Fallcano Rnd 1: Networth Vs Bahriman - Open For Votes

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Bet, get that verse up by tonight tho @Bahriman , I been done for Four days, I should rewrite on ya ass, but it's whatever.

Bahr Vs Networth



Your girl all on my shlong. False move & this kid dead
Fuck her in see threw lingerie, after dumping your body w/the Fish,Net
Teach’em a lesson w/murder how I’m wording schemes
Put the tech to his brain till ppl asking where WentWorth & you don’t go to that University
Rugers shoot till your Red, Dead, & awfully torn, ripped
Put the Heat behind this Cowboy than the cover w/Arthur Morgan
Gotta blade that’ll shave ya throat, tone out this obnoxious dweeb
Find the fuck boy w/a Cut Neck & not like the Convict Meme
Broke bullied you off the site, some would say it was not fair
I’ll take the Dot off your back, soon as you drop dead out of my cross hairs
B

That was a dope ass drop real talk, good luck


Don't jest or move like you strapped for battle tryna sell a hoax
Ever tallied votes that said Bahr came wit equipment.... he was tellin jokes!
Poser do not approach me I'd chop you in half wit this hacksaw
In other words, w/ fake acts I take the front n end up forcin they back off!
I'd smack dawg, then wind up in jail for beatin these bitches up
Everytime Bahr hits an old punch...... he'll get tried for throwin his fisticuffs!
Listen bruh, if u were on the the rise you're gonna descend here
So anyone that see's you wail on your way, recognizes u're at the end tier!
It's been clear, Net posted on site 4 so long I'll prolly get pension
U outranked by tenure, on the hunt for 'good jobs' but wont get mentioned!

Bah:
Opener- pretty solid. Off to a good start.
Wentworth- fire concept. Solid nameplay. Wording a bit jumbled here but good shit.
Red dead- meh this was technically good. But i didnt like it
Convict meme- coulda made this fire tbh. Good angle. But as is, im not crazy about it
Closer- fire

Vs

Networth:
Opener- nah i didnt like this.
Fake act- this was a good concept. But i this it coulda been a bit more harsh.
Fisticuffs- nah. This is a miss.
End tier- decent idea. But if ur gpung for end here/ end tier thst dont really work.
Closer- again decent idea but u coulda done more w this.


Good battle guy.
Vote Bahriman. Just a better overall read imo

Bar 1 - Bah
Bar 2 - Neither
Bar 3 - Bah
Bar 4 - Bah
Bar 5 - Bah

v. Bahriman...Better concepts. Wasnt feeling Nets execution. Plus Bahs closer was lotb

Bahriman
Your girl all on my shlong. False move & this kid dead
Fuck her in see threw lingerie, after dumping your body w/the Fish,Net
5/5 i liked this here
Teach’em a lesson w/murder how I’m wording schemes
Put the tech to his brain till ppl asking where WentWorth & you don’t go to that University
dope 4/5
Rugers shoot till your Red, Dead, & awfully torn, ripped
Put the Heat behind this Cowboy than the cover w/Arthur Morgan
not feeling this one 1/5
Gotta blade that’ll shave ya throat, tone out this obnoxious dweeb
Find the fuck boy w/a Cut Neck & not like the Convict Meme
2/5 wasnt really feeling this one
Broke bullied you off the site, some would say it was not fair
I’ll take the Dot off your back, soon as you drop dead out of my cross hairs
good closer 4/5
16/25


vs

Net
Don't jest or move like you strapped for battle tryna sell a hoax
Ever tallied votes that said Bahr came wit equipment.... he was tellin jokes!
i didnt like this one 1/5
Poser do not approach me I'd chop you in half wit this hacksaw
In other words, w/ fake acts I take the front n end up forcin they back off!
ok this was good. 3/5
I'd smack dawg, then wind up in jail for beatin these bitches up
Everytime Bahr hits an old punch...... he'll get tried for throwin his fisticuffs!
reaching here this is one of the bars you have to actually say out loud to make it work. 3/5
Listen bruh, if u were on the the rise you're gonna descend here
So anyone that see's you wail on your way, recognizes u're at the end tier!
damn i wish the wording was a bit more crisp on this one. 2/5
It's been clear, Net posted on site 4 so long I'll prolly get pension
U outranked by tenure, on the hunt for 'good jobs' but wont get mentioned!
this was an ok diss 2/5.
11/15

v/Bahriman
overall bahriman had a stronger verse Net had some dope concept that seemed to have wording issues.

Quote:

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Originally Posted by Bahriman

Bahr Vs Networth



Your girl all on my shlong. False move & this kid dead
Fuck her in see threw lingerie, after dumping your body w/the Fish,Net
This was a pretty dope name flip to open. I like the angle.
Teach’em a lesson w/murder how I’m wording schemes
Put the tech to his brain till ppl asking where WentWorth & you don’t go to that University
Ain't gonna lie this one missed for me. The entire second line is overly verbose. Also "people ask where WentWorth" struck me as super weird wording.
Rugers shoot till your Red, Dead, & awfully torn, ripped
Put the Heat behind this Cowboy than the cover w/Arthur Morgan
Pretty Solid jab. The wording paints both pictures nicely.
Gotta blade that’ll shave ya throat, tone out this obnoxious dweeb
Find the fuck boy w/a Cut Neck & not like the Convict Meme
Lol. Figured that guy would stick his neck into battle rap eventually. It was a cool light jab.
Broke bullied you off the site, some would say it was not fair
I’ll take the Dot off your back, soon as you drop dead out of my cross hairs
This was alright. Closing on a personal note.
B

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Quote:

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Originally Posted by Networth

That was a dope ass drop real talk, good luck


Don't jest or move like you strapped for battle tryna sell a hoax
Ever tallied votes that said Bahr came wit equipment.... he was tellin jokes!
This was pretty underwhelming. Outside of the looseword association between jest/hoax/jokes, you really did nothing to attack here.
Poser do not approach me I'd chop you in half wit this hacksaw
In other words, w/ fake acts I take the front n end up forcin they back off!
This was pretty cool. Flowed really well and had some solid imagery.
I'd smack dawg, then wind up in jail for beatin these bitches up
Everytime Bahr hits an old punch...... he'll get tried for throwin his fisticuffs!
Yeah...This was wierd. You should probally never use the term fisticuffs in a battle again.
Listen bruh, if u were on the the rise you're gonna descend here
So anyone that see's you wail on your way, recognizes u're at the end tier!
Okay light jab.
It's been clear, Net posted on site 4 so long I'll prolly get pension
U outranked by tenure, on the hunt for 'good jobs' but wont get mentioned!
This was ineffective as a diss. Just self hype.

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Bar 1- Bahr 10/8.
Bar 2- Net 10/8
Bar 3- Bahr 10/8
Bar 4- Bahr 10/9
Bar 5- Bahr 10/8

Total - Bahr 48, Net 43.

This was an okay battle. But Bahriman was a LOT more consistent with only one miss. He did a good job attacking in every bar. Net has some cool concepts, but really needs to be more direct and agressive. You got to try to rip your opponents head off, man.

Vote Bahr

Bahr wins