5 bars(10 Lines)
Due by tomorrow night
Good luck I’ll post first
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5 bars(10 Lines)
Due by tomorrow night
Good luck I’ll post first
@ Bahriman were your verse at man see this why I took the win last time I knew you wouldn’t respond.
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Duckin that work
I’ll have it posted in a few hrsQuote:
Originally Posted by Razor Sharp
This knife’ll slice through this bad guy, I don’t fuck around
Won’t even see Razors Edge cos on sight he’ll be on his back laid out on the ground
Talkin muscle? Relax’er I’ll roll up to your crib & bed your lady
When it comes to sex a pill got her feelin good yet she dnt fuk w/You unless she highly medicated
I’ll beat your family..But your G Ma? I’ll rock the bitch worse
Then punch Rays son! Ironic your a sorry excuse for a father figure
You Rich’N wack. Bitch it’s facts.. I don’t condone the wimp shit
Heat’ll have you melt down more than SoIcey when you vote against him!
All your bars are trash, no one will rep ya shit
Literally needed me to NS is the only way you’ll get a win
@Razor Sharp
Run up JAMES HARDEN beard on with a ROCKET, take off 1/2 ya back
TRIPLE THREAT, pump the strap, B-4 I shoot it I gotta GATHER-STEP
Bring out da OLD-HEAT, ur whole "D" played, wet u up, leave U N da WATER to "WADE"
RUSSELL WILSON flow, I SEE-ERA's N U loser, SEA-I'll-HAWK U, n son ur lil FUTURE
I got RINGS, RAZOR a vet, "RONDO", u "BALL" but ur BARS got dat FUNNY FORM "LONZO"
U talk wreck-less 2 me it sounds "GREEK-FREEK" RAZOR spray LLamas
Play wit "BUCKS" I pull out pumps, same wing-span as "GIANNIS"
4 dem "LARRY-BIRDS" I'll DOUBLE-CROSS U, I'm "KYRIE" over carrots
These shells uh "PIERCE" u "COUSY" when RAZOR "ROB" bet you "PARRISH"
@Bahriman
You should have no-showed again R.I.P. Bahr
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Still can't believe how this got slept on, I literally Ripped this dudes to shreds with the Bars. This verse alone is hall of fame worthy!!!!
@Razor Sharp
Check ins verses and votes only in battles. Stop free posting final warning
Thanks
-STAFF
Rays son, soiceyQuote:
Originally Posted by Bahriman
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V/BahrimanQuote:
Originally Posted by Razor Sharp
This knife’ll slice through this bad guy, I don’t fuck around
Won’t even see Razors Edge cos on sight he’ll be on his back laid out on the ground
Decent hit/wordplay. Decent rhyme.
Talkin muscle? Relax’er I’ll roll up to your crib & bed your lady
When it comes to sex a pill got her feelin good yet she dnt fuk w/You unless she highly medicated
Cold blooded, rhyme doesn't much connect and a bit winded.
I’ll beat your family..But your G Ma? I’ll rock the bitch worse
Then punch Rays son! Ironic your a sorry excuse for a father figure
More cold blooded personal but doesn't rhyme or flow for shit.
You Rich’N wack. Bitch it’s facts.. I don’t condone the wimp shit
Heat’ll have you melt down more than SoIcey when you vote against him!
Decent bar with some multiples.
All your bars are trash, no one will rep ya shit
Literally needed me to NS is the only way you’ll get a win
Not much of a rhyme, not a great finish.
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Run up JAMES HARDEN beard on with a ROCKET, take off 1/2 ya back
TRIPLE THREAT, pump the strap, B-4 I shoot it I gotta GATHER-STEP
Flows nice, wordplay is there. Decent rhyme holding it together.
Bring out da OLD-HEAT, ur whole "D" played, wet u up, leave U N da WATER to "WADE"
RUSSELL WILSON flow, I SEE-ERA's N U loser, SEA-I'll-HAWK U, n son ur lil FUTURE
Decent rhymes, I see the wordplay not super cohesive.
I got RINGS, RAZOR a vet, "RONDO", u "BALL" but ur BARS got dat FUNNY FORM "LONZO"
U talk wreck-less 2 me it sounds "GREEK-FREEK" RAZOR spray LLamas
Mediocre, wordplay is there. Basketball references becoming a dead horse.
Play wit "BUCKS" I pull out pumps, same wing-span as "GIANNIS"
4 dem "LARRY-BIRDS" I'll DOUBLE-CROSS U, I'm "KYRIE" over carrots
These shells uh "PIERCE" u "COUSY" when RAZOR "ROB" bet you "PARRISH"
Rhyme scheme connects. More of that word play. Finish is OK.
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Alright this is the way I see it. Bahriman came more personal but needed tighter rhymes to make it cohesive and take motion. Both opened up pretty strong. Wordplay was there, Razor had bit more quality and quantity. Although the basketball metaphors got pretty boring after the second one. Rhyme scheme, flow, multiples, format - Razor had the advantage for the majority of the battle. A little bit stronger finish from Razor and although not as personal far more cohesive of a verse.
Vote: Razor Sharp
Quote:
Originally Posted by Bahriman
Quote:
Originally Posted by Razor Sharp
Vote The first guy. This was a rough one boys.
Vote bah
Better verse.. Nothing really hard here but ok jabs.. Razor seems like a audio dude texting for the first time.. Gotta work on set ups and putting a punch together