Free thought

My thoughts are nothing, something, and everything inbetween,
I could be you, him, me, her, it, or the unseen,
maybe ive been, maybe im just a dream,
I could be a figment, a part of the unseen,
but believe me im real, more than imagination,
gradualy waiting to be discovered
connected and uncovered,
I exist, but i dont,
believe me if you wont,
free thoughts are free.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...s-a-cold-world

That could be your theme song... especially with the contradiction type oxymorons... you should change your closing to that and it’d be too perfect.

i like this. The back and forth works well and i like to identify the unidentifiable trying to be identified. very nice and good read

Uh, cool.




Nah, this was alright. Simple. Not too hung up on complexity, rather just give it to us in black and white. Sometimes I forget you can tell a story that way. Anyways, I like it. We don't have to get into details, but the subject matter was dense enough give this clout. It isn't just talking about your cliche-typical drivel, but you're switching things up and being abstract. And in that, it's refreshing to read.





Keep it up.