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CHECK IN: SUNDAY
VERSES DUE: TUESDAY
It's 12.
Quote:
Originally Posted by Kill Spree
Quote:
Originally Posted by Kill Spree
Quote:
Originally Posted by Kill Spree
His skills are like his own mobile service. I found out that he's fronting.
Left MT-handed, Thought he was climbing for something but was amounting to nothing
He wanted a photo battle but I refused because I want him dead.
He'll still get a pic but that's when I'm swinging an ice axe to his head.
He's on netcees asking Dominate to return to RB. It seems that he is weak.
Little did he know he'll still see dominate.... when I dominate him out of this league.
I'll beat this Boston fella so bad, I'm in a selfish mood. Hell-bent too.
Cripple him with these punches that he'll need to rely on a Walker like the Celtics Do.
He uses his alcholic addiction as an excuse on the forum but truth is, he's past his prime.
It doesn't matter if he was trashed yesterday or trashed today. He's trash all the time.
This'll be a smooth...fast slaughter. Don't believe when he says he's a true rap scholar.
Real Killas don't fuck with cats like me cuz I'm quick to kill a pussy like Luka Magnotta
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Kill Spree
His skills are like his own mobile service. I found out that he's fronting.
Left MT-handed, Thought he was climbing for something but was amounting to nothing
->i already read a mountain bar this week and i thought that one was better.. it was alright
He wanted a photo battle but I refused because I want him dead.
He'll still get a pic but that's when I'm swinging an ice axe to his head.
->shit has been done .. cant give ya any love here
He's on netcees asking Dominate to return to RB. It seems that he is weak.
Little did he know he'll still see dominate.... when I dominate him out of this league.
->nah
I'll beat this Boston fella so bad, I'm in a selfish mood. Hell-bent too.
Cripple him with these punches that he'll need to rely on a Walker like the Celtics Do.
->wasnt set up to hit hard but it was okay
He uses his alcholic addiction as an excuse on the forum but truth is, he's past his prime.
It doesn't matter if he was trashed yesterday or trashed today. He's trash all the time.
->nah dude.. shit was weak
This'll be a smooth...fast slaughter. Don't believe when he says he's a true rap scholar.
Real Killas don't fuck with cats like me cuz I'm quick to kill a pussy like Luka Magnotta
->come on bro.. cat/pussy line??? for real.. fuck no
vs
Listen Faggot...
Thats the muscle behind tough talk? pfft.. U not hard, fellow
You being Intense is a joke! I could use your arms as sticks to roast Marshmellows
-> a fucking in tents line lmao..wtf is happening in here..flipped decent tho.. but in tents dude
Gun away..Drunk punch you to death cos you lame N queer
Fists Pop Pabst to the Gut, till'E turns the 3 colors of THAT case of Beer
-> ok
B4 U shot? I'll kick ur face in. really stomp this dweeb
Boots just Malinoux till I put the Dogs to ur chest like that Soccer Team
-> iight
Empty the shotty - An Image artists wish to rate
Had Smear Blood On the Wall..I'd make Millions if they saw how I Finger Paint
->wasn't to hard.. but ok
I slaughter all my NME's & faggot...You soft
You'll let out A Beast Cry b4 I kill that could rival Barcotic after a loss
->alright
Punch your teeth down ur throat, so foods a flaw
The devastation of this Scrapple have you eating that food through a straw
->ok.. cant help but feel like this is done but i cant recall seeing it..soo alright bar
i seen slecht killing them 1-2 battles when he shows up but this verse was on somne other shit
a pussy cat line... never bro.. you better off with a michael jackson knows/nose line or 'in over ur head like midgets in swimming pools'
then the dominate line.... the trashed line.. nah bro..mountian was ciool but been done better by someone already this week.. no hate bro but this shit was not up to par..
kill came mild here to.. wasnt feeling much of what he brought but it still was a little stronger then want slecht was coming wit.. wasnt the best battle guys
v. kill spree
His skills are like his own mobile service. I found out that he's fronting.
Left MT-handed, Thought he was climbing for something but was amounting to nothing
I literally dropped a mountain bar this same week.
He wanted a photo battle but I refused because I want him dead.
He'll still get a pic but that's when I'm swinging an ice axe to his head.
this is very outdated
He's on netcees asking Dominate to return to RB. It seems that he is weak.
Little did he know he'll still see dominate.... when I dominate him out of this league.
said dominate 3 times in the same bar
I'll beat this Boston fella so bad, I'm in a selfish mood. Hell-bent too.
Cripple him with these punches that he'll need to rely on a Walker like the Celtics Do.
missing a word or 2 like so bad or something. I dont think hes a boston guy either just Massachusetts
He uses his alcholic addiction as an excuse on the forum but truth is, he's past his prime.
It doesn't matter if he was trashed yesterday or trashed today. He's trash all the time.
its ok
This'll be a smooth...fast slaughter. Don't believe when he says he's a true rap scholar.
Real Killas don't fuck with cats like me cuz I'm quick to kill a pussy like Luka Magnotta
decent
Vs
Listen Faggot...
Thats the muscle behind tough talk? pfft.. U not hard, fellow
You being Intense is a joke! I could use your arms as sticks to roast Marshmellows
old ass wordplay but funny flip
Gun away..Drunk punch you to death cos you lame N queer
Fists Pop Pabst to the Gut, till'E turns the 3 colors of THAT case of Beer
didnt like this
B4 U shot? I'll kick ur face in. really stomp this dweeb
Boots just Malinoux till I put the Dogs to ur chest like that Soccer Team
ok
Empty the shotty - An Image artists wish to rate
Had Smear Blood On the Wall..I'd make Millions if they saw how I Finger Paint
worded weird
I slaughter all my NME's & faggot...You soft
You'll let out A Beast Cry b4 I kill that could rival Barcotic after a loss
digging it
Punch your teeth down ur throat, so foods a flaw
The devastation of this Scrapple have you eating that food through a straw
decent
Not sure what happened with slecht he usually drops better than this
v/ks
Slecht
His skills are like his own mobile service. I found out that he's fronting.
Left MT-handed, Thought he was climbing for something but was amounting to nothing
Gotta be aware of whats going on around the league. Fresh dropped the same shit, same week, days ahead of you. This would've been ok, but it's lessened dramatically cuz you were second.
He wanted a photo battle but I refused because I want him dead.
He'll still get a pic but that's when I'm swinging an ice axe to his head.
Above avg filler. Would've been avg but it's a recent personal
He's on netcees asking Dominate to return to RB. It seems that he is weak.
Little did he know he'll still see dominate.... when I dominate him out of this league.
Nah this is lazy and doesn't rhyme well
I'll beat this Boston fella so bad, I'm in a selfish mood. Hell-bent too.
Cripple him with these punches that he'll need to rely on a Walker like the Celtics Do.
Theme is cool, but the punch is very statement-ish.
He uses his alcholic addiction as an excuse on the forum but truth is, he's past his prime.
It doesn't matter if he was trashed yesterday or trashed today. He's trash all the time.
A bit wordy, and again, seems lazy like the dominate bar
This'll be a smooth...fast slaughter. Don't believe when he says he's a true rap scholar.
Real Killas don't fuck with cats like me cuz I'm quick to kill a pussy like Luka Magnotta
Looked him up so I get it, but the punch aint hit. Not really a diss.
Having an amounting bar this week after Fresh is inexcusable. As you can tell from my breakdown, the theme of this verse was laziness and lack of creativity in the punches. Luka, Celtics, and Ice axe aren't even dissing him.
4/10
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Kill Spree
Listen Faggot...
Thats the muscle behind tough talk? pfft.. U not hard, fellow
You being Intense is a joke! I could use your arms as sticks to roast Marshmellows
Having a link to someone's pic and using it for a bar is, by definition, exactly what a pic battle is. Dude said he wasn't with it. This bar should be DQed. If you were attacking his avi or something, that'd be different.
Gun away..Drunk punch you to death cos you lame N queer
Fists Pop Pabst to the Gut, till'E turns the 3 colors of THAT case of Beer
My first impression was damn the punch is worded weirdly. The fuck is up with the capitalization? As an overall punch it's meh. Not creative enough
B4 U shot? I'll kick ur face in. really stomp this dweeb
Boots just Malinoux till I put the Dogs to ur chest like that Soccer Team
If you meant Malinois, ("mahl - in - wah") this wp didn't work like you wanted it to.
Empty the shotty - An Image artists wish to rate
Had Smear Blood On the Wall..I'd make Millions if they saw how I Finger Paint
Didn't hit, wasn't a diss
I slaughter all my NME's & faggot...You soft
You'll let out A Beast Cry b4 I kill that could rival Barcotic after a loss
So much focus on the word/nameplays, that the diss is subpar. And the setup line is lazy af
Punch your teeth down ur throat, so foods a flaw
The devastation of this Scrapple have you eating that food through a straw
Simple, but aight
4/10
You had the same issue as Schlet. If you go through each of your bars, and single out the concept behind each one, you'll realize you're barely even dissing him. Just, "i'll punch him in the gut, stomp his chest, shoot him etc.." Some ppl fuck wit that. I would too if this was a true rap battle in person. But in text, shit gets old quick. I need more creativity. I need multiple syllable rhyme schemes. I need double and triple entendres. I need setups that lead into the punch creatively. I need more than one wordplay etc..
I think both verses are equally disappointing. I'm literally flipping a coin.
V Schlet
sleit
His skills are like his own mobile service. I found out that he's fronting.
Left MT-handed, Thought he was climbing for something but was amounting to nothing
left empty handed wp wasn't feeling none of this bar tbh.
He wanted a photo battle but I refused because I want him dead.
He'll still get a pic but that's when I'm swinging an ice axe to his head.
eh, i'm not really diging this, I see what you did with the ice pick tthough.
He's on netcees asking Dominate to return to RB. It seems that he is weak.
Little did he know he'll still see dominate.... when I dominate him out of this league.
okay this is better, and there is a personal to it.. I like.
I'll beat this Boston fella so bad, I'm in a selfish mood. Hell-bent too.
Cripple him with these punches that he'll need to rely on a Walker like the Celtics Do.
another good hit here I like this.
He uses his alcholic addiction as an excuse on the forum but truth is, he's past his prime.
It doesn't matter if he was trashed yesterday or trashed today. He's trash all the time.
I get the trashed/alcoholic wp, I just don't like this bar.
This'll be a smooth...fast slaughter. Don't believe when he says he's a true rap scholar.
Real Killas don't fuck with cats like me cuz I'm quick to kill a pussy like Luka Magnotta
nope, this was a big miss.
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kill spree
Thats the muscle behind tough talk? pfft.. U not hard, fellow
You being Intense is a joke! I could use your arms as sticks to roast Marshmellows
eh, not really feeling this much, needs more punch.
Gun away..Drunk punch you to death cos you lame N queer
Fists Pop Pabst to the Gut, till'E turns the 3 colors of THAT case of Beer
eh, this was cool.
B4 U shot? I'll kick ur face in. really stomp this dweeb
Boots just Malinoux till I put the Dogs to ur chest like that Soccer Team
wooooooooomp wooooooooooooooooomp
Empty the shotty - An Image artists wish to rate
Had Smear Blood On the Wall..I'd make Millions if they saw how I Finger Paint
nah the opening was piss pour, I liked finger paint.
I slaughter all my NME's & faggot...You soft
You'll let out A Beast Cry b4 I kill that could rival Barcotic after a loss
haha I like this.
Punch your teeth down ur throat, so foods a flaw
The devastation of this Scrapple have you eating that food through a straw
light, but decent enough, I thought you would have a heavy ender, it was cool tho.
This battle had alot of misses, but kill spree was more consistent, I think sleight tried to make the trashed bar worked but it needed more, that could of been the bar of the battle too, nothing really outstanding from them but I got spree winning this one.
v/ks
3-1 kill
@Blue Bayou @plethora @Cookies @Letterman @Exalted. @
His skills are like his own mobile service. I found out that he's fronting.
Left MT-handed, Thought he was climbing for something but was amounting to nothing
^like people been saying amounting was recently used but wasn't a complete miss
He wanted a photo battle but I refused because I want him dead.
He'll still get a pic but that's when I'm swinging an ice axe to his head.
^ehhh prolly played but entertaining
He's on netcees asking Dominate to return to RB. It seems that he is weak.
Little did he know he'll still see dominate.... when I dominate him out of this league.
^this was lazy & wack
I'll beat this Boston fella so bad, I'm in a selfish mood. Hell-bent too.
Cripple him with these punches that he'll need to rely on a Walker like the Celtics Do.
^lol ur best bar
He uses his alcholic addiction as an excuse on the forum but truth is, he's past his prime.
It doesn't matter if he was trashed yesterday or trashed today. He's trash all the time.
^haha simple but effective
This'll be a smooth...fast slaughter. Don't believe when he says he's a true rap scholar.
Real Killas don't fuck with cats like me cuz I'm quick to kill a pussy like Luka Magnotta
^not a good closer
Vs.
Listen Faggot...
Thats the muscle behind tough talk? pfft.. U not hard, fellow
You being Intense is a joke! I could use your arms as sticks to roast Marshmellows
^lol dope but can't use a pic in a non pic battle so this is discounted
Gun away..Drunk punch you to death cos you lame N queer
Fists Pop Pabst to the Gut, till'E turns the 3 colors of THAT case of Beer
^not feeling it
B4 U shot? I'll kick ur face in. really stomp this dweeb
Boots just Malinoux till I put the Dogs to ur chest like that Soccer Team
^ok
Empty the shotty - An Image artists wish to rate
Had Smear Blood On the Wall..I'd make Millions if they saw how I Finger Paint
^so-so
I slaughter all my NME's & faggot...You soft
You'll let out A Beast Cry b4 I kill that could rival Barcotic after a loss
^ehhh
Punch your teeth down ur throat, so foods a flaw
The devastation of this Scrapple have you eating that food through a straw
^dece closer
Slecht came too simple, he shoulda won but..
V/KS
Kill wins 4-1