LLL WK 1:Bomb Bard Vs Ryno - Ryno wins

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@Bomb Bard @Ryno

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Quote:

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Originally Posted by Ryno Vs ronin

plus this dudes always acting, totin’ guns aint up ur ally
only time ur in the streets with the stick raised, is holding signs in a rally

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Vs Ronin ur had wack Opinions, I elect U my weakest win
I'll Raise sticks & Rally a clique to march;..To shoot so u never breathe again
'Feed Me More' punches & a shotty'll have U feelin limp
Got Buckshot RNDs to 'Enter RyBack' so he'll never enter this Ring again
RB gotta Pulse!.. I'll punch ur chest till dude gaspin
Way I walk over U have ur heart race & the site live longer than U, Faggot
Yea U got the right to fight, I'll have U down N gone quick
1 swing @ Riot'll Have U pushed to the point U breaks out In loses
Blaze ur kid, one shot & ur family wont be born
S'like u pen ur bars on a wet sheet that cleaned up Lenox tears off a keyboard

Kill Spree aka Bomb Bard

Im known to kill wack rappers, homie those bars just arent good
I mean if i take bard out, its a standing ovation cause we know he never could
Im gonna leave this liar hit, if he totes trust me this dude wont fire it
the only time u’ve leveled up to drill some shit, was changing a tire bitch
Ur mad cuz dia runs the site better, listen faggot quit the hatin’
Watch this haymaker bomb spree, without blowing up multiple locations
This league just wasnt ready, truth is im the toughest out right now
If u see things differently, its cause im gouging ur fucking eyeballs out
This dude might run n tattle, These punches r gonna leave em rattled
Its ironic ur name is bomb bard, cuz u’ve NEVER dropped fire in a battle
N we know that he’s dead broke, bitches hate when u hit bro
Last time a bitch had bomb sex, she wished a stick of dynamite flew in his window

Vs Ronin ur had wack Opinions, I elect U my weakest win
I'll Raise sticks & Rally a clique to march;..To shoot so u never breathe again
not the best stick line but but not the worst
'Feed Me More' punches & a shotty'll have U feelin limp
Got Buckshot RNDs to 'Enter RyBack' so he'll never enter this Ring again
alright
RB gotta Pulse!.. I'll punch ur chest till dude gaspin
Way I walk over U have ur heart race & the site live longer than U, Faggot
could have been decent with better wording
Yea U got the right to fight, I'll have U down N gone quick
1 swing @ Riot'll Have U pushed to the point U breaks out In loses
again, had potential but was done bad
Blaze ur kid, one shot & ur family wont be born
S'like u pen ur bars on a wet sheet that cleaned up Lenox tears off a keyboard
nah

1 ok
4 misses

vs


Im known to kill wack rappers, homie those bars just arent good
I mean if i take bard out, its a standing ovation cause we know he never could
mmmm decent at best
Im gonna leave this liar hit, if he totes trust me this dude wont fire it
the only time u’ve leveled up to drill some shit, was changing a tire bitch
nah you know this wasn’t good lol
Ur mad cuz dia runs the site better, listen faggot quit the hatin’
Watch this haymaker bomb spree, without blowing up multiple locations
Decent
This league just wasnt ready, truth is im the toughest out right now
If u see things differently, its cause im gouging ur fucking eyeballs out
alright better
This dude might run n tattle, These punches r gonna leave em rattled
Its ironic ur name is bomb bard, cuz u’ve NEVER dropped fire in a battle
cool
N we know that he’s dead broke, bitches hate when u hit bro
Last time a bitch had bomb sex, she wished a stick of dynamite flew in his window
lol nah


1 good
1 ok
2 Decent
2 misses


I’ve seen bomb bard drop a lot better, or maybe that’s Bash. Idk I thought they were the same person lol anyways yeah not the best I’ve seen from you. Maybe shake off the rust and touch up on the wording in your bars. You have cool ideas but wording is what seems to be your issue right now. Ryno you been dropping pretty good on NCs and although I feel like this was a step down in verse quality, it still easily did the job.


Vote Ryno

Vs Ronin ur had wack Opinions, I elect U my weakest win
I'll Raise sticks & Rally a clique to march;..To shoot so u never breathe again
hmmm, this was okay
'Feed Me More' punches & a shotty'll have U feelin limp
Got Buckshot RNDs to 'Enter RyBack' so he'll never enter this Ring again
feelin limp / ring again is really off to me, that aside the double use of Enter makes the wording redundant.. ryback wp was cool but this could've been a lot better
RB gotta Pulse!.. I'll punch ur chest till dude gaspin
Way I walk over U have ur heart race & the site live longer than U, Faggot
not feelin
Yea U got the right to fight, I'll have U down N gone quick
1 swing @ Riot'll Have U pushed to the point U breaks out In loses
breaks out In loses? nahhh... wp was solid again too but this was delivered all wrong & really choppy
Blaze ur kid, one shot & ur family wont be born
S'like u pen ur bars on a wet sheet that cleaned up Lenox tears off a keyboard
ehhh, not feelin


vs.


Im known to kill wack rappers, homie those bars just arent good
I mean if i take bard out, its a standing ovation cause we know he never could
okay, dece np
Im gonna leave this liar hit, if he totes trust me this dude wont fire it
the only time u’ve leveled up to drill some shit, was changing a tire bitch
this was okay, wording was cool - concept good/not great
Ur mad cuz dia runs the site better, listen faggot quit the hatin’
Watch this haymaker bomb spree, without blowing up multiple locations
dece
This league just wasnt ready, truth is im the toughest out right now
If u see things differently, its cause im gouging ur fucking eyeballs out
cool, don't think ive seen a play on the see things diff phrase.. this was nice, reminds me of my look into you line lol
This dude might run n tattle, These punches r gonna leave em rattled
Its ironic ur name is bomb bard, cuz u’ve NEVER dropped fire in a battle
solid, seems pretty straightforward but wording was good and it worked well for a closer
N we know that he’s dead broke, bitches hate when u hit bro
Last time a bitch had bomb sex, she wished a stick of dynamite flew in his window
mannn I feel like this could've been dope, but I feel like u got lazy with it lol.. okay how it was done

Cool battle.. I feel like Bomb Bard has some solid potential conceptually but I really disliked his wording & the way he formulated his punches.... Ryno no real bangers imo but some solid nameplays and u were pretty consistent throughout... I have Ryno here

Vote - Ryno

bomb bard
Vs Ronin ur had wack Opinions, I elect U my weakest win
I'll Raise sticks & Rally a clique to march;..To shoot so u never breathe again
this was decent, it could of been better.

'Feed Me More' punches & a shotty'll have U feelin limp
Got Buckshot RNDs to 'Enter RyBack' so he'll never enter this Ring again
you already had an again rhyme, but this was a coo wrestling bar

RB gotta Pulse!.. I'll punch ur chest till dude gaspin
Way I walk over U have ur heart race & the site live longer than U, Faggot
I am not feeling this one.

Yea U got the right to fight, I'll have U down N gone quick
1 swing @ Riot'll Have U pushed to the point U breaks out In loses
I'm not feeling this one either.

Blaze ur kid, one shot & ur family wont be born
S'like u pen ur bars on a wet sheet that cleaned up Lenox tears off a keyboard
grrrr gunplay.

You had a decent verse here with some hard hits here and there, but I know you can do better than this

vs

Rhyno
Im known to kill wack rappers, homie those bars just arent good
I mean if i take bard out, its a standing ovation cause we know he never could
eh, I'm not digging this.

Im gonna leave this liar hit, if he totes trust me this dude wont fire it
the only time u’ve leveled up to drill some shit, was changing a tire bitch
coo, but err gunplay.

Ur mad cuz dia runs the site better, listen faggot quit the hatin’
Watch this haymaker bomb spree, without blowing up multiple locations
this bar sucks here.

This league just wasnt ready, truth is im the toughest out right now
If u see things differently, its cause im gouging ur fucking eyeballs out
this is more horrorcore, no punch.

This dude might run n tattle, These punches r gonna leave em rattled
Its ironic ur name is bomb bard, cuz u’ve NEVER dropped fire in a battle
I liked this one for some reason, good job.

N we know that he’s dead broke, bitches hate when u hit bro
Last time a bitch had bomb sex, she wished a stick of dynamite flew in his window
this one was cringe worthy, not really feeling

You had a nice hit with the fire in a battle bar, I think you could of went harder with pucnhes, this wasn't a hard battle to take if you woulda did those things.

I think bomb did enough to win this, rhyno needs to have more punches and limit his use of self hype bars.

v/BOMB

Quote:

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Originally Posted by Bomb Bard

Vs Ronin ur had wack Opinions, I elect U my weakest win
I'll Raise sticks & Rally a clique to march;..To shoot so u never breathe again
miss
'Feed Me More' punches & a shotty'll have U feelin limp
Got Buckshot RNDs to 'Enter RyBack' so he'll never enter this Ring again
dope concept but having enter twice in 1 line ruined it.. not completely tho so this is a jab
RB gotta Pulse!.. I'll punch ur chest till dude gaspin
Way I walk over U have ur heart race & the site live longer than U, Faggot
hell no
Yea U got the right to fight, I'll have U down N gone quick
1 swing @ Riot'll Have U pushed to the point U breaks out In loses
shouldve done something different w/ it, but ok np
Blaze ur kid, one shot & ur family wont be born
S'like u pen ur bars on a wet sheet that cleaned up Lenox tears off a keyboard
terrible

0 gd punches
2 jabs
3 misses

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vs

Ryno
Im known to kill wack rappers, homie those bars just arent good
I mean if i take bard out, its a standing ovation cause we know he never could
ok
Im gonna leave this liar hit, if he totes trust me this dude wont fire it
the only time u’ve leveled up to drill some shit, was changing a tire bitch
ehh, reach
Ur mad cuz dia runs the site better, listen faggot quit the hatin’
Watch this haymaker bomb spree, without blowing up multiple locations
nah, too simple
This league just wasnt ready, truth is im the toughest out right now
If u see things differently, its cause im gouging ur fucking eyeballs out
dece
This dude might run n tattle, These punches r gonna leave em rattled
Its ironic ur name is bomb bard, cuz u’ve NEVER dropped fire in a battle
under par but ur misses arent as bad tbh
N we know that he’s dead broke, bitches hate when u hit bro
Last time a bitch had bomb sex, she wished a stick of dynamite flew in his window
nvm, this was bad

0 gd punches
2 jabs
3 misses

ill have to come back to this one

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v/ryno
tied on the scorecard for me but tbr ry's wording & execution was just overall better than his opponent's, even tho his opponent had better concepts
close af

after reading all open battles, i wouldnt do a botw in the next mag.. no batt deserves the title @Ronin

Vs Ronin ur had wack Opinions, I elect U my weakest win
I'll Raise sticks & Rally a clique to march;..To shoot so u never breathe again

Nah
'Feed Me More' punches & a shotty'll have U feelin limp
Got Buckshot RNDs to 'Enter RyBack' so he'll never enter this Ring again

Light, not harsh at all

RB gotta Pulse!.. I'll punch ur chest till dude gaspin
Way I walk over U have ur heart race & the site live longer than U, Faggot

your wording is bad here.

Yea U got the right to fight, I'll have U down N gone quick
1 swing @ Riot'll Have U pushed to the point U breaks out In loses

No

Blaze ur kid, one shot & ur family wont be born
S'like u pen ur bars on a wet sheet that cleaned up Lenox tears off a keyboard

No, appreciate the humorous approach


vs


Im known to kill wack rappers, homie those bars just arent good
I mean if i take bard out, its a standing ovation cause we know he never could

EH
Im gonna leave this liar hit, if he totes trust me this dude wont fire it
the only time u’ve leveled up to drill some shit, was changing a tire bitch

Eh, wording was weak here.

Ur mad cuz dia runs the site better, listen faggot quit the hatin’
Watch this haymaker bomb spree, without blowing up multiple locations

Light, the punch wasn't bad. You just lack harshness.

This league just wasnt ready, truth is im the toughest out right now
If u see things differently, its cause im gouging ur fucking eyeballs out

Light.

This dude might run n tattle, These punches r gonna leave em rattled
Its ironic ur name is bomb bard, cuz u’ve NEVER dropped fire in a battle

eh

N we know that he’s dead broke, bitches hate when u hit bro
Last time a bitch had bomb sex, she wished a stick of dynamite flew in his window

lol ok cool


v/ RYno better wording and cleaner lands. Spree you really have an awkward way of writing lines.

Vs Ronin ur had wack Opinions, I elect U my weakest win
I'll Raise sticks & Rally a clique to march;..To shoot so u never breathe again
--- decent personal not much wit tho...
'Feed Me More' punches & a shotty'll have U feelin limp
Got Buckshot RNDs to 'Enter RyBack' so he'll never enter this Ring again
--- ok np.....
RB gotta Pulse!.. I'll punch ur chest till dude gaspin
Way I walk over U have ur heart race & the site live longer than U, Faggot
--- nice....
Yea U got the right to fight, I'll have U down N gone quick
1 swing @ Riot'll Have U pushed to the point U breaks out In loses
--- all over the place but I like the np. Flip was good but coulda been better...
Blaze ur kid, one shot & ur family wont be born
S'like u pen ur bars on a wet sheet that cleaned up Lenox tears off a keyboard
--- throwaway. How's one shot gonna make his family not be born if he has a family. See what u was tryna say but this was just nothing. Set up had nothing to do with the punch, and that coulda been a good concept....

Vs

Im known to kill wack rappers, homie those bars just arent good
I mean if i take bard out, its a standing ovation cause we know he never could
--- bard out is nice, the flip was bad. Coulda worded this to hit harder....
Im gonna leave this liar hit, if he totes trust me this dude wont fire it
the only time u’ve leveled up to drill some shit, was changing a tire bitch
--- nah bruh....
Ur mad cuz dia runs the site better, listen faggot quit the hatin’
Watch this haymaker bomb spree, without blowing up multiple locations
--- not a fan....
This league just wasnt ready, truth is im the toughest out right now
If u see things differently, its cause im gouging ur fucking eyeballs out
--- played but k....
This dude might run n tattle, These punches r gonna leave em rattled
Its ironic ur name is bomb bard, cuz u’ve NEVER dropped fire in a battle
--- nope.....
N we know that he’s dead broke, bitches hate when u hit bro
Last time a bitch had bomb sex, she wished a stick of dynamite flew in his window
--- bomb sex coulda been good, but the flip killed it dead.




Gotta go with bomb bard. He had the better executed concepts and landed more.


V. Bomb