WK16: Unfukwitable (0-1) vs SiQ (2-0) Unfukwitable Wins

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@Unfukwitable @.SiQ.

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Almost forgot..... fuck the pats

.....check

(I read ur past battles & Holy FUK u like to recycle bro....)


Ur girl cant stand when u Recycle... Her nerves get to soarin
But has no problem lettin me crush that box & bein put by the curb in the mornin

Talkin shit'll get u Awarded 6 times from deadly squeezes
So even if u Duck Twice, u'll still get hit wit 4 metal pieces

(^check his awards)


No matter how tough he acts, just know he's fuckin still soft
Get U-hauled once I tie him to 1 of their trucks & peel off

I'll push ur Scalpin if someone offers a great price
So take a SeatGeek or ur fam'll score tickets to ur gravesite

Blowtorch ur kids.. they shouldnt play wit fire, its not a fuckin game
What a shame, now ur avatar ain't the only thing up in flames

(Watch ur mouth when u talk to me, youngin... )

He tried disrespectin his elders, so my 5 9's got lifted & blew
But when his limbs Tory ended up singin a whole different tune

This is where I put an N to UN, so I dare him to tempt me wit heat
Not havin structure's a SIN & each bar gotta holy should of battled MV this week

Wit watered down verses.. U gettin signed is a day-dream
Claim to be independent until I drown u in a mainstream

I'll let the Sig hit u, so ur really tagged wit Do0o0M today
Got 1-2 many wk16's, so when u faced Bayou.. ur the 1 who got Blue away

aka Klass


Once u in my Visuals I'm turnin u Invisible, I'm Cynical;
mistake me for the 'type to talk it out' I'll make a Stephen Hawking twin of you.
Fuck the Pats?, I hit his hut w/ a Tom & gauge;
turn his Living-room to Gillette Stadium I left his head center stage
Let ya loved ones watch helplessly as I use the tech;
hear his family calling 'n SiQ won't be excused from death.
Brains arranged got'em out laying slain;
Twitch'n in a Stream hoping for heart donations, it aint a game.
Those terrible N/S verses should stir up lots of self doubt;
Tf you got..Caged,For Battling and Knocked yourself out.
^^based on my N/S Medals my lips should be zipped as fuck;
I'm tryna remove those w/ this battle now my 3rd one's a Sittin Duck.
Let Buck 50s pile on his jaw slashed w/ the arch;
Smiles on top of Smiles he'll be a Klass sticker chart.

It's a Big Gap between each line.. So go and babble on the scene
Cos ya Structure explains this battle to the T.
the RB's M.C Search & that 90s theme fit ya pen schemes perf.
Ya Bar Break up gon have ya Heart Moniter the opposite of MV's verse.

He tried disrespectin his elders, so my 5 9's got lifted & blew
But when his limbs Tory ended up singin a whole different tune

--- Wasnt a fan of ur verse, u got the shot down but need more creativity and personals. I liked this one bar but it was simple wp with a decent flip....


Once u in my Visuals I'm turnin u Invisible, I'm Cynical;
mistake me for the 'type to talk it out' I'll make a Stephen Hawking twin of you.
--- first line=battle over. Fuuuuck.
Brains arranged got'em out laying slain;
Twitch'n in a Stream hoping for heart donations, it aint a game
--- good...
Those terrible N/S verses should stir up lots of self doubt;
Tf you got..Caged,For Battling and Knocked yourself out.
--- I assume this is a personal. Good....
^^based on my N/S Medals my lips should be zipped as fuck;
I'm tryna remove those w/ this battle now my 3rd one's a Sittin Duck.
--- good flip on the ns medals....
Let Buck 50s pile on his jaw slashed w/ the arch;
Smiles on top of Smiles he'll be a Klass sticker chart.
--- easy killer. Fuck

It's a Big Gap between each line.. So go and babble on the scene
Cos ya Structure explains this battle to the T.
--- simple but good....



V. Fukwit

Quote:

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Originally Posted by .SiQ.

(I read ur past battles & Holy FUK u like to recycle bro....)


Ur girl cant stand when u Recycle... Her nerves get to soarin
But has no problem lettin me crush that box & bein put by the curb in the mornin
...nah
Talkin shit'll get u Awarded 6 times from deadly squeezes
So even if u Duck Twice, u'll still get hit wit 4 metal pieces
...This is ok, expo wasnt needed at al
(^check his awards)


No matter how tough he acts, just know he's fuckin still soft
Get U-hauled once I tie him to 1 of their trucks & peel off
...played
I'll push ur Scalpin if someone offers a great price
So take a SeatGeek or ur fam'll score tickets to ur gravesite
...cool
Blowtorch ur kids.. they shouldnt play wit fire, its not a fuckin game
What a shame, now ur avatar ain't the only thing up in flames
...nah
(Watch ur mouth when u talk to me, youngin... )

He tried disrespectin his elders, so my 5 9's got lifted & blew
But when his limbs Tory ended up singin a whole different tune
...lol ok
This is where I put an N to UN, so I dare him to tempt me wit heat
Not havin structure's a SIN & each bar gotta holy should of battled MV this week
...ok
Wit watered down verses.. U gettin signed is a day-dream
Claim to be independent until I drown u in a mainstream
....no sir
I'll let the Sig hit u, so ur really tagged wit Do0o0M today
Got 1-2 many wk16's, so when u faced Bayou.. ur the 1 who got Blue away

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...nah

Quote:

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Originally Posted by Unfukwitable

aka Klass


Once u in my Visuals I'm turnin u Invisible, I'm Cynical;
mistake me for the 'type to talk it out' I'll make a Stephen Hawking twin of you.
...lol
Fuck the Pats?, I hit his hut w/ a Tom & gauge;
turn his Living-room to Gillette Stadium I left his head center stage
...nah
Let ya loved ones watch helplessly as I use the tech;
hear his family calling 'n SiQ won't be excused from death.
...ok
Brains arranged got'em out laying slain;
Twitch'n in a Stream hoping for heart donations, it aint a game.
...eh ok
Those terrible N/S verses should stir up lots of self doubt;
Tf you got..Caged,For Battling and Knocked yourself out.
...nice
^^based on my N/S Medals my lips should be zipped as fuck;
I'm tryna remove those w/ this battle now my 3rd one's a Sittin Duck.
...ok
Let Buck 50s pile on his jaw slashed w/ the arch;
Smiles on top of Smiles he'll be a Klass sticker chart.
...nasty
It's a Big Gap between each line.. So go and babble on the scene
Cos ya Structure explains this battle to the T.
...no sir
the RB's M.C Search & that 90s theme fit ya pen schemes perf.
Ya Bar Break up gon have ya Heart Moniter the opposite of MV's verse.
...lol

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v. unfukwitable... nice read from both. SiQ had some really bad misses though imo. Unfuk was more consistent.

@siQ -

ur girl cant stand when u Recycle... Her nerves get to soarin
But has no problem lettin me crush that box & bein put by the curb in the mornin

Lmao, pretty good bar. Nice one.

Talkin shit'll get u Awarded 6 times from deadly squeezes
So even if u Duck Twice, u'll still get hit wit 4 metal pieces

This was okay. Could've been better, but alright.

(^check his awards)


No matter how tough he acts, just know he's fuckin still soft
Get U-hauled once I tie him to 1 of their trucks & peel off

Not too good here, could've been better.

I'll push ur Scalpin if someone offers a great price
So take a SeatGeek or ur fam'll score tickets to ur gravesite

Not too good here, could be better.

Blowtorch ur kids.. they shouldnt play wit fire, its not a fuckin game
What a shame, now ur avatar ain't the only thing up in flames

Lol, pretty decent here.

(Watch ur mouth when u talk to me, youngin... )

He tried disrespectin his elders, so my 5 9's got lifted & blew
But when his limbs Tory ended up singin a whole different tune

Not too good here, could be better.

This is where I put an N to UN, so I dare him to tempt me wit heat
Not havin structure's a SIN & each bar gotta holy should of battled MV this week

This was better, and it has me in it. Decent. Like..lol

Wit watered down verses.. U gettin signed is a day-dream
Claim to be independent until I drown u in a mainstream

I've seen some mainstream flips, but could be better.


I'll let the Sig hit u, so ur really tagged wit Do0o0M today
Got 1-2 many wk16's, so when u faced Bayou.. ur the 1 who got Blue away

Decent here.

Unfukwitable -

Once u in my Visuals I'm turnin u Invisible, I'm Cynical;
mistake me for the 'type to talk it out' I'll make a Stephen Hawking twin of you.

Lmao, pretty good. Decent.

Fuck the Pats?, I hit his hut w/ a Tom & gauge;
turn his Living-room to Gillette Stadium I left his head center stage

Nice, decent.

Let ya loved ones watch helplessly as I use the tech;
hear his family calling 'n SiQ won't be excused from death.

Could be better, but okay.

Brains arranged got'em out laying slain;
Twitch'n in a Stream hoping for heart donations, it aint a game.

This was not too good, lol.

Those terrible N/S verses should stir up lots of self doubt;
Tf you got..Caged,For Battling and Knocked yourself out.

Lol, could be better.

^^based on my N/S Medals my lips should be zipped as fuck;
I'm tryna remove those w/ this battle now my 3rd one's a Sittin Duck.

Good one, nice.

Let Buck 50s pile on his jaw slashed w/ the arch;
Smiles on top of Smiles he'll be a Klass sticker chart.

Decent, nice.

It's a Big Gap between each line.. So go and babble on the scene
Cos ya Structure explains this battle to the T.

This was better, decent.

the RB's M.C Search & that 90s theme fit ya pen schemes perf.
Ya Bar Break up gon have ya Heart Moniter the opposite of MV's verse.

Decent..


Overall -

Both had some good bars, both had their ups and downs; but I have to go with the one who had the more better bars..and that's Unfukwitable..for now..lol

V/ Unfukwitable

Ur girl cant stand when u Recycle... Her nerves get to soarin
But has no problem lettin me crush that box & bein put by the curb in the mornin
Lmao this is dope
Talkin shit'll get u Awarded 6 times from deadly squeezes
So even if u Duck Twice, u'll still get hit wit 4 metal pieces
Cool
(^check his awards)
STFU

No matter how tough he acts, just know he's fuckin still soft
Get U-hauled once I tie him to 1 of their trucks & peel off
Meh this needed more for me
I'll push ur Scalpin if someone offers a great price
So take a SeatGeek or ur fam'll score tickets to ur gravesite
I Fuk wit this
Blowtorch ur kids.. they shouldnt play wit fire, its not a fuckin game
What a shame, now ur avatar ain't the only thing up in flames
Nah man
(Watch ur mouth when u talk to me, youngin... )

He tried disrespectin his elders, so my 5 9's got lifted & blew
But when his limbs Tory ended up singin a whole different tune
This was secret sick...deff could have been more dope but i fuk wit this
This is where I put an N to UN, so I dare him to tempt me wit heat
Not havin structure's a SIN & each bar gotta holy should of battled MV this week
Reach
Wit watered down verses.. U gettin signed is a day-dream
Claim to be independent until I drown u in a mainstream
This could have been dope man...jab at best
I'll let the Sig hit u, so ur really tagged wit Do0o0M today
Got 1-2 many wk16's, so when u faced Bayou.. ur the 1 who got Blue away
Thought this was aight man...some played shit but the 1-2 many wk 16's was nice...needed a different angle

Vs


Once u in my Visuals I'm turnin u Invisible, I'm Cynical;
mistake me for the 'type to talk it out' I'll make a Stephen Hawking twin of you.
I fuk wit this bro...
Fuck the Pats?, I hit his hut w/ a Tom & gauge;
turn his Living-room to Gillette Stadium I left his head center stage
had to think about this i fuk with this...could have been better tho
Let ya loved ones watch helplessly as I use the tech;
hear his family calling 'n SiQ won't be excused from death.
Decent... calling N Siq or calling siq?
Brains arranged got'em out laying slain;
Twitch'n in a Stream hoping for heart donations, it aint a game.
Seems a bit basic to me
Those terrible N/S verses should stir up lots of self doubt;
Tf you got..Caged,For Battling and Knocked yourself out.
cool
^^based on my N/S Medals my lips should be zipped as fuck;
I'm tryna remove those w/ this battle now my 3rd one's a Sittin Duck.
Cool
Let Buck 50s pile on his jaw slashed w/ the arch;
Smiles on top of Smiles he'll be a Klass sticker chart.
nah man
It's a Big Gap between each line.. So go and babble on the scene
Cos ya Structure explains this battle to the T.
nah
the RB's M.C Search & that 90s theme fit ya pen schemes perf.
Ya Bar Break up gon have ya Heart Moniter the opposite of MV's verse.
jab at best man



OVerall both had some misses and some dope bars... I got Siq with more quotables here plus Fuk dropped lazy bars towards the end prolly just to rush and get it in. I got Siq edging this.

Quote:

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Originally Posted by .SiQ.

(I read ur past battles & Holy FUK u like to recycle bro....)


Ur girl cant stand when u Recycle... Her nerves get to soarin
But has no problem lettin me crush that box & bein put by the curb in the mornin
Ehhhh ok
Talkin shit'll get u Awarded 6 times from deadly squeezes
So even if u Duck Twice, u'll still get hit wit 4 metal pieces
Don't love this. Too complicated.
(^check his awards)
No matter how tough he acts, just know he's fuckin still soft
Get U-hauled once I tie him to 1 of their trucks & peel off
This is kind of clever. I don't love the set up or the wording.
I'll push ur Scalpin if someone offers a great price
So take a SeatGeek or ur fam'll score tickets to ur gravesite
This concept was cool and had way more potential than this punch
Blowtorch ur kids.. they shouldnt play wit fire, its not a fuckin game
What a shame, now ur avatar ain't the only thing up in flames
This is too literal.
(Watch ur mouth when u talk to me, youngin... )
He tried disrespectin his elders, so my 5 9's got lifted & blew
But when his limbs Tory ended up singin a whole different tune
Too complicated delivery of a really interesting wordplay. YOu didn't need the 5 9 part.
This is where I put an N to UN, so I dare him to tempt me wit heat
Not havin structure's a SIN & each bar gotta holy should of battled MV this week
Eh. DOn't love any of this
Wit watered down verses.. U gettin signed is a day-dream
Claim to be independent until I drown u in a mainstream
No
I'll let the Sig hit u, so ur really tagged wit Do0o0M today
Got 1-2 many wk16's, so when u faced Bayou.. ur the 1 who got Blue away
nope

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Quote:

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Originally Posted by Unfukwitable

aka Klass
Once u in my Visuals I'm turnin u Invisible, I'm Cynical;
mistake me for the 'type to talk it out' I'll make a Stephen Hawking twin of you.
Nope
Fuck the Pats?, I hit his hut w/ a Tom & gauge;
turn his Living-room to Gillette Stadium I left his head center stage
Nope
Let ya loved ones watch helplessly as I use the tech;
hear his family calling 'n SiQ won't be excused from death.
Ok this is clever
Brains arranged got'em out laying slain;
Twitch'n in a Stream hoping for heart donations, it aint a game.
Like the concept dont like the punch or execution
Those terrible N/S verses should stir up lots of self doubt;
Tf you got..Caged,For Battling and Knocked yourself out.
Nope
^^based on my N/S Medals my lips should be zipped as fuck;
I'm tryna remove those w/ this battle now my 3rd one's a Sittin Duck.
Nope
Let Buck 50s pile on his jaw slashed w/ the arch;
Smiles on top of Smiles he'll be a Klass sticker chart.
This is pretty cute
It's a Big Gap between each line.. So go and babble on the scene
Cos ya Structure explains this battle to the T.
Eh
the RB's M.C Search & that 90s theme fit ya pen schemes perf.
Ya Bar Break up gon have ya Heart Moniter the opposite of MV's verse.
Hah. This is cute.

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Higher highs and lower lows, but overall IMO a better verse. Vote for Unfuckwithable.

Both dudes had similar issues --- halfway decent concepts, over complicated and not well worded. They're me 10 weeks ago.