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@script0rrr this is my check GL
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10 lines
due saturday by mid night
@script0rrr this is my check GL
check, GL too
@script0rrr
I need the ext till tomorrow bro mad busy
also we gotta get 2 voting links in each
Word and yeah I'm pretty busy as wellQuote:
Originally Posted by Kill Spree
Alright I'll post cause you didn't
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Kill that gangsta talk, youd get slapped or murked bitch
An stop spittin fake ass bars u sound wack on purpose
Cmon for real, whens the last time u let a hollow ring?
It was probly u when u came outta ya fathers d
An yes ur so wack ill use lines about splashin semen
The voters deserve to know thats his average weekend
Spazzin dweeb man, look at this nerd talkin bout gunplay
In a gated community, never walked round the subway
It just sounds rediculous, im bein serious guy
U need to search in ur soul, spit whats real to ur life
I'll post the links once you respond
Listen...
Vs me you'll struggle to Kill pain, plus ya not known for droppin ILL
So Before I twist off Scripts top?... try commiting suicide by poppin pills
Each punch is destruction, fuck what ever you reppin, noob
It'll be tough Cleaning ya bars up after the way DzasteR made a mess of you
& ya concepts are basic, Mad ppl clown them, shit gay
Voters wont be talkin a Notti Bar when they seen you take punches from Big K
Snipe shooter w/the bars bro, I'll this bitch W/No Head
Should'a thought before trying to hit me W/knowledge like a Joe Thread
This wack faggots bars is garbage, I'll make the wackness leave
Even every battler had a better write up then you...In the madness league
Getting links shortly
Yeah my shit wack but I'm still not done yet
Im tryna stress the basics, just that timell test the faithless
An Unfortunate Series of Events to reach ur Final Destination
An youll always be 'underground' how i lock em in the basement
I mean look at the thread name
I beat almost all of u, thisll be 02 like the oxygen ya wastin
You actin amazed kid, u aint kno i eat cats like an asian
Take advice, u aint the type to get a strap ana target to aim
Aint dousin fire, im evaporatin ur water wit flames
U say ya hard? Bro, save ya bars
Ill put the barrel on ur neck like a st. bernard
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Shit was I not supposed to keep going? damn it
this was clearly obne sided IMO, script came off with more of statements than actualpunches so his verse didnt come off very harsh to me in fact nothing in it really stood out to me. kill mailed it in nothing outstanding but every punch connected and hit. Overall this was a very average battle, my vote goes to spree for the better mechanical verse
Kill that gangsta talk, youd get slapped or murked bitch
An stop spittin fake ass bars u sound wack on purpose
>>ummm where is the punch?
Cmon for real, whens the last time u let a hollow ring?
It was probly u when u came outta ya fathers d
>>wow...no
An yes ur so wack ill use lines about splashin semen
The voters deserve to know thats his average weekend
>>lol wtf....or nah
Spazzin dweeb man, look at this nerd talkin bout gunplay
In a gated community, never walked round the subway
>>lmfaooo...this is so bad, its hilarious
It just sounds rediculous, im bein serious guy
U need to search in ur soul, spit whats real to ur life
>>deep....or not
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Vs me you'll struggle to Kill pain, plus ya not known for droppin ILL
So Before I twist off Scripts top?... try commiting suicide by poppin pills
>>dope start
Each punch is destruction, fuck what ever you reppin, noob
It'll be tough Cleaning ya bars up after the way DzasteR made a mess of you
>>hell no
& ya concepts are basic, Mad ppl clown them, shit gay
Voters wont be talkin a Notti Bar when they seen you take punches from Big K
>>nah
Snipe shooter w/the bars bro, I'll this bitch W/No Head
Should'a thought before trying to hit me W/knowledge like a Joe Thread
>>lmfaooooo word!
This wack faggots bars is garbage, I'll make the wackness leave
Even every battler had a better write up then you...In the madness league
>>haha
V- kill spree (clearly)
Scrip- keep bangin!
Quote:
Originally Posted by script0rrr
Quote:
Originally Posted by Kill Spree
one sided, KS' opener won it for him, his opponent is obviously very new to this,
V/KS
Kill that gangsta talk, youd get slapped or murked bitch
An stop spittin fake ass bars u sound wack on purpose
Think you coulda played off that wack on purpose in a sense, didn't capitalize on it
Cmon for real, whens the last time u let a hollow ring?
It was probly u when u came outta ya fathers d
Came outta his fathers ding maybe? lol nah
An yes ur so wack ill use lines about splashin semen
The voters deserve to know thats his average weekend
Lol setup coulda been better though
Spazzin dweeb man, look at this nerd talkin bout gunplay
In a gated community, never walked round the subway
Not quite a punchline, but I'll give you that its somewhat a diss
It just sounds rediculous, im bein serious guy
U need to search in ur soul, spit whats real to ur life
No
vs
Vs me you'll struggle to Kill pain, plus ya not known for droppin ILL
So Before I twist off Scripts top?... try commiting suicide by poppin pills
Dope opener
Each punch is destruction, fuck what ever you reppin, noob
It'll be tough Cleaning ya bars up after the way DzasteR made a mess of you
Lol I did? Ouch..nice
& ya concepts are basic, Mad ppl clown them, shit gay
Voters wont be talkin a Notti Bar when they seen you take punches from Big K
A lil iffy on this one
Snipe shooter w/the bars bro, I'll this bitch W/No Head
Should'a thought before trying to hit me W/knowledge like a Joe Thread
Not feeling this
This wack faggots bars is garbage, I'll make the wackness leave
Even every battler had a better write up then you...In the madness league
Not bad for a finisher
Didn't know what to expect with this battle, but script you've got some work to do for your battles. You have some rhythm with your flow and that's a start - but bro you didn't introduce anything vital to that. No punchlines, no creativity, nothing hit worthy against your opponent. Keep working man. Kill spree took this one obviously because he DID throw punches, he did have some good hits and even brought out personals to deliver more hits.
v/ KS
Vs me you'll struggle to Kill pain, plus ya not known for droppin ILL
So Before I twist off Scripts top?... try commiting suicide by poppin pills
this is cool, nice start
Each punch is destruction, fuck what ever you reppin, noob
It'll be tough Cleaning ya bars up after the way DzasteR made a mess of you
wording kinda botched this, coulda been more effective for sure.
& ya concepts are basic, Mad ppl clown them, shit gay
Voters wont be talkin a Notti Bar when they seen you take punches from Big K
ehh, not feelin the self hype here
Snipe shooter w/the bars bro, I'll this bitch W/No Head
Should'a thought before trying to hit me W/knowledge like a Joe Thread
lol, this made me laugh cuz the situation was funny. wording not that great tho
This wack faggots bars is garbage, I'll make the wackness leave
Even every battler had a better write up then you...In the madness league
not feelin this
vs
Nothin.
scriptOrrr, I don't really even know what kind of advice to give you. Some people got it, and some people don't. I ain't saying you don't, and I ain't sayin you should give up, BUT you clearly need some real help to get ya bars up. You don't seem to have the idea of choosing a concept to attack your opponent with, then wording a punch effectively (creatively and harsh) to attack your opponent. 1ST STEP IS TO LEARN HOW TO CHOOSE A CONCEPT.
Kill spree had a lazy ass verse, but the opener was enough to win, then he had the Dzaster punch which was a cool personal that he almost botched with poor wording.
v/ Kill Spree