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R.i.p Rap
*talking* what happened to hip hop, rap it all got fuuuuuuuucked up ya know back when they had something to say back when everything made sense back when evreything taught us a lesson.......what happened
*chours* after eminem retired and 2 pac got shot
after diddy produced hop hop had just stopped
after everything was told and there was nothing to hold
everyones pussy steppin no ones gonna be bold *end chorus*
*Verse 1*
we new hip hop was shot but we thought it just might come back
but it was caught in a way where its done the rack was to stacked
its lke rap had just been attack by them poser kids on crack
but i feel its time we stand up and bring it all back
where every verse chorus hook told us how to be better
so we didnt get into drugs become a thug and get under the weather
where we might have a steady life actually keep a wife get a job and only cut food with a knife.
where even when they said there were gonan kill people they really didnt mean it
they wanted to show the consequences so you could eat it breath it and not be it.. but what happened
*chours* after eminem retired and 2 pac got shot
after diddy produced, hop hop had just stopped
after everything was told and there was nothing to hold
everyones pussy steppin no ones gonna go be bold *end chorus*
all this new shit i just dont understand ya know
why would we care how to superman a hoe
or how to do that dance that everybody already knows thats shits like vanilla ice you all know its just doesnt flow.
there not the only ones
im sorry i dont mean to steal anyones thunder but its just atrocious that there boastin when there just a one hit wonder, but it dont matter were lookin towards the future and the past cause if it says like now then rap can kiss my ass i wish it'd last till the worlds explodes and combusts into a blast but if i keeps rollin the way its goin expect a great big crash ..SMASH
after eminem retired and 2 pac got shot
after diddy produced, hop hop had just stopped
after everything was told and there was nothing to hold
everyones pussy steppin no ones gonna be bold *end chorus*
* see what im sayin everything has died but lets RESSURECT whose with me lets GOOOOOOOOO forward and bring it all back
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upppppppppppppppppppppppiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiinnn nnnnnnnnnnnnn tell me what u think i need some feedback.......................................... .....................................
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this wasnt that good dude. your lines were stretched like a mutha fucka. and the flow was off completely. rhymes were descent. need to elevate on delivery and complexity.
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I thought it was good and in concept and all but I'm not an educated writer sooo...
