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Vs BashEmUp aka Odd Ways aka k punch aka death recon..
People questioned Pleth in the 1-2 until he gave you dome abrasions...
Asking "How tf he get in" til he laid you down like a home invasion...
You won't remember this beating or the force from the hard knee...
You'll just wake up after Bash...with out a slumber party.
Get held up with these twin glocks or prepare to surrender..
Cuz I'm coming with two straps for that belt like a pair of suspenders...
So many aliases...Tryna make a name 4 urself? You gotta odd way of showing it..
Finally settled on Bash em up...since that's what most of his opponents did..
If I told you his girl was easy? He'd prolly start denying the shit...
Fact is, I wound up pulling Punch's and I wasn't even trying to hit...
Ayo,
who the fuck are you geek? listen bash'll maul this lame,
funny my name was Ryno, yet ur the one w/ bones pokin' out ya frame,
i got my weight in the ranks, now im killin' this schmuck,
i spent the morning doin dead lifts, got ya whole fam packed in the trunk,
these fists'll take u to school, dawg ill punch ya life away,
uppercut'll hurl ya lid into the sky, todays ur graduation day,
aint been pressed to drop early, your a pussy & its easy to tell,
time to wash my hands w/ u, & scrape ya brains outta my nails,
these fists hit like thunder, u better call a pastor,
but why rain on ya face, it already looks like a natural disaster.
phalanx -
People questioned Pleth in the 1-2 until he gave you dome abrasions...
Asking "How tf he get in" til he laid you down like a home invasion...
pretty decent bar here..good 1-2 punch know what I'm saying? I've seen this kind of punch in your battle with Theo..but it was still dope nonetheless. good work here..
You won't remember this beating or the force from the hard knee...
You'll just wake up after Bash...with out a slumber party.
lmao@ this punchline..seemed pretty dope..you know how it is..good work here..had all the essentials for a good one..
Get held up with these twin glocks or prepare to surrender..
Cuz I'm coming with two straps for that belt like a pair of suspenders...
pretty decent one here..this was really nice..good work..
So many aliases...Tryna make a name 4 urself? You gotta odd way of showing it..
Finally settled on Bash em up...since that's what most of his opponents did..
I don't know about this one..wasn't really feeling it as much..it was okay..could've been better is all..
If I told you his girl was easy? He'd prolly start denying the shit...
Fact is, I wound up pulling Punch's and I wasn't even trying to hit...
lmao..pretty decent..but again..could've been better..twas' okay..
Bash -
who the fuck are you geek? listen bash'll maul this lame,
funny my name was Ryno, yet ur the one w/ bones pokin' out ya frame,
lmao..at this one..lool..twas' okay..had good pun in it..niice overall..
i got my weight in the ranks, now im killin' this schmuck,
i spent the morning doin dead lifts, got ya whole fam packed in the trunk,
lool..this was okay..nice here..
these fists'll take u to school, dawg ill punch ya life away,
uppercut'll hurl ya lid into the sky, todays ur graduation day,
I've seen many punches like this..was okay..decent..
aint been pressed to drop early, your a pussy & its easy to tell,
time to wash my hands w/ u, & scrape ya brains outta my nails,
lmao at this..could be better..needs more to it..
these fists hit like thunder, u better call a pastor,
but why rain on ya face, it already looks like a natural disaster.
lool..needs more to it..something else..but okay..
overall - decent battle guys..both came decently..but for better puns and wordplay I got phalanx winning by a hair..niice one..
v/ phalanx
Get held up with these twin glocks or prepare to surrender..
Cuz I'm coming with two straps for that belt like a pair of suspenders...
So many aliases...Tryna make a name 4 urself? You gotta odd way of showing it..
Finally settled on Bash em up...since that's what most of his opponents did..
If I told you his girl was easy? He'd prolly start denying the shit...
Fact is, I wound up pulling Punch's and I wasn't even trying to hit...
Vs
who the fuck are you geek? listen bash'll maul this lame,
funny my name was Ryno, yet ur the one w/ bones pokin' out ya frame,
these fists'll take u to school, dawg ill punch ya life away,
uppercut'll hurl ya lid into the sky, todays ur graduation day,
aint been pressed to drop early, your a pussy & its easy to tell,
time to wash my hands w/ u, & scrape ya brains outta my nails,
These were the best lines, flat out... N both scored a 6\10 .
Good showing from both with nice structure and not many forced concepts. Although well conceived on both sides it came down to a better personal approach as well as better flow on the side of
Vote \ Phalanx
People questioned Pleth in the 1-2 until he gave you dome abrasions...
Asking "How tf he get in" til he laid you down like a home invasion...
You won't remember this beating or the force from the hard knee...
You'll just wake up after Bash...with out a slumber party.
If I told you his girl was easy? He'd prolly start denying the shit...
Fact is, I wound up pulling Punch's and I wasn't even trying to hit...
vs
i got my weight in the ranks, now im killin' this schmuck,
i spent the morning doin dead lifts, got ya whole fam packed in the trunk,
these fists'll take u to school, dawg ill punch ya life away,
uppercut'll hurl ya lid into the sky, todays ur graduation day,
v/Phalanx
i feel like Bash's verse was a rushed or something. the concepts were good but the execution felt underdeveloped. imo this isnt like a normal Bash drop (who typically drops in the first hour of a battle lol). with that said Phalanx had a pretty good drop, it was more sound than his opponents. Bash's dead lift bar was dope, i felt the evilness in that bar, Pulling punch bar was fire for Phal. good showing people.
People questioned Pleth in the 1-2 until he gave you dome abrasions...
Asking "How tf he get in" til he laid you down like a home invasion...
^fire
You won't remember this beating or the force from the hard knee...
You'll just wake up after Bash...with out a slumber party.
^ehh
Get held up with these twin glocks or prepare to surrender..
Cuz I'm coming with two straps for that belt like a pair of suspenders...
^2 straps/suspenders is super played but the belt tie in made it relevant, so decent bar
So many aliases...Tryna make a name 4 urself? You gotta odd way of showing it..
Finally settled on Bash em up...since that's what most of his opponents did..
^nah too easy/obvious
If I told you his girl was easy? He'd prolly start denying the shit...
Fact is, I wound up pulling Punch's and I wasn't even trying to hit...
^dope np
Vs.
who the fuck are you geek? listen bash'll maul this lame,
funny my name was Ryno, yet ur the one w/ bones pokin' out ya frame,
^cool start
i got my weight in the ranks, now im killin' this schmuck,
i spent the morning doin dead lifts, got ya whole fam packed in the trunk,
^dead lift played but points for the humor factor
these fists'll take u to school, dawg ill punch ya life away,
uppercut'll hurl ya lid into the sky, todays ur graduation day
^graduation/caps/lids in the air all played to death
aint been pressed to drop early, your a pussy & its easy to tell,
time to wash my hands w/ u, & scrape ya brains outta my nails,
^ok
these fists hit like thunder, u better call a pastor,
but why rain on ya face, it already looks like a natural disaster.
^liked it
V/phal for the haymakers
Sidenote: how y'all let these niggas drop 10 lines for a champ match??
People questioned Pleth in the 1-2 until he gave you dome abrasions...
Asking "How tf he get in" til he laid you down like a home invasion...
good bar
You won't remember this beating or the force from the hard knee...
You'll just wake up after Bash...with out a slumber party.
nah
Get held up with these twin glocks or prepare to surrender..
Cuz I'm coming with two straps for that belt like a pair of suspenders...
pretty cool here
So many aliases...Tryna make a name 4 urself? You gotta odd way of showing it..
Finally settled on Bash em up...since that's what most of his opponents did..
ehh not feelin it
If I told you his girl was easy? He'd prolly start denying the shit...
Fact is, I wound up pulling Punch's and I wasn't even trying to hit...
alright
Vs
who the fuck are you geek? listen bash'll maul this lame,
funny my name was Ryno, yet ur the one w/ bones pokin' out ya frame,
cool opener
i got my weight in the ranks, now im killin' this schmuck,
i spent the morning doin dead lifts, got ya whole fam packed in the trunk,
nah this is played
these fists'll take u to school, dawg ill punch ya life away,
uppercut'll hurl ya lid into the sky, todays ur graduation day,
decent flip
aint been pressed to drop early, your a pussy & its easy to tell,
time to wash my hands w/ u, & scrape ya brains outta my nails,
nah not feelin
these fists hit like thunder, u better call a pastor,
but why rain on ya face, it already looks like a natural disaster.
lol foh w this
This battle was pretty one sided tbh, phalanx had some pretty cool stuff and bash seems pretty burnt out, you had a long ass run fam but def time to take a few.
Vote Phalanx
Phalanx wins