WK 12 Lightning Round: MV Vs Revelation - MV wins

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Bars due by 1PM ASAP TODAY
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@MV @Revelation 18:3

anyone u look up to s'gone bullets barely miss you, now life is flashing before rival's mind
who ever rev-idolize gon' feel quite alive, that moment before doctors tryna restore their vital signs

Damn my bad bro.. I forgot this was due. At work check it..

Look fuck facial hair just to trim; his body I Moustache him,
Till i have M stretched across, like a bitch dats good Orgasm...

MV’s Bar was stretched to death but I fuck with that concept/name play.... not a fan of single letter diss rev and it seemed a bit rushed. I got MV here

MV- i liked the angle you went for here.
The nameplay is debatable, w the 'rev' imo.
But you had way too much words here.

Vs
Rev'- visually, stretched M is a dope concept. So props for that.
But i hated how you worded and executed that M angle.

Both had shit i liked/disliked.
After reading both bars outloud, back to back:
Vote MV

mv
a bit stretched not unlike longbar but decent concept, it has to be said a certain a way & doesnt work the other but whatev. overall jab

r18
tbh that shit was whack, both the setup annd followthru
hated ur np & tie in wps. shit just doesnt fly n reads awkward af

v/mv

I feel the same as all of these other retards.

My only thing is I had to read MV's bar like 17 times. And stretched M is dope.

So my vote is Rev.

3-1 closing this in 1 hr

Not a fan of either tbh. I guess ill go MV for the better concept.

v. MV

MV wins