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check, that battle bot shit pretty cool, i ain't gon lie
@plethora im thinkin extension on this one, watchu think ? might not need it, but rather be safe then sorry
For sure. & im going 16 in gblQuote:
Originally Posted by Notti
aiyo @plethora , I gt 10 ready to post.
dude's a gay swinger. not even friends & relatives safe
cuz he'll swap Buddy for Cousins like the kings/pelicans trade
hey.. congrats on becoming champ, u get props for that
i'll give it up for money.. & so does ur girl at the drop of a hat
snatch ur FL belt & letterman'll take ur GBL one w/ no problem
u'll lose a few around the waist so fast, it'll motivate joe boston
so when u get swept 5-0 dont cry yo, it never helps
take the Lozenges swallow it like u do everything else
ur girl edits selfies of her big head, but shits gi-norm
can Crop,Circle & shade pics but still resembles alien life form
Pleth definition : AKA plethysmograph is an instrument for measuring changes in volume within an organ or whole body (usually resulting from fluctuations in the amount of blood or air it contains).
It's been a tough week for you, 'N wit ya last loss to me, I'm certain..
..the site still needs a PLETH... to properly measure all YOUR watered down verses
You actually earned this match, which technically means you wanna die, 's tragic
I mean... The way you jumped into this box, thought I heard "PUT EM INA CASKETTT!!!"
Faggot, fuck you thought?? Ain't shit easy wit me, 'N after I win I ain't shakin ya hand
Thought beatin me would be a cake walk?...
.....you'd have a better chance doin that for Diddy and makin Da band
Your a peasant, a Stan.. so wen I seen I was battling you I was shocked n intrigued
I couldn't picture Peon top... where so used to seeing him 'rank at the bottom' of ANY league
I got plenty goons, willin to do whatever I tell em.. thas what a boss about
told em make this a no parking zone... that means Circle P before you cross em out
dude's a gay swinger. not even friends & relatives safe
cuz he'll swap Buddy for Cousins like the kings/pelicans trade
cool concept but the wording could've been harder.
hey.. congrats on becoming champ, u get props for that
i'll give it up for money.. & so does ur girl at the drop of a hat
lol
snatch ur FL belt & letterman'll take ur GBL one w/ no problem
u'll lose a few around the waist so fast, it'll motivate joe boston
lol
so when u get swept 5-0 dont cry yo, it never helps
take the Lozenges swallow it like u do everything else
eh, okay concept but didn't hit all that much
ur girl edits selfies of her big head, but shits gi-norm
can Crop,Circle & shade pics but still resembles alien life form
wasn't really feeling it
Couple cool concepts, couple cool punches. Your finisher could've been a lot harsher imo.
vs.
It's been a tough week for you, 'N wit ya last loss to me, I'm certain..
..the site still needs a PLETH... to properly measure all YOUR watered down verses
Cool concept
You actually earned this match, which technically means you wanna die, 's tragic
I mean... The way you jumped into this box, thought I heard "PUT EM INA CASKETTT!!!"
cool concept but kinda fell flat
Faggot, fuck you thought?? Ain't shit easy wit me, 'N after I win I ain't shakin ya hand
Thought beatin me would be a cake walk?...
.....you'd have a better chance doin that for Diddy and makin Da band
kinda played, I've seen making da band lines before
Your a peasant, a Stan.. so wen I seen I was battling you I was shocked n intrigued
I couldn't picture Peon top... where so used to seeing him 'rank at the bottom' of ANY league
decent
I got plenty goons, willin to do whatever I tell em.. thas what a boss about
told em make this a no parking zone... that means Circle P before you cross em out
cool
Another solid verse with a couple hits and a couple misses.
Pretty close battle, I have it sitting around 2-3. Both guys had concepts that could've been worded better but delivered what they could and brought a decent champ battle. In the end though, I have Notti taking it by split decision.
Vote Notti.
dude's a gay swinger. not even friends & relatives safe
cuz he'll swap Buddy for Cousins like the kings/pelicans trade
>>miss..not feelin it
hey.. congrats on becoming champ, u get props for that
i'll give it up for money.. & so does ur girl at the drop of a hat
>>lol
snatch ur FL belt & letterman'll take ur GBL one w/ no problem
u'll lose a few around the waist so fast, it'll motivate joe boston
>>lmfao
so when u get swept 5-0 dont cry yo, it never helps
take the Lozenges swallow it like u do everything else
>>nice hit!
ur girl edits selfies of her big head, but shits gi-norm
can Crop,Circle & shade pics but still resembles alien life form
>>lol.. I have a lil issue wit the way u worded this whole bar tho.
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It's been a tough week for you, 'N wit ya last loss to me, I'm certain..
..the site still needs a PLETH... to properly measure all YOUR watered down verses
>>lol
You actually earned this match, which technically means you wanna die, 's tragic
I mean... The way you jumped into this box, thought I heard "PUT EM INA CASKETTT!!!"
>>nice hit
Faggot, fuck you thought?? Ain't shit easy wit me, 'N after I win I ain't shakin ya hand
Thought beatin me would be a cake walk?...
.....you'd have a better chance doin that for Diddy and makin Da band
>>miss.. Super played
Your a peasant, a Stan.. so wen I seen I was battling you I was shocked n intrigued
I couldn't picture Peon top... where so used to seeing him 'rank at the bottom' of ANY league
>>cool
I got plenty goons, willin to do whatever I tell em.. thas what a boss about
told em make this a no parking zone... that means Circle P before you cross em out
>>dope finish
Close match up but....
V- Notti
Plethora
dude's a gay swinger. not even friends & relatives safe
cuz he'll swap Buddy for Cousins like the kings/pelicans trade
Lol cool concept current hit
hey.. congrats on becoming champ, u get props for that
i'll give it up for money.. & so does ur girl at the drop of a hat
Seen this before
snatch ur FL belt & letterman'll take ur GBL one w/ no problem
u'll lose a few around the waist so fast, it'll motivate joe boston
Lol ok i am motivated though ill fuck u up ty very much
so when u get swept 5-0 dont cry yo, it never helps
take the Lozenges swallow it like u do everything else
Lol dope wp good flip
ur girl edits selfies of her big head, but shits gi-norm
can Crop,Circle & shade pics but still resembles alien life form
Lol
Notti
It's been a tough week for you, 'N wit ya last loss to me, I'm certain..
..the site still needs a PLETH... to properly measure all YOUR watered down verses
Ok lol
You actually earned this match, which technically means you wanna die, 's tragic
I mean... The way you jumped into this box, thought I heard "PUT EM INA CASKETTT!!!"
No corny
Faggot, fuck you thought?? Ain't shit easy wit me, 'N after I win I ain't shakin ya hand
Thought beatin me would be a cake walk?...
.....you'd have a better chance doin that for Diddy and makin Da band
Hell no played as,fuck come on notti
Your a peasant, a Stan.. so wen I seen I was battling you I was shocked n intrigued
I couldn't picture Peon top... where so used to seeing him 'rank at the bottom' of ANY league
Ok np but basic initial flips are corny
I got plenty goons, willin to do whatever I tell em.. thas what a boss about
told em make this a no parking zone... that means Circle P before you cross em out
Played af again noooo
V/pleth dude brought it stayed very consistent nice opener and his last 3 bars had some good humor factor. Notti man idk some played shit and overall rushed.
plethora
dude's a gay swinger. not even friends & relatives safe
cuz he'll swap Buddy for Cousins like the kings/pelicans trade
ahh, not really feeling this, coo reference I guess.
hey.. congrats on becoming champ, u get props for that
i'll give it up for money.. & so does ur girl at the drop of a hat
better, simple but aight to me.
snatch ur FL belt & letterman'll take ur GBL one w/ no problem
u'll lose a few around the waist so fast, it'll motivate joe boston
lol, this was aight here, zinging joe boston to.
so when u get swept 5-0 dont cry yo, it never helps
take the Lozenges swallow it like u do everything else
not really feeling this, sounds like it could be a fat joke.
ur girl edits selfies of her big head, but shits gi-norm
can Crop,Circle & shade pics but still resembles alien life form
this was decent at beest, not really a hard hitter though.
you have some generic concepts that are smooth, but not really hard hitting, not really complex or creative either for the most part, liked the joe boston and the drop of a hat bar, the best.
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notti
It's been a tough week for you, 'N wit ya last loss to me, I'm certain..
..the site still needs a PLETH... to properly measure all YOUR watered down verses
cool play on his name, effective.
You actually earned this match, which technically means you wanna die, 's tragic
I mean... The way you jumped into this box, thought I heard "PUT EM INA CASKETTT!!!"
not really liking this, set up was more of a compliment haha.
Faggot, fuck you thought?? Ain't shit easy wit me, 'N after I win I ain't shakin ya hand
Thought beatin me would be a cake walk?...
.....you'd have a better chance doin that for Diddy and makin Da band
not feeling this, I feel all making da band reference has been done to death.
Your a peasant, a Stan.. so wen I seen I was battling you I was shocked n intrigued
I couldn't picture Peon top... where so used to seeing him 'rank at the bottom' of ANY league
coo nameflip here, willg ive you points for being creative here.
I got plenty goons, willin to do whatever I tell em.. thas what a boss about
told em make this a no parking zone... that means Circle P before you cross em out
another cool nameflip here, pretty creative to i guess.
Overall I think your verse was more creative than your opponents, some generic concepts as well, but you was more effective with them, and had some creative nameplay to, liked the peon shit, that was dope. but yea I'm giving this notti for being more creative and having the harder hitting verse.
plethora
dude's a gay swinger. not even friends & relatives safe
cuz he'll swap Buddy for Cousins like the kings/pelicans trade
Not super heavy punch, pretty funny though
hey.. congrats on becoming champ, u get props for that
i'll give it up for money.. & so does ur girl at the drop of a hat
just alright.
snatch ur FL belt & letterman'll take ur GBL one w/ no problem
u'll lose a few around the waist so fast, it'll motivate joe boston
pretty funny, decent personal, smooth off the tongue, I like it
so when u get swept 5-0 dont cry yo, it never helps
take the Lozenges swallow it like u do everything else
No
ur girl edits selfies of her big head, but shits gi-norm
can Crop,Circle & shade pics but still resembles alien life form
ehh, not really feeling the closer either.
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Notti
It's been a tough week for you, 'N wit ya last loss to me, I'm certain..
..the site still needs a PLETH... to properly measure all YOUR watered down verses
nice nameplay, i'd give it one of the best bars of the battle, good for an opener
You actually earned this match, which technically means you wanna die, 's tragic
I mean... The way you jumped into this box, thought I heard "PUT EM INA CASKETTT!!!"
ehh,
Faggot, fuck you thought?? Ain't shit easy wit me, 'N after I win I ain't shakin ya hand
Thought beatin me would be a cake walk?...
.....you'd have a better chance doin that for Diddy and makin Da band
Just alright
Your a peasant, a Stan.. so wen I seen I was battling you I was shocked n intrigued
I couldn't picture Peon top... where so used to seeing him 'rank at the bottom' of ANY league
concept and punch was nice, slight awkward read on the last line of the bar.
I got plenty goons, willin to do whatever I tell em.. thas what a boss about
told em make this a no parking zone... that means Circle P before you cross em out
decent closer, cool concept
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MVGT: Notti - Pretty good for a champ match. I thought both were fairly consistent. Out of the bars I liked from both, I thought Notti had the edge on creativity and effectiveness. Felt the way pleth closed the match off hurt him a little bit on the outcome as well. Good battle, wouldn't mind reading a rematch of it.
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Originally Posted by plethora
Plethora had a lot of better concepts, and they hit harder. I was only feeling like 2-3 of Nottis' punches.Quote:
Originally Posted by Notti
VOTE - plethora
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Quote:
Originally Posted by plethora
Plethora had a lot of better concepts, and they hit harder. I was only feeling like 2-3 of Nottis' punches.Quote:
Originally Posted by Notti
VOTE - plethora