i wrote/recorded this verse an hour ago (out of boredom)
drop links, i will reply asap!
LINKS:
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...315/index.html
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...395/index.html
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i wrote/recorded this verse an hour ago (out of boredom)
drop links, i will reply asap!
LINKS:
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...315/index.html
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...395/index.html
Decent freestyle, Can definitley see u wrote this outta boredom lol..but not to shabby though, a where did u get that instrumental At? I've been lookin all over for that shit.
i uno what it is but i really vibe with.. much props man
i can tell u wrote outta boredom but its really cool sounding =)
keep it up man
yo this aint bad man for a freestyle man !!!!
should maybe look into makin it a song bruh!
I gotta admit it, I can never do such 1-hour tracks, lol I need a lot of time to put a track together! So mad respect for doing it. It's pretty good for something THAT quick. The beat choice was good. I liked your delivery, it's quite confident. Flow was tight all the way through, it was a short track though. The lyrics were cool, I'm not really a fan of such subject matter, but then again you said you did this out or boredom so I guess the content is irrelevant.
Please RTF here: http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...425/index.html
thanks fellas! ^ i'm going to hit that link tonight.
*elevator music*
this is pretty chill, i dunno, try to use your flow more tnagable, like
a little more internal rhymes and repititon, i like the voice slowing down on the bridge,
this is tight otherwise mang, keep writing
thank you
NIce job man, I like your mic presence first of all. lyrics were pretty good, flow was on point. Definitely good quality and good work ethic recordin that shit. I hear no fuck ups, thats always whats up! lol
^ i really appreciate that
Listening.
I Like The Beat and Your Vocals and Quality Are Fuckin Nasty.
Lyrical Content Is Pretty Good.Good Shit Man Keep It up.
~LEW>
this is pretty hot yo... beat is mellow and kinda... dreamy??? lol kinda feels like a dream sequence in a movie... flow is on point, delivery is strong and real confident, good voice... cool track...
dope beat....nice rhyme schemes think your delivery could be more convincing on this...u just rapping it seems i guess goes along with emotion too....some real shit i can tell oh i dindt know this was the drake beat i might have to rip this without that cornball on it lol
overall cool track man would like to hear more tho
thanks for the feedback!