gas with no jewls dropping i bet
i got 10 in the chamber too, so i like your odds of winning the first round....of russian roulette
wait.. if you win you stay alive
MV this was the worst i've see you come
v-ryno
Another close battle, kind of a style clash so I could happily see it go either way. Ryno’s flow was nicer. MV was a little verbose without enough internal rhymes to keep the flow going. MV’s best punches were better, Ryno was more consistent. I got MV winning again, but only just.
Vote- MV
Quote:
Originally Posted by Ryno
So I got this at Unc and Ocho vs MV’s opening two barsQuote:
Originally Posted by MV
Beta max out was cool too
Between those two I’ll give it to MV for a lil harder of a drop
Dope work fellaz
He a simp to the fullest, we all know chick’s regret fakes
If this ‘beta max’ out on style, I bet it’s as vintage as cassette tapes
Ehhh a lil stretched but I get it.. decent opener
Night time ur life line’ll kick the shit, dump n go yo
The pump’ll blow bro, u’ll catch a night cap w/ a bigger audience than unc n ocho
Not bad.. had more potential then you put in it
All that bark n no heart, yeah I’m gettin ballsy, sure
If he talk he’s floored, I move squares like him upon entrance like doggy doors
Much better.. tight
I suck at geometry but drawin rounds my only hobby
Only surface area I can relate to, is the lake I’ve decided to dump his body
A lil stretched.. decent
Tired of tricks like u, always pretending ur dooms brutal
Last time u pulled the stick to stay alive, u almost drowned w/ ur pool noodle
ehh.. weak closer..
i pray and hope that you dont battle me with this lack of intensity and lame ass flow
or the only edging u'll be doing is haven ur masturbation ruined...to think u "came this close"
Damn that was stretched as fuck
u got 10 in the chamber? ALL that gas with no jewls dropping i bet
i got 10 in the chamber too, so i like your odds of winning the first round....of russian roulette
Ehhh.. damn.. stretched
ur service is an elite tradition, knowing the documents u'd give ur life for is a wise decision
you want to uphold the constitution so a gunhole will help you focus on the body and de composition
Got damn you stretched that crazy.. nah.. no good
got a girl and you love her, ill open up her mind and legs traveling the globe for a summer
if she around me i fuck her, created the perfect atmosphere 4 engaging orbital thrusters
Nah
i'd fold Ryno with my eyes closed, hands tied, blind fold
u acting John Wayne till this Gacy the resemblance to reports the guy that survived wrote
Decent closer but stretched
Good battle fellas.. MV had pretty good concepts but finished them poorly.. and the cadence or flow of the peice was very eeehh.. I gave this to Ryhno for Better punches, better flow & Better concept finishes.
Vote= Ryhno
Good job to both.
Ry is first three we good… I liked doggy doors the most, could of been worded a little harder I thing but def cool.. opener was cool to… mv you ain’t do it for me in this one bro.. a jerking off/came line? Naw bro lol.. the rest was meh too.. u live if u win RR… rest was nothing worth mentioning.. no hate just ain’t do it for me
Vote ry
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