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LLL Season 24
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@Abe East @Kill Spree
Listen faggot...
Shotty leavin Abe in knots if'e step to the plate! I'll get the flowers
1 rnd'll have East Bound & Down w/a more pathetic life than Kenny Powers
These bullets produce a great mess. when you die we'll laugh @cha
fuck chalk on the Flourish, leave You in pieces everywhere from the Highest Calibur
B4 the tool come out I break out the knucks! 1 punch stops the fag
This glock is so Willing, & Able not be so Inclined to cross my path
Have you drown in your blood & shells float in your skull! hoe bitch
...we dnt take you serious
Next time you se eas'pacific? its his body parts @ the bottom of that Ocean
Dudes lame! fist pound your face till you bLeedin nerd
Every bar you write is such a Huge waste! shit could rival Dia's Shirt
Would like to mention I didnt have a mag up on time and now theres a mag in that link for abes first bar.
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?499623
Some ppl can't do their fucking job, so I require tags
Don't worry, I brought a couple mods and an ENTIRE mag
Trust in god, you will expire fag. Prime scope, hi focus
The strap cozy. Bad goalies; leave you w. 5 holes wide open
Kill not a threat. Kill weak. Kill not great. Kill ass
Old material is rubbing me the wrong way. Kilt rash
BLACK FLIES will become a nuisance if I clap mine
Bullet wounds like afternoon golf; movement in the back 9
Kid I'm prepared to put a stick to ya airhole
2020 assassination; Abe Lincoln ya lips to the barrel
Good battle
KS-First two bars were sweet. I thought you ended the verse strong. Glocks willing and able not be so inclined to cross my path! Good wordplay. You started cooking after by that line.
Abe-that kilt line was nice, funny too. Wasn’t sure where the bad goalie reference was going initially but it landed strong. You had good punches. Your verse was well written, you were spitting.
I gave this one to KS. Abe has better punches, threw in some multis and keep throwing those punches. KS was punching with some slick wordplay. That edged the battle for me.
Wanted to add that it took a few reads to choose a winner.
Nice work gents.
Listen faggot...
Shotty leavin Abe in knots if'e step to the plate! I'll get the flowers
1 rnd'll have East Bound & Down w/a more pathetic life than Kenny Powers
Nice start.
These bullets produce a great mess. when you die we'll laugh @cha
fuck chalk on the Flourish, leave You in pieces everywhere from the Highest Calibur
nice.
B4 the tool come out I break out the knucks! 1 punch stops the fag
This glock is so Willing, & Able not be so Inclined to cross my path
Eh, execution was kinda sloppy homie.
Have you drown in your blood & shells float in your skull! hoe bitch
...we dnt take you serious
Next time you se eas'pacific? its his body parts @ the bottom of that Ocean
okay.
Dudes lame! fist pound your face till you bLeedin nerd
Every bar you write is such a Huge waste! shit could rival Dia's Shirt
Lmao I literally laughed out loud.
Some ppl can't do their fucking job, so I require tags
Don't worry, I brought a couple mods and an ENTIRE mag
Nice.
Trust in god, you will expire fag. Prime scope, hi focus
The strap cozy. Bad goalies; leave you w. 5 holes wide open
Eh.
Kill not a threat. Kill weak. Kill not great. Kill ass
Old material is rubbing me the wrong way. Kilt rash
Eh.
BLACK FLIES will become a nuisance if I clap mine
Bullet wounds like afternoon golf; movement in the back 9
Ok.
Kid I'm prepared to put a stick to ya airhole
2020 assassination; Abe Lincoln ya lips to the barrel
I mean okay… but Lincoln was not assassinated in 2020 - at least tie it in with your setup… president angle… something.
v.KS
I fuck with Abes attempts… clever… just add harshness… that being said KS for overall punch impact.
Kill Spree
Don't like the fact you ninja edited so it looks like you dropped first even though abe dropped many days before you. don't do that anymore
Listen faggot...
Shotty leavin Abe in knots if'e step to the plate! I'll get the flowers
1 rnd'll have East Bound & Down w/a more pathetic life than Kenny Powers
it's ok
These bullets produce a great mess. when you die we'll laugh @cha
fuck chalk on the Flourish, leave You in pieces everywhere from the Highest Calibur
flourish like floor ish? not sure what cha is either. ont sure what this is about so it's a miss for me.
B4 the tool come out I break out the knucks! 1 punch stops the fag
This glock is so Willing, & Able not be so Inclined to cross my path
the only correlation with willing and able is inclined so its pretty loose connection and not harsh.
Have you drown in your blood & shells float in your skull! hoe bitch
...we dnt take you serious
Next time you se eas'pacific? its his body parts @ the bottom of that Ocean
not feeling this..
Dudes lame! fist pound your face till you bLeedin nerd
Every bar you write is such a Huge waste! shit could rival Dia's Shirt
this was decent
vs
Abe East
Some ppl can't do their fucking job, so I require tags
Don't worry, I brought a couple mods and an ENTIRE mag
good personal
Trust in god, you will expire fag. Prime scope, hi focus
The strap cozy. Bad goalies; leave you w. 5 holes wide open
tough
Kill not a threat. Kill weak. Kill not great. Kill ass
Old material is rubbing me the wrong way. Kilt rash
interesting wp. not bad
BLACK FLIES will become a nuisance if I clap mine
Bullet wounds like afternoon golf; movement in the back 9
not feeling this
Kid I'm prepared to put a stick to ya airhole
2020 assassination; Abe Lincoln ya lips to the barrel
not a fan
I wasn't a huge fan of KS's verse. ill admit i didn't get the cha / flourish / highest calibur line but its not my fault im not a mega nerd. Abe east started strong but fell off for the last 2 bars imo. however his first 3 bars were enough to take this.
v/ Abe East
Kenny powers was cool.. Cool n/p
Floorish was mild
Willing n able was ok np but wasnt packing much heat
I thought dia shirt was nice but could of packed more if maybe u said like his pants or belt or something..shirts aint really a waist thing but i still dug it
Vs
Mag line was cool personal..cool opener
Wasnt feeling goalie line
Kilt was Cool concept but didnt hit to hard
Last two bars were a miss
Overall i thought kill took this with stronger punches.. Abe was creative but how they were setup to be delivered kinda made them less harsh.. VOTE KILL SPREE
B4 the tool come out I break out the knucks! 1 punch stops the fag
This glock is so Willing, & Able not be so Inclined to cross my path
Dudes lame! fist pound your face till you bLeedin nerd
Every bar you write is such a Huge waste! shit could rival Dia's Shirt
Vs
BLACK FLIES will become a nuisance if I clap mine
Bullet wounds like afternoon golf; movement in the back 9
I was kinda generous with these quotes. Expected better from both. The closer from Abe was a nice concept but the way he did it was bland. I got KS here
v/KS
4-1 kill wins