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Does it look different without the "sample" Mark and background?
Yes just need my money first
anyway that diamond can have more dimensions to it? It looks a bit flat.
Look at me being all know it all LOL.
I think the diamond needs more sparkle also.
I think you can make the purple pop a bit more too.
The green looks good though against that colour, very fresh.
Looks cool, only thing I don't like is the black above the diamond, looks like a bad shadow/ smudge but can't tell on my phone
Kinda looks like u merged all the layers and shadowed the whole thing instead of jus the diamond itself. I like the concept though and it's pretty sleek
And now I'm going to get down to the nitty gritty of this, as if it's a poem.
First, I'm looking at that green. And it can pop more I think. It's a bit, hmm, mono-tone.
It shines in the middle where you've got the diamond, but, see the diamond? It's dull.
BStill, diamonds aren't still.
They move. That's what makes the sparkle. They glimmer and they reach to the heavens the way they
channel their light. They glisten. And they have sharp edges. Precise edges. Straight strength.
BStill, I'm not seeing enough lines. I'm seeing slightly rounded edges. Women don't want worn out diamonds.
We want them crisp. And bright. And awe-inspiring. Can you feel that? That's what I want to feel when I look at
your diamond. I want to fall into it. I want to loose myself in it's imagery. Much like a good read.
I forget I'm reading and I'm mesmerized by the sparkle.
I've already talked about the purple. Now I want to talk about the white. It's not bright. Well it is, it is bright,
but where that fucked up grey 'SAMPLE' sits, it's giving the illusion its not bright enough. I take it, it will be bright.
Cause I know... twinkle, twinkle, little star, now I know just what you are, this ain't yet, up to par.
I think I got excited. Based on the improvement from the last one.
But this can still be made better.
I like the writing, the font. I think the 'is' in black, with the star, is cute, clever. A nice touch.
But I think that the sparkles on top of the diamond could work a bit.
Not just sit there.
Lazy no tax paying sons of bitches.
They need to sparkle a bit.
Do something.
They're just sitting there doing jack shit.
Over my dead body!
Sparkle bitches!
BStill, you've got talent in this field I wish I had.
Let me see it like I do in my mind.
Let me know that you can make it.
That's what the customer really wants.
Not a carbon copy.
But the real thing.
Sorry if I come off as gutsy.
I am.
Still, I love your art.
Ty for being honest e emily
welcome, electronic BstillQuote:
Originally Posted by Bstill
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