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@Encrypted Data @plethora
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12 LINES
CHECK IN: SUNDAY
VERSES DUE: TUESDAY
@Encrypted Data @plethora
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@plethora check in due tonight
one thousand to kill data'll have thugs pop the shotty
put a Gianna niggas head til it look like Kobe daughters body
winner gets Bayou next rd. but ima squeeze the gat
fuck a Blue Face Off, u ain't gotta wait a week for that
anyone can get these hands, jaw and face wired
nigga Sokoudjou, back to back ko's like that mma fighter
pull the trigger, this nigga'll take his place in the sky
one click put Data in a box like standard message rates apply
miracle predicted dude fold again, homie ain't lied
but we all knew you'd crash & burn wayyy before Kobe died
mag dubbed me victor prior to leaving him shredded
basically gave the W-2 me before all the pieces of Data collected
You can’t win in the ring. Pleth is a Lazy wrestler, your pin take breaks
A sober vocal recorder, no you only flow engine that’s an intake case
Your girl in the line of fire, Michelle Carter for suicide text you author
Aiming for your family tree, double meaning behind next you daughter
As I spot her, I seen you champ, made sure her head Blue Bayou
It’s a miracle, plethora talk on the web lead to new rivals
Hey pussy you tough. No need for ovary actions
punch your forehead cause your knot real, Notice me spasing
My lyrics made a business giving these kids nightmares,monsters ink
You see Scully face, that mirrors what karma bring
It’s vicious for those fictitious pictures your descripting
For money, leave your Wals-green. Get a dose of this prescription I’m giving
Gianna was dope
Didnt like blue face off
Dont know how to pronounce that name
Data in box was ok
Crash n Byrne was ok
W-2 was cool
Vs
Didnt like much until the last 2 lines
Monsters Ink seems like it should have been the punch but good attempt
Wals green was decent
Honestly best verse I've seen from data so props to him for stepping up. However his wording needs some tweaking and over reacting wordplay which are done to death need to be scrapped.
I got pleth with the win
Plethora: Giannis, Sokoudjou was cool & W2
Data Msg was enough
Encrypted Data: Walgreen was eh ok. Scully should have been redone as the wordplay. Over reactions was bad lol
I didn't enjoy the way you structure your lines.
Monster Inc aight
Vote - plethora
Plethora
one thousand to kill data'll have thugs pop the shotty
put a Gianna niggas head til it look like Kobe daughters body
Damn this would be good but I'm dqing every Kobe bar idc
winner gets Bayou next rd. but ima squeeze the gat
fuck a Blue Face Off, u ain't gotta wait a week for that
I was wit it but I didn't like where you went with the punch
anyone can get these hands, jaw and face wired
nigga Sokoudjou, back to back ko's like that mma fighter
"So-kuu-joe" is how I'd say his name, so I don't get the wp as written.
pull the trigger, this nigga'll take his place in the sky
one click put Data in a box like standard message rates apply
gun bars are meh
miracle predicted dude fold again, homie ain't lied
but we all knew you'd crash & burn wayyy before Kobe died
Nope
mag dubbed me victor prior to leaving him shredded
basically gave the W-2 me before all the pieces of Data collected
Decent wp but sayin 'the mag predicted me over you' is a weak diss conceptually
Im not fuckin wit Kobe slander.
The good - The verse flows well, well written
The bad - I didn't like most of the bars and explained why.
4/10
VS
Encrypted Data
You can’t win in the ring. Pleth is a Lazy wrestler, your pin take breaks
A sober vocal recorder, no you only flow engine that’s an intake case
Your girl in the line of fire, Michelle Carter for suicide text you author
Aiming for your family tree, double meaning behind next you daughter
This shit reads like english isn't your first language. Or second. Or third.
As I spot her, I seen you champ, made sure her head Blue Bayou
It’s a miracle, plethora talk on the web lead to new rivals
That's not a diss
Hey pussy you tough. No need for ovary actions
punch your forehead cause your knot real, Notice me spasing
Your best line by far, and yet, the setup is better than the punch
My lyrics made a business giving these kids nightmares,monsters ink
You see Scully face, that mirrors what karma bring
I was wit it until the punch. Ehhhh
It’s vicious for those fictitious pictures your descripting
For money, leave your Wals-green. Get a dose of this prescription I’m giving
"Descripting" lol. Not a diss, again
You had two total lines that I thought were ok.
I remember a verse from last week like this. This only makes sense if English truly isn't your first language.
If that's the case? ...then this is actually not bad, but will never be competitive in this League.
Either way, I can only say look at how everybody else is writing and write like that.
2/10
V Plethora
Gianna
Data in a box
W2
Vs
Forehead
Monsters ink
Me quoting data's 2 bars was me being generous.u got alot of work to do.. Keep reading over battles here and mod your setups and punches like what u see.. Keep at it..
Pleth came with plenty enough for the W.... VOTE PLETHORA
Good battle P. You’ve crushed me with these data flips lol.
I’ll keep stepping it up. Thanks for the tips.
My vote would go to Plethora in this battle.
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