Fallcano Rnd 1:High And Drunk Vs BashEmUp - VOTE NOW

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@High And Drunk
@BashEmUP

Yayter...

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I really do this shit...

Ur an embarrassment, every vote he's dick riding the greats
Been on 'Blue balls' for months, ironic cuz every match u get raped
AR at ya door early, ill wake the fam up if I'm pissed
Press me & catch an extra 10, the .45 on some snooze button shit
Mayweather in person, I slip shots & give em back G
Cross at ur 'mouth, guard' ur face or get it sent to the nose bleeds
Stop w/ the threats, u'll get ghost if I toast u w/ the gun
Channel that energy or get a medium to reach ya fam through one
Get bucked for acting tough, yeah my gat always down to ride
Funny ur records 1-8...7 Shots'll have have the pigs callin' in ur homicide

U trash.

Czech

You real? Fuck lyin'.. I hear "Blue Steel" and I dump nines..
You hear "Blue Steal"'s a really good source of some punchlines..!
This battle the dark night of your soul -- one of your rough patches..
Cuz we know Knight is the sole reason you winning your tough matches..!
Don't get hype on his ass.. the bars this dude brings to beat me?
With all your recycling trash -- and you still losing to Greedy..??
"This homo's gay!" "You blow!" "You're lame!" Screw you, brother..
Your ideas are so-so played like YouTube covers..!
Bash is forever nerd... you never heard the hood say "He gets us"..
Every bars got a gun in it like we're in the slums.. of east Texas..!

Quote:

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Originally Posted by BashEmUP

Yayter...

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I really do this shit...

Ur an embarrassment, every vote he's dick riding the greats
Been on 'Blue balls' for months, ironic cuz every match u get raped
Decent
AR at ya door early, ill wake the fam up if I'm pissed
Press me & catch an extra 10, the .45 on some snooze button shit
Fire
Mayweather in person, I slip shots & give em back G
Cross at ur 'mouth, guard' ur face or get it sent to the nose bleeds
Cool, not bad
Stop w/ the threats, u'll get ghost if I toast u w/ the gun
Channel that energy or get a medium to reach ya fam through one
Tight
Get bucked for acting tough, yeah my gat always down to ride
Funny ur records 1-8...7 Shots'll have have the pigs callin' in ur homicide
I dig

U trash.

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Originally Posted by High And Drunk

You real? Fuck lyin'.. I hear "Blue Steel" and I dump nines..
You hear "Blue Steal"'s a really good source of some punchlines..!
Cool
This battle the dark night of your soul -- one of your rough patches..
Cuz we know Knight is the sole reason you winning your tough matches..!
Nah this has been done on him too much lately
Don't get hype on his ass.. the bars this dude brings to beat me?
With all your recycling trash -- and you still losing to Greedy..??
Still losing to greedy part was only part I didn’t like, didn’t really work man. Multies were cool but I wasn’t feeling how you ended this punch
"This homo's gay!" "You blow!" "You're lame!" Screw you, brother..
Your ideas are so-so played like YouTube covers..!
Aight cool, punch coulda been worded better
Bash is forever nerd... you never heard the hood say "He gets us"..
Every bars got a gun in it like we're in the slums.. of east Texas..!
I dig it but I’ve seen this concept done better. Woulda worked better too if he actually dropped nothing but gun bars

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I got Bash taking all bars besides the first one, which coulda went either way, but it was HD’s best line imo whereas bash’s first was his weakest. Good looks on getting this up early. HD is getting better, it’s obvious, but Bash brought it here with some cool shit

v/Bash

Bash:
Opener- off to a decent start
Snooze button- yikes. Dope
Mouth guard- good concept imo. Coulda done this better tho
Channel energy- nice
Closer- good personal spin

Vs
HaD:
Opener- good attempt here, but blue steals been done too much
Knight/soul- this dont work for me, but i am a fan of the ececution style u used here, if donr right.
Greedy- i dont get this. We're not battling?
Youtube- this is a miss
Closer- i like this concept. Never seen this done either. This is the best bar of ur verse.


Vote Big Bash. Just outclassed HaD here.
High, one of ur better drops. I liked ur opener and closer

Bash

Ur an embarrassment, every vote he's dick riding the greats
Been on 'Blue balls' for months, ironic cuz every match u get raped
im sure this is played but good wording here + personal 3/5
AR at ya door early, ill wake the fam up if I'm pissed
Press me & catch an extra 10, the .45 on some snooze button shit
ive heard this concept before but this was done very well 4/5
Mayweather in person, I slip shots & give em back G
Cross at ur 'mouth, guard' ur face or get it sent to the nose bleeds
i see where you were going but not feeling this one 2/5
Stop w/ the threats, u'll get ghost if I toast u w/ the gun
Channel that energy or get a medium to reach ya fam through one
head nod. yea. 5/5
Get bucked for acting tough, yeah my gat always down to ride
Funny ur records 1-8...7 Shots'll have have the pigs callin' in ur homicide
this was cool not a haymaker tho 2/5
16/25

vs

H&D

You real? Fuck lyin'.. I hear "Blue Steel" and I dump nines..
You hear "Blue Steal"'s a really good source of some punchlines..!
lol 3/5 because it made me laugh
This battle the dark night of your soul -- one of your rough patches..
Cuz we know Knight is the sole reason you winning your tough matches..!
ok 2/5
Don't get hype on his ass.. the bars this dude brings to beat me?
With all your recycling trash -- and you still losing to Greedy..??
1/5 concept but no punch here
"This homo's gay!" "You blow!" "You're lame!" Screw you, brother..
Your ideas are so-so played like YouTube covers..!
1/5 wasn feeling this one either
Bash is forever nerd... you never heard the hood say "He gets us"..
Every bars got a gun in it like we're in the slums.. of east Texas..!
ok. here we go. i like this one 3.5/5
10.5/25


v/Bash
H&D had some good shit here but i needed him to go a bit harder on those flips as is bash just had a superior drop. good job fellas

Ur an embarrassment, every vote he's dick riding the greats
Been on 'Blue balls' for months, ironic cuz every match u get raped
not bad, made me lol
AR at ya door early, ill wake the fam up if I'm pissed
Press me & catch an extra 10, the .45 on some snooze button shit
this was cool. Woulda been smoother as a simile, come to the dark side bro
Mayweather in person, I slip shots & give em back G
Cross at ur 'mouth, guard' ur face or get it sent to the nose bleeds
wording is screwy, decent at best
Stop w/ the threats, u'll get ghost if I toast u w/ the gun
Channel that energy or get a medium to reach ya fam through one
i wanna like this but I’m not seeing the two way connection with this one..
Get bucked for acting tough, yeah my gat always down to ride
Funny ur records 1-8...7 Shots'll have have the pigs callin' in ur homicide
nah


Vs


You real? Fuck lyin'.. I hear "Blue Steel" and I dump nines..
You hear "Blue Steal"'s a really good source of some punchlines..!
lol nah
This battle the dark night of your soul -- one of your rough patches..
Cuz we know Knight is the sole reason you winning your tough matches..!
???wheres the punch tho
Don't get hype on his ass.. the bars this dude brings to beat me?
With all your recycling trash -- and you still losing to Greedy..??
had potential
"This homo's gay!" "You blow!" "You're lame!" Screw you, brother..
Your ideas are so-so played like YouTube covers..!
foh w this lmao
Bash is forever nerd... you never heard the hood say "He gets us"..
Every bars got a gun in it like we're in the slums.. of east Texas..!
i guess this is decent?


Bash had a pretty cool verse here, I’ve figured out the problem with his bars - PM me. High/drunk may be able to elevate but it’s gonns be a long road. I appreciate your activity on the site, keep at it.


Vote Bash

Ur an embarrassment, every vote he's dick riding the greats
Been on 'Blue balls' for months, ironic cuz every match u get raped
^Ok
AR at ya door early, ill wake the fam up if I'm pissed
Press me & catch an extra 10, the .45 on some snooze button shit
^Nice one
Mayweather in person, I slip shots & give em back G
Cross at ur 'mouth, guard' ur face or get it sent to the nose bleeds
^Pretty good
Stop w/ the threats, u'll get ghost if I toast u w/ the gun
Channel that energy or get a medium to reach ya fam through one
^Decent, the wording seems a bit forced is why it's not all that.
Get bucked for acting tough, yeah my gat always down to ride
Funny ur records 1-8...7 Shots'll have have the pigs callin' in ur homicide
^Blah closer

vs


You real? Fuck lyin'.. I hear "Blue Steel" and I dump nines..
You hear "Blue Steal"'s a really good source of some punchlines..!
^ok
This battle the dark night of your soul -- one of your rough patches..
Cuz we know Knight is the sole reason you winning your tough matches..!
^Nah, the overused "(k)night" really hurt the delivery here
Don't get hype on his ass.. the bars this dude brings to beat me?
With all your recycling trash -- and you still losing to Greedy..??
^Nah, this a miss
"This homo's gay!" "You blow!" "You're lame!" Screw you, brother..
Your ideas are so-so played like YouTube covers..!
^U said he gay, then you said screw him, weird,, but even so the punch is lackluster at best.
Bash is forever nerd... you never heard the hood say "He gets us"..
Every bars got a gun in it like we're in the slums.. of east Texas..!
^Wording was odd, and the setup was a bit poor.


So yea, we got another fairly one sided battle here that came down to delivery and concepts v.s. the lack thereof perhaps.
H&D had a good structure throughout but his punches didn't follow suit and he missed many opportunities to deliver on bars.

V/ Bash

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Originally Posted by BashEmUP

Yayter...

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I really do this shit...

Ur an embarrassment, every vote he's dick riding the greats
Been on 'Blue balls' for months, ironic cuz every match u get raped
This was decent.
AR at ya door early, ill wake the fam up if I'm pissed
Press me & catch an extra 10, the .45 on some snooze button shit
Cool gun bar.
Mayweather in person, I slip shots & give em back G
Cross at ur 'mouth, guard' ur face or get it sent to the nose bleeds
I can appreciate the word association employed here, but it didn't pack a lot of sting for me.
Stop w/ the threats, u'll get ghost if I toast u w/ the gun
Channel that energy or get a medium to reach ya fam through one
Cool little jab. Real aggressive vibe.
Get bucked for acting tough, yeah my gat always down to ride
Funny ur records 1-8...7 Shots'll have have the pigs callin' in ur homicide
This was pretty mild.

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Originally Posted by High And Drunk

You real? Fuck lyin'.. I hear "Blue Steel" and I dump nines..
You hear "Blue Steal"'s a really good source of some punchlines..!
Decent personal.
This battle the dark night of your soul -- one of your rough patches..
Cuz we know Knight is the sole reason you winning your tough matches..!
I kind of have to take these personals at face value. That said, I wish you had flipped the knight angle a little better.
Don't get hype on his ass.. the bars this dude brings to beat me?
With all your recycling trash -- and you still losing to Greedy..??
Again, I'm sure the personal holds more weight to some. But I would've liked to see you flip the personal instead of just directly referencing the loss.
"This homo's gay!" "You blow!" "You're lame!" Screw you, brother..
Your ideas are so-so played like YouTube covers..!
This was a bit underwhelming.
Bash is forever nerd... you never heard the hood say "He gets us"..
Every bars got a gun in it like we're in the slums.. of east Texas..!
[B]This was okayish. Honestly counter gun bar angles are just about as played as gun bars now adays.

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Bar 1 - Tie
Bar 2 - Bash
Bar 3 - Tie.
Bar 4 - Bash
Bar 5 - TIe.

This was an okay battle. Bash took it by a close, but clear margin.

Vote - Bash

Bash wins