Week 16: Smog (7-4) vs. Late Bloom - OPEN FOR VOTES

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@Smog @Late Bloom

Here i am...

Right look i know the fundamentals i guess
but i couldnt find anyone in lll with a dope enough example of text
all they do is throw threats
aint no one dope earning shit round here cause this shit already dead
man i aint like fifty tho he say he take men for much less
im happy this man is sharing even if it fills him with nothing but stress
i guess you could mention the league er something
but ill still have you twisted round my fingers guess this battle a ring
see your upset cause i can drop with dope concepts even when im using similies
your punches are cheese stake holmes guess smog just aint from philly...

I'LLLL murder this guy, straight facts late's trash, this herb gonna die
When it comes to writin my penultimate.. ur lucky to rank 2nd worst on the SITE
U suck n it proves that bein lethal means nothin to dudes
Got me Fucked Up they let Trip, in... buuut Dot musta been buggin on shrooms
Go head n celebrate ur album droppin.. cuz u bout to see my piece
So after ur record release party, ull be a victim of a mean body.. B I G
U ain't pullin hoes dawg, unless it's a whale lookin fat chick
I mean if late whistles at a dime, she'll just deny the foul lookin faggot
So fuck ya hopes n kill ya dreams, cuz bein lame is hurtin ya
Pussy, Only time u fuckin wit a big screen.. is rearranging furniture

Quote:

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Originally Posted by Late Bloom

Right look i know the fundamentals i guess
but i couldnt find anyone in lll with a dope enough example of text

☆ nice

all they do is throw threats
aint no one dope earning shit round here cause this shit already dead

☆ dope

man i aint like fifty tho he say he take men for much less
im happy this man is sharing even if it fills him with nothing but stress

☆ fire

i guess you could mention the league er something
but ill still have you twisted round my fingers guess this battle a ring

☆ wow

see your upset cause i can drop with dope concepts even when im using similies
your punches are cheese stake holmes guess smog just aint from philly...

☆ fantastic

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Quote:

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Originally Posted by Smog

I'LLLL murder this guy, straight facts late's trash, this herb gonna die
When it comes to writin my penultimate.. ur lucky to rank 2nd worst on the SITE

☆☆☆☆☆ rofl nice

U suck n it proves that bein lethal means nothin to dudes
Got me Fucked Up they let Trip, in... buuut Dot musta been buggin on shrooms

☆☆☆☆☆ dope

Go head n celebrate ur album droppin.. cuz u bout to see my piece
So after ur record release party, ull be a victim of a mean body.. B I G

☆☆☆☆☆

U ain't pullin hoes dawg, unless it's a whale lookin fat chick
I mean if late whistles at a dime, she'll just deny the foul lookin faggot

☆☆☆☆☆

So fuck ya hopes n kill ya dreams, cuz bein lame is hurtin ya
Pussy, Only time u fuckin wit a big screen.. is rearranging furniture

☆☆☆☆☆

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Well. Lmfao. 2tripp's gave a stirring performance. At times I could tell he was really making an effort to formulate a cogent sentence. Smog was the complete opposite. His first bar was better than 2tripp's entire verse, and his 2nd, 3rd, 4th, and 5th bar were probably better than anything 2tripp's has typed in his storied career. This was close but I have Smog winning definitively. No debatable.

v-Smog

I'LLLL murder this guy, straight facts late's trash, this herb gonna die
When it comes to writin my penultimate.. ur lucky to rank 2nd worst on the SITE
this was okay, cool concept, wording could've been harsher
U suck n it proves that bein lethal means nothin to dudes
Got me Fucked Up they let Trip, in... buuut Dot musta been buggin on shrooms
lol this was cool
Go head n celebrate ur album droppin.. cuz u bout to see my piece
So after ur record release party, ull be a victim of a mean body.. B I G
wording got meh in the end but it was a cool concept
U ain't pullin hoes dawg, unless it's a whale lookin fat chick
I mean if late whistles at a dime, she'll just deny the foul lookin faggot
same as the last one, wording fell off but it was a legit concept
So fuck ya hopes n kill ya dreams, cuz bein lame is hurtin ya
Pussy, Only time u fuckin wit a big screen.. is rearranging furniture
eh not really feeling this one. concept got bland in the end

Overall a cool verse, some solid concepts. Wording could've been better, as in better setups would've made the concepts more savage. But as it, I'd say a solid 3/5

vs

Right look i know the fundamentals i guess
but i couldnt find anyone in lll with a dope enough example of text
wait, what the fuck are you saying bro? This isn't even a punch.
all they do is throw threats
aint no one dope earning shit round here cause this shit already dead
another statement. yeah, LLL is dead, be more ruthless about it holmes
man i aint like fifty tho he say he take men for much less
im happy this man is sharing even if it fills him with nothing but stress
.............................
i guess you could mention the league er something
but ill still have you twisted round my fingers guess this battle a ring
see your upset cause i can drop with dope concepts even when im using similies
your punches are cheese stake holmes guess smog just aint from philly...

Look man. I get it. Your a rapper. Not a battler, and I can appreciate you trying by showing up and spending your time writing these verses. But you NEED to understand the difference between a punch and a statement. You need to learn the difference between a setup and just saying something to get to the end. It's like your writing a blog or a diary entry instead of a battle verse bro. I respect you, you're a cool guy, but you NEED to read more verses or watch some rap battles and understand what the hell you're doing if you wanna do this. If you can't manage, then let's see this record release party fam!

Vote smog for the landslide victory, much better verse.

nothing

vs

U suck n it proves that bein lethal means nothin to dudes
Got me Fucked Up they let Trip, in... buuut Dot musta been buggin on shrooms
Go head n celebrate ur album droppin.. cuz u bout to see my piece
So after ur record release party, ull be a victim of a mean body.. B I G

smog got it easy

v/smog

N/A
VS
OPENER, TRIP IN, LATE WHISTLE, CLOSER

V/SMOG... LANDSLIDE, NOT MUCH TO SAY. 2TRIPP HAS TO USE WITTIER CONCEPTS AND WORD THEM HARSHER

Quote:

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Originally Posted by Late Bloom

Right look i know the fundamentals i guess
but i couldnt find anyone in lll with a dope enough example of text
You couldn't? lol this is a generalization, not a punch
all they do is throw threats
aint no one dope earning shit round here cause this shit already dead
Some as above
man i aint like fifty tho he say he take men for much less
im happy this man is sharing even if it fills him with nothing but stress
PAUSE
i guess you could mention the league er something
but ill still have you twisted round my fingers guess this battle a ring
Smh..played and kinda random concept
see your upset cause i can drop with dope concepts even when im using similies
your punches are cheese stake holmes guess smog just aint from philly...
Attempted a personal, but it's incoherent

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Quote:

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Originally Posted by Smog

I'LLLL murder this guy, straight facts late's trash, this herb gonna die
When it comes to writin my penultimate.. ur lucky to rank 2nd worst on the SITE
Good opener
U suck n it proves that bein lethal means nothin to dudes
Got me Fucked Up they let Trip, in... buuut Dot musta been buggin on shrooms
Decent, a bit simple
Go head n celebrate ur album droppin.. cuz u bout to see my piece
So after ur record release party, ull be a victim of a mean body.. B I G
Decent
U ain't pullin hoes dawg, unless it's a whale lookin fat chick
I mean if late whistles at a dime, she'll just deny the foul lookin faggot
Lol nah, you're writing like him now
So fuck ya hopes n kill ya dreams, cuz bein lame is hurtin ya
Pussy, Only time u fuckin wit a big screen.. is rearranging furniture
It's a closer *shoulder shrug*

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Overall SMOG won it with his first 3 bars, tbh.

Smog wins