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LLL SEASON 16 - WEEK 4
10-20 lines
check ins due by Tuesday Night 9:00pm PST
verses due FRIDAY 12:00 Midnight PST
MUST VOTE ON AT LEAST 4 BATTLES PER WEEK
Every vote missing will result in -1 vote in your match.
Every No-Show will result in a loss and auto-sign out. @Allen Knight @Phalanx
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Ill edit a verse if he shows
Should of been coppin' the duece..Ya were a product of ya mom's vodka abuse!Quote:
Originally Posted by .Alan Knight.
Since his weak ass wanted a free pass?! Ill send him in to next week witta doctor's excuse!
Al was fucked from the check, mate. So its not his fault that he fell..
Because as you can obviously tell.. every time Knight makes a move, it results in a L..
Dont lie about the clips you be dumping or the chrome you usin'...
Because if we see Mr. Allen with a tool...its an episode of home improvement.
Sound the disaster alarm! Homie's getting battered and harmed!
See while displaying the glocks, I'll put A.K. in a box like trafficking arms.
Thats right, Ill fire clips into your designer kicks...
So my bullets hitting alto like singing a higher pitch.
Chamber in the shotgun loaded, aimed at ur face slut
Spray till the bullets cosmetics to come & they can't fix ur genetic make up
Tryna to run from this beating, bitch I know u fearing this
Shit u had a paranormal legs till I stomped'em & ur bones had an outta body experience
Destroyed u sisters virgin ass, vag riped like nuthin scrub
I charger pussy wit my dick till I could philip rivers wit her fucking blood
Ur moms is sexy n I ran game on her, I beat her box slow
As soon as i got passed the first line of defense i Penetrated that fox hole
Dope ppl always ask for my help, faggot ur a scum slime queer
Me & the illustrated concepts while u have to archive search to draw up some idea's
Phal
Should of been coppin' the duece..Ya were a product of ya mom's vodka abuse!
Since his weak ass wanted a free pass?! Ill send him in to next week witta doctor's excuse!
not a bad flip on the personal using weak and week sort of killed the wording display and impact of the punch
Al was fucked from the check, mate. So its not his fault that he fell..
Because as you can obviously tell.. every time Knight makes a move, it results in a L..
Knight/chess/checkers concepts have been overused no hate my dude
Dont lie about the clips you be dumping or the chrome you usin'...
Because if we see Mr. Allen with a tool...its an episode of home improvement.
same here man the nameplay is overused the display of the concept was decent tho
Sound the disaster alarm! Homie's getting battered and harmed!
See while displaying the glocks, I'll put A.K. in a box like trafficking arms.
this was pretty cool nameplay and metaphorical comparison
Thats right, Ill fire clips into your designer kicks...
So my bullets hitting alto like singing a higher pitch.
nice nameplay never seen this one good metaphorical comparison
AL
Chamber in the shotgun loaded, aimed at ur face slut
Spray till the bullets cosmetics to come & they can't fix ur genetic make up
seen this wordplay before but the punch was displayed well
Tryna to run from this beating, bitch I know u fearing this
Shit u had a paranormal legs till I stomped'em & ur bones had an outta body experience
seen this wordplay before too think Endfamous or Indrid Cold displayed some shit like this
Destroyed u sisters virgin ass, vag riped like nuthin scrub
I charger pussy wit my dick till I could philip rivers wit her fucking blood
lol nice wordplay man this shit was creative
Ur moms is sexy n I ran game on her, I beat her box slow
As soon as i got passed the first line of defense i Penetrated that fox hole
lol nice wordplay again added humor
Dope ppl always ask for my help, faggot ur a scum slime queer
Me & the illustrated concepts while u have to archive search to draw up some idea's
ok
Well Phal started off with some played nameplay references. His opener was cool but wording was off. His last two bars the nameplay references and metaphored were cool though. Allen some similar wordplay shit from the bat to start off that ive seen before. wording was displayed nicely though. Philip rivers was lol and very creative as far as the wordplay went. foxhole was also funny. Felt Allen had better displayed wording in this battle if he didn't pick it up with the added humor he would've lost because like I said he started off with some wordplay ive seen before. word for word I do remember that paranormal line being displayed on RIA not accusing but ive seen the wordplay before. Anyway I felt Allen was a bit more creative and had added humor factor.
V/Allen
Traffic arms
Vs.
Phillip rivers, paranormal legs, line of defense
Phal started off played n worded it with ni fresh flip traffic arms were iight, ak had a coo verse fucked with the wording n name play Phillip rivers was lls that alone took it
V/ AK
Allen Knight
Chamber in the shotgun loaded, aimed at ur face slut
Spray till the bullets cosmetics to come & they can't fix ur genetic make up
1/3 not a really strong way to start off.
Tryna to run from this beating, bitch I know u fearing this
Shit u had a paranormal legs till I stomped'em & ur bones had an outta body experience
i liked it 2/3
Destroyed u sisters virgin ass, vag riped like nuthin scrub
I charger pussy wit my dick till I could philip rivers wit her fucking blood
this is getting a bit repetitive to say the least but decent showing 1.5/3
Ur moms is sexy n I ran game on her, I beat her box slow
As soon as i got passed the first line of defense i Penetrated that fox hole
nice punch here 2/3
Dope ppl always ask for my help, faggot ur a scum slime queer
Me & the illustrated concepts while u have to archive search to draw up some idea's
ehhh,,,,1/3
7.5/15 you had nice concepts but def not the best i've seen from you
phalanx
Should of been coppin' the duece..Ya were a product of ya mom's vodka abuse!
Since his weak ass wanted a free pass?! Ill send him in to next week witta doctor's excuse!
1/3 ehhhh ok rhyme scheme here but wasnt feelin it
Al was fucked from the check, mate. So its not his fault that he fell..
Because as you can obviously tell.. every time Knight makes a move, it results in a L..
1/3 not a very strong personal here,
Dont lie about the clips you be dumping or the chrome you usin'...
Because if we see Mr. Allen with a tool...its an episode of home improvement.
i like the metaphorical cmparson, creativity points so nice 1.5/3
Sound the disaster alarm! Homie's getting battered and harmed!
See while displaying the glocks, I'll put A.K. in a box like trafficking arms.
1.5/3 this was alright
Thats right, Ill fire clips into your designer kicks...
So my bullets hitting alto like singing a higher pitch.
kinda statementish 1/3
6/15
decent battle, i feel allen had better wordplay and more creativity but both were pretty generic, and phalanx got repetitive with the gun lines but he had a few cool ones. ak gets it , but very cclose battle
V AK
Al was fucked from the check, mate. So its not his fault that he fell..
Because as you can obviously tell.. every time Knight makes a move, it results in a L..
Dont lie about the clips you be dumping or the chrome you usin'...
Because if we see Mr. Allen with a tool...its an episode of home improvement.
Sound the disaster alarm! Homie's getting battered and harmed!
See while displaying the glocks, I'll put A.K. in a box like trafficking arms.
vs
Chamber in the shotgun loaded, aimed at ur face slut
Spray till the bullets cosmetics to come & they can't fix ur genetic make up
Tryna to run from this beating, bitch I know u fearing this
Shit u had a paranormal legs till I stomped'em & ur bones had an outta body experience
Destroyed u sisters virgin ass, vag riped like nuthin scrub
I charger pussy wit my dick till I could philip rivers wit her fucking blood
Ur moms is sexy n I ran game on her, I beat her box slow
As soon as i got passed the first line of defense i Penetrated that fox hole
solid battle here. good flips and personals from both sides. just felt AK had the harder shots and was a bit more consistent. the charger bar was ill af and lotb imo. phal had some nice np but its hard against a nigga who been here since 93. lmao ijs
v. allen
Congratulations, @.Allen Knight.