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Fresh aka Habitat on NC
Fresh once you're down in votes PM Spree & Blue to get help quick...
You'll shit the bed & we'll think fuck....why Duvets Cover em w/ that layer of protection?
Shoot you infront of ya crew for the shellshock then spray up ur circle..
Things flash before their eyes while the 'Blast Processing' like an old Sega commercial
If Zelph paid green for us to meet i'd KO this faggot clean off his feet..
Fuck jail....I'll take Cookie Dough, Ball Up & beat to add something sweet to my sheet
You take concepts & remix, but the wordplay comes out dumb as shit
Dog everytime your wording hits a wall you 'Kill the Flip' like Pac in Above the Rim
Your girl measured my dick size, said it's "bigger than Fresh its no lie"
Only had one inch from the guy, now that 'Ex is ten she'll' start to question her life
They put me vs an RB midtier, the matchup was insanity..
Built ur home on a cheap site cuz nowhere else loved ya...so I'll end Habitat for Humanity
shit gon' get violent, faggot.. peep the gore
i will stab utilize fall out ya head and you can't use em too see no more
these blows to ur head will devastate ur aura
I'll leave you in a vegetative state.. and we ain't going to California
you got creeper vibes going.. guarantee you rock a moustache
but no doubt the girls u got locked up will eventually break out... in a rash
he'll never reach new heights ex all about suckin
his entire careers been an uphill battle Andes STILL Amountin to nothing..
ur life is depressing, its a real shame bro
you're so flat broke I mistook you for Artie Lange's nose
this a pass for me, where im sending u you'll have time for some reflection
i won't just knock you out the league exile beat you into another dimension
Exalted
Fresh once you're down in votes PM Spree & Blue to get help quick...
You'll shit the bed & we'll think fuck....why Duvets Cover em w/ that layer of protection?
It's pronounced "du - vay" not "du - vet". Even if it sounded the way you wanted, the punch is stretched. Good idea, but the execution... not so much
Shoot you infront of ya crew for the shellshock then spray up ur circle..
Things flash before their eyes while the 'Blast Processing' like an old Sega commercial
The theme is cool, but the setup line hits harder than the punch does. The setup works but the punch aint harsh, not even really dissin him
If Zelph paid green for us to meet i'd KO this faggot clean off his feet..
Fuck jail....I'll take Cookie Dough, Ball Up & beat to add something sweet to my sheet
I was wit it until the punch. First thought was that was gay af.
You take concepts & remix, but the wordplay comes out dumb as shit
Dog everytime your wording hits a wall you 'Kill the Flip' like Pac in Above the Rim
"Kill the flip" could be misconstrued as a compliment. This is aight
Your girl measured my dick size, said it's "bigger than Fresh its no lie"
Only had one inch from the guy, now that 'Ex is ten she'll' start to question her life
I like the thought of using an existential wp, can't say I've seen one. It likely would've hit harder if you focused on that concept instead of a dick joke. Best bar so far.
They put me vs an RB midtier, the matchup was insanity..
Built ur home on a cheap site cuz nowhere else loved ya...so I'll end Habitat for Humanity
Decent np. Ok closer.
Existential is the lone standout. Kill the flip, sega commercial, and humanity are the only other ones I thought were ok and had potential. You do a good job of tying your setups to your punches, but your punches don't often attack your opponent consistently or directly.
6/10
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Fresh
shit gon' get violent, faggot.. peep the gore
i will stab utilize fall out ya head and you can't use em too see no more
Would've liked more than just 'utilize' in the punch. Aight-ish
these blows to ur head will devastate ur aura
I'll leave you in a vegetative state.. and we ain't going to California
flows but doesn't hit
you got creeper vibes going.. guarantee you rock a moustache
but no doubt the girls u got locked up will eventually break out... in a rash
Nice
he'll never reach new heights ex all about suckin
his entire careers been an uphill battle Andes STILL Amountin to nothing..
I would've done "a mountain" but this works. Solid
ur life is depressing, its a real shame bro
you're so flat broke I mistook you for Artie Lange's nose
Above avg filler
this a pass for me, where im sending u you'll have time for some reflection
i won't just knock you out the league exile beat you into another dimension
Decent closer
There's a big difference in how each verse flows, in your favor. I weigh that heavily enough that you only needed two good bars to win. You brought about three. Do more of the break out, mountain, dimension type bars next week.
7.5/10
V Fresh
Fresh once you're down in votes PM Spree & Blue to get help quick...
You'll shit the bed & we'll think fuck....why Duvets Cover em w/ that layer of protection?
like where u were going but came out forced.. it is pronounced 'doo vaa'
Shoot you infront of ya crew for the shellshock then spray up ur circle..
Things flash before their eyes while the 'Blast Processing' like an old Sega commercial
ok.. wasnt that hard hitting tho
If Zelph paid green for us to meet i'd KO this faggot clean off his feet..
Fuck jail....I'll take Cookie Dough, Ball Up & beat to add something sweet to my sheet
lol nah i didnt like this.. came off corny af
You take concepts & remix, but the wordplay comes out dumb as shit
Dog everytime your wording hits a wall you 'Kill the Flip' like Pac in Above the Rim
iight
Your girl measured my dick size, said it's "bigger than Fresh its no lie"
Only had one inch from the guy, now that 'Ex is ten she'll' start to question her life
cool w/p..but is this saying fresh has a nine inch dick? thats how im reading it.. not much of a diss if so
They put me vs an RB midtier, the matchup was insanity..
Built ur home on a cheap site cuz nowhere else loved ya...so I'll end Habitat for Humanity
little wordy but cool hit
vs
shit gon' get violent, faggot.. peep the gore
i will stab utilize fall out ya head and you can't use em too see no more
feels a little corny n used but dont think ive seen it so okay hit
these blows to ur head will devastate ur aura
I'll leave you in a vegetative state.. and we ain't going to California
meh ..okish
you got creeper vibes going.. guarantee you rock a moustache
but no doubt the girls u got locked up will eventually break out... in a rash
i like the concept more then the bar but still cool
he'll never reach new heights ex all about suckin
his entire careers been an uphill battle Andes STILL Amountin to nothing..
cool hit
ur life is depressing, its a real shame bro
you're so flat broke I mistook you for Artie Lange's nose
lol alright
this a pass for me, where im sending u you'll have time for some reflection
i won't just knock you out the league exile beat you into another dimension
cool
v/fresh ..def came with the stronger hits here n was consistent
Fresh once you're down in votes PM Spree & Blue to get help quick...
You'll shit the bed & we'll think fuck....why Duvets Cover em w/ that layer of protection?
^yeah looked it up and pronunciation is off
Shoot you infront of ya crew for the shellshock then spray up ur circle..
Things flash before their eyes while the 'Blast Processing' like an old Sega commercial
^not feeling
If Zelph paid green for us to meet i'd KO this faggot clean off his feet..
Fuck jail....I'll take Cookie Dough, Ball Up & beat to add something sweet to my sheet
^wack
You take concepts & remix, but the wordplay comes out dumb as shit
Dog everytime your wording hits a wall you 'Kill the Flip' like Pac in Above the Rim
^nah
Your girl measured my dick size, said it's "bigger than Fresh its no lie"
Only had one inch from the guy, now that 'Ex is ten she'll' start to question her life
^nice
They put me vs an RB midtier, the matchup was insanity..
Built ur home on a cheap site cuz nowhere else loved ya...so I'll end Habitat for Humanity
^dope
Vs.
shit gon' get violent, faggot.. peep the gore
i will stab utilize fall out ya head and you can't use em too see no more
^seen utilize before
these blows to ur head will devastate ur aura
I'll leave you in a vegetative state.. and we ain't going to California
^ehh
you got creeper vibes going.. guarantee you rock a moustache
but no doubt the girls u got locked up will eventually break out... in a rash
^set up was cool but not feeling the ending
he'll never reach new heights ex all about suckin
his entire careers been an uphill battle Andes STILL Amountin to nothing..
^ok
ur life is depressing, its a real shame bro
you're so flat broke I mistook you for Artie Lange's nose
^cool
this a pass for me, where im sending u you'll have time for some reflection
i won't just knock you out the league exile beat you into another dimension
^ok
Fresh wins via jabs
Fresh once you're down in votes PM Spree & Blue to get help quick...
You'll shit the bed & we'll think fuck....why Duvets Cover em w/ that layer of protection?
I see what you were looking for..would have been a dope wordplay but if it worked the punch was still meh...so miss cos that aint how its pronounced
Shoot you infront of ya crew for the shellshock then spray up ur circle..
Things flash before their eyes while the 'Blast Processing' like an old Sega commercial
cool concept but you dissed his team.. this was light
If Zelph paid green for us to meet i'd KO this faggot clean off his feet..
Fuck jail....I'll take Cookie Dough, Ball Up & beat to add something sweet to my sheet
I fuck with this tbh
You take concepts & remix, but the wordplay comes out dumb as shit
Dog everytime your wording hits a wall you 'Kill the Flip' like Pac in Above the Rim
This was basic but still had light impact
Your girl measured my dick size, said it's "bigger than Fresh its no lie"
Only had one inch from the guy, now that 'Ex is ten she'll' start to question her life
nice...some of yall stupid
They put me vs an RB midtier, the matchup was insanity..
Built ur home on a cheap site cuz nowhere else loved ya...so I'll end Habitat for Humanity
nice
Vs
shit gon' get violent, faggot.. peep the gore
i will stab utilize fall out ya head and you can't use em too see no more
Utilize been done man and i wasnt feeling this angle
these blows to ur head will devastate ur aura
I'll leave you in a vegetative state.. and we ain't going to California
not a fan of this either man seemed basic
you got creeper vibes going.. guarantee you rock a moustache
but no doubt the girls u got locked up will eventually break out... in a rash
This was light...creative on the rape creep shit but
he'll never reach new heights ex all about suckin
his entire careers been an uphill battle Andes STILL Amountin to nothing..
i liked this..dope
ur life is depressing, its a real shame bro
you're so flat broke I mistook you for Artie Lange's nose
lol i fuck with this
this a pass for me, where im sending u you'll have time for some reflection
i won't just knock you out the league exile beat you into another dimension
dope
So as of right now I got ex with like half a hit tho fresh's misses were better Im voting ex right now... Im'a come back just in case but for now
V/Ex
Your girl measured my dick size, said it's "bigger than Fresh its no lie"
Only had one inch from the guy, now that 'Ex is ten she'll' start to question her life
They put me vs an RB midtier, the matchup was insanity..
Built ur home on a cheap site cuz nowhere else loved ya...so I'll end Habitat for Humanity
Above the rim could’ve been done better. It was worded soft
Vs
he'll never reach new heights ex all about suckin
his entire careers been an uphill battle Andes STILL Amountin to nothing..
ur life is depressing, its a real shame bro
you're so flat broke I mistook you for Artie Lange's nose
this a pass for me, where im sending u you'll have time for some reflection
i won't just knock you out the league exile beat you into another dimension
I think utilize could’ve been executed better, regardless of if its been done before. Break out could’ve been worded harsher.
I got Fresh taking this one with better hits and attempts.
v/Fresh