12 lines..due in 24 hrs..or ASP..thanks..let's have it!
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12 lines..due in 24 hrs..or ASP..thanks..let's have it!
yoUZ sucKz with the verbs, I'm a sEED of life, you're out of LuCK as a HeRB
As a WhACk MC? You're sucking the worst! I'll DuMP your body in a EaR Canal..Fuck what you HeaRD!
You can't ArOUse GoDz! You would probably drink HoT Sauce to SOund Hot
My BlAde firEZ proud Shotz! I'll 'Toss you in the Air' and I'm as fly as Nimbus..you can't ArOuse the ClOud God
I'm RaPPinG HaZardous! My saliva will have you FaDE away, like taking Baths in AcID bitch!
RapPing Masochistic! You couldn't 'Fuk wit' Sin' if you PraCticed AbStinence!
My RaPPIng will be settled, I got twin blades, so you can say I'm 'ClAPPing with the MeTal'
I'm RaPPing on a level! You're 'ugly as hell' while I'm as HanDSome as a DeVil!
I'll FaDE! WhOOPsi! I bet this rubber DUcky tastes MuSHY!
I have ChAins! LOoky! I'll 'put the metal to your chest'..that's a BlaDE pusSy!
I'm LigHTning's WiTness! You won't hear a sOund but a NiGht with CriCKets!
SKy's The LiMiT! You're JiREN, but I'm the CLoud God..and you'll never be as FlY as NiMbus!
12 lines..good luck..this will be good..
hide ya verse ima post in 24hrs.
check
u think ya crafts HOF? the question varies;
we're skimming 100% & wanna jump off the roof..It’s ledge & dairy
My nap caps = Bitches slurpin for 4hrs and us chattin for 0;
Your pillow talks lead to pillow fights w/ an actual pillow.
I end Life barriers for dwarfs that don't meet the criteria,
hold a 3by3 photosynthesize of;
while his casket's surrounded by light carriers;
A Pinebox for Sin that's just how his prophecy's designed;
this Bumblebee beyond repair, only hits on the box follow his momma screamin WHY,
Then I'll post ya organs on the site that day, I'm type eager;
have his Heart attached to the screen like a Primal Rage life meter.
I gotta Chopper that doesn't just raise.. it bends hell;
U HAARP on to the idea of being the cloud god til machines turn u into chem-trails.
yoUZ sucKz with the verbs, I'm a sEED of life, you're out of LuCK as a HeRB
As a WhACk MC? You're sucking the worst! I'll DuMP your body in a EaR Canal..Fuck what you HeaRD!
you will dump his body in an ear canal.....interesting....moving along, it’s a miss btw
You can't ArOUse GoDz! You would probably drink HoT Sauce to SOund Hot
My BlAde firEZ proud Shotz! I'll 'Toss you in the Air' and I'm as fly as Nimbus..you can't ArOuse the ClOud God
man are you trolling? Why do you wRiTe LiKe tHisSs
I'm RaPPinG HaZardous! My saliva will have you FaDE away, like taking Baths in AcID bitch!
RapPing Masochistic! You couldn't 'Fuk wit' Sin' if you PraCticed AbStinence!
My RaPPIng will be settled, I got twin blades, so you can say I'm 'ClAPPing with the MeTal'
I'm RaPPing on a level! You're 'ugly as hell' while I'm as HanDSome as a DeVil!
I'll FaDE! WhOOPsi! I bet this rubber DUcky tastes MuSHY!
I have ChAins! LOoky! I'll 'put the metal to your chest'..that's a BlaDE pusSy!
I'm LigHTning's WiTness! You won't hear a sOund but a NiGht with CriCKets!
SKy's The LiMiT! You're JiREN, but I'm the CLoud God..and you'll never be as FlY as NiMbus!
look man you have a lot of good ideas and the concepts are all here you just have to work on delivery and type like a normal fuckin human being and not a hood rat MySpace slut from 2008
Vs
u think ya crafts HOF? the question varies;
we're skimming 100% & wanna jump off the roof..It’s ledge & dairy
lol I mean I guess this technically works but it’s just so corny..
My nap caps = Bitches slurpin for 4hrs and us chattin for 0;
Your pillow talks lead to pillow fights w/ an actual pillow.
no
I end Life barriers for dwarfs that don't meet the criteria,
hold a 3by3 photosynthesize of;
while his casket's surrounded by light carriers;
nah
A Pinebox for Sin that's just how his prophecy's designed;
this Bumblebee beyond repair, only hits on the box follow his momma screamin WHY,
this was cool
Then I'll post ya organs on the site that day, I'm type eager;
have his Heart attached to the screen like a Primal Rage life meter.
good again
I gotta Chopper that doesn't just raise.. it bends hell;
U HAARP on to the idea of being the cloud god til machines turn u into chem-trails.
phew, this was sick
Sinacog idk if you’re just another dia troll or lesnar troll but aside from that, like I said, you have potential and you’re on the right track but you need to fix things. Starting by making your verses not so hard on the eyes. Unfukwitable you started off pretty bad but definitely turned up a gear with your last 3 bars. Your closer was dope, good shit.
Vote unfukwitable
smfh
Drop some votes maybe you’ll get some in returnQuote:
Originally Posted by Unfukwitable
vote links abv try againQuote:
Originally Posted by Kill Spree
Wasn’t feeling sins verse at all
Fukushima Open was aight. That heart attached to the screen was dope closer was dope
Fuk takes this easy
Obv unfuk takes this. Idk what that other guy was doing but It ain't rap battling. Unfuk took this with an easy verse
V. Unfuk
4-0 Unfukwitable
NEEDS MORE VOTES
@Kill Spree @Greedy @Jit Dillinger @plethora @Allen Knight @King @BashEmUP @Amen @Diasick @hello there @Blue Bayou
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Originally Posted by Sinacog
Easy win for Unfuk. Sin had two good concepts, and a lot of shitty execution.Quote:
Originally Posted by Unfukwitable
Vote - Unfukwitable
u think ya crafts HOF? the question varies;
we're skimming 100% & wanna jump off the roof..It’s ledge & dairy
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I'll FaDE! WhOOPsi! I bet this rubber DUcky tastes MuSHY!
I have ChAins! LOoky! I'll 'put the metal to your chest'..that's a BlaDE pusSy!
( this is a bad bar... I quoted it as the example of what u need to work on... tastes mushy/blade pussy is lazy writing.... u don't take advice, and that's fine, but after a while, folks aren't gonna battle u or only battle u for easy wins...long as YOU like your bars though, I say keep doing ya thing...
V- UN
Unfukwitable Wins