Week 3: Basic M (0-2) vs Krucial Th1rt3en (0-1) [Basic M wins]

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Punches due by THURSDAY NOV 23rd @ 11:59PM
Voting closes SUNDAY NOV 26th, 11:59PM

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@Basic M @Krucial Th1rt3en

You comment on battles like ur talented...ur trash, its no debatin'
I'll drive by & let the ratchet hit Kru...but it wont be gang retaliation

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Originally Posted by Basic M

You comment on battles like ur talented...ur trash, its no debatin'
I'll drive by & let the ratchet hit Kru...but it wont be gang retaliation

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this week i have a new 'Top Job'...
i gotta 'Bag' for this 'Basic trash',
shotgun...
if he act 'shady on my stage',
ill put more 'holes in M's/Em's face' than 'Slims jason mask'.

I thought M's was pretty lackluster but fortunately for him 13 was garbage.

v-M

Both of these were weak, I felt basic was lazy n didn't put much thought into executing the concept better, cuz def coulda been fire.. kru dropped a weak scheme with terrible structure.. I mean it coulda been worded better for more impact but with the way it stands I got M edging this..

Basic

Krucial, the haiku league hasn’t started yet. You can keep that shit to yourself for now. Please.

Basic had a predictable nameplau with average punch power and execution etc

But krucial tried to do too much and it didn’t work out well for the little fella


Vote basic

Neither really had anything special. Basic, well was pretty basic. I don’t particularly like punches that are aimed at ones team/crew/gang etc because these is supposed to be one on one personal. Yes I get that his name plays into it but just a tired concept.

Kru 13 had a decent idea, I’ll give him a round for being a little more original but at the end of the day it was far too wordy and not executed very well.

Tough call here but my vote will bring to Basic M by a thin margin.

Vote - Basic M

13 I like how you took your time with the punch, but you gotta work those lines and double up on your entendres in order for that type of style to hit. i suggest you look at some of Smack's battles, or Joog's swag and flow battles where they both use the short bar style pretty effectively. and remember, there's a difference between an entendre and word association. like all the apostrophes you kept putting around your words were just small time associations, nothing really clever or mind blowing.

Long story short, you gotta use multiple plays on words and puns for that style to work the best. which is tough to do, i can't see anyone in this league pulling off. maybe you can if you work hard enough.

Basic, you did your thing. i didn't like the bar but it was executed better than your opponent's so you get my vote off that fact.

Vote: Basic

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Originally Posted by OG Maestro

13 I like how you took your time with the punch, but you gotta work those lines and double up on your entendres in order for that type of style to hit. i suggest you look at some of Smack's battles, or Joog's swag and flow battles where they both use the short bar style pretty effectively. and remember, there's a difference between an entendre and word association. like all the apostrophes you kept putting around your words were just small time associations, nothing really clever or mind blowing.

Long story short, you gotta use multiple plays on words and puns for that style to work the best. which is tough to do, i can't see anyone in this league pulling off. maybe you can if you work hard enough.

Basic, you did your thing. i didn't like the bar but it was executed better than your opponent's so you get my vote off that fact.

Vote: Basic

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thanks bro, now thats constructive critisism that i can actually build off of. i really appreciate that G, 100

Weak battle but basic dropped a better flip

Basic M wins