LLL Week 3: Blas (1-0) vs. Blue Bayou (1-0) - BLUE WINS

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Quote:

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Blas in the Chat
I apologize to everyone for that horrendous verse I posted this week. I will post something actually decent this week lmfao

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My guy, what do you have to say for every other week you’ve posted hot garbage?!

YOURE FUCKING DEAD!!!!!!!!!!


Clout said it best..

i’m STUNNING at golf. i spend all summer putting the ball
& while i’m busy chipping in.. ur family’s PISSED you contribute nothing at all
of course i dogged em in the mag & didn’t give this bum some shine
i mean i’d give em attribute, but ‘wack’ is the only characteristic that comes to mind
i have eventful nights at the club & that is why i happily diss you
you have 'eventful' nights too.. bouncers don't let you in due to "capacity issues"
my misdirection’s involve witty punchlines & assaults w/ the led
your misdirection’s involve not getting hard while ur girl sulks in the bed
Blas’ a narc so i finna leave’em slumped to the death
no arcade in sight; but i’ll still Wack-a-Mole with a club to the head
actually thinks he’s got talent haha bless this kid
he’ll never Peaky’s just had Blinders on so long Netflix is checkin’ in
voters agree you’re awful when it comes to the rhymes ya pen
those punches just aren't working.. my verse their gonna Pickett time n’ time again
crazyy thinkin’ ur beaten me, you don't wanna rap n’ want war
if ur gunna tripwire u messing with me, i just set one at your front door

16.

Do you have a wife or are you married to wordplay? Fucking loser.

TIME TO DIE FAGGOT.

I'm up next, you’re expecting to win cuz you know voters suck vets?
nah, if it's vs BLUE I'm out for BLOOD, looks like I’ll be throwing UpSets
this faggots crying, he’s heated.. you’ll die when I squeeze clips
I just can’t wait to blast BlueFace, no fucking surprise that I’ll bleed it
such a yes man, he’s “for the culture” but ur really lame at best bitch
he thinks fitting in’s the only way to win but this isn’t a game of tetris
he’s got no squad.. if he sticks around? no question this clown will die
we’ll watch bluebook it <— no wonder there’s no value in him being down to ride
this faggots through, hit up an AA meeting you’re literally an addict dude
still, you’re winning this once in a blue moon even IF this alcoholic has a few
you’re so hideous & disgusting it’s a sin, if it’s fist to cuffing bitch I’d win
man I really wish I hadn’t senior pics.. now it’s time to put the knuckle to his chin
ur wordplay is random as fk..I’m throwing bows at this loser & wrecking his face
so watch as I knock out a bluetooth <— the only relevant connection you’ll make
fuck ur thought process & wordplay even if u’ve champed & had a few stints
how is his text created? it’s never asked we don’t give a fuck about what blueprints

UPSET CITYYYYYYYY

i’m STUNNING at golf. i spend all summer putting the ball
& while i’m busy chipping in.. ur family’s PISSED you contribute nothing at all
this was cool, I dig it
of course i dogged em in the mag & didn’t give this bum some shine
i mean i’d give em attribute, but ‘wack’ is the only characteristic that comes to mind
light jab/personal
i have eventful nights at the club & that is why i happily diss you
you have 'eventful' nights too.. bouncers don't let you in due to "capacity issues"
lol this was cool, same style as ur rec leagues bar against me which was doper
my misdirection’s involve witty punchlines & assaults w/ the led
your misdirection’s involve not getting hard while ur girl sulks in the bed
I see you really fucking with this style. This ok not as good as line before
Blas’ a narc so i finna leave’em slumped to the death
no arcade in sight; but i’ll still Wack-a-Mole with a club to the head
dope juice
actually thinks he’s got talent haha bless this kid
he’ll never Peaky’s just had Blinders on so long Netflix is checkin’ in
line is somewhere between good and light. Is this show good btw?
voters agree you’re awful when it comes to the rhymes ya pen
those punches just aren't working.. my verse their gonna Pickett time n’ time again
Pickett was cool wordplay. Not amazing tho. Jab here
crazyy thinkin’ ur beaten me, you don't wanna rap n’ want war
if ur gunna tripwire u messing with me, i just set one at your front door
nice closer






I'm up next, you’re expecting to win cuz you know voters suck vets?
nah, if it's vs BLUE I'm out for BLOOD, looks like I’ll be throwing UpSets
cool opener
this faggots crying, he’s heated.. you’ll die when I squeeze clips
I just can’t wait to blast BlueFace, no fucking surprise that I’ll bleed it
I just used a Blueface line on him. Mine was dope, sorry
such a yes man, he’s “for the culture” but ur really lame at best bitch
he thinks fitting in’s the only way to win but this isn’t a game of tetris
first real miss
he’s got no squad.. if he sticks around? no question this clown will die
we’ll watch bluebook it <— no wonder there’s no value in him being down to ride
nice bar...i fuck with it
this faggots through, hit up an AA meeting you’re literally an addict dude
still, you’re winning this once in a blue moon even IF this alcoholic has a few
st8...using mad Blue flips
you’re so hideous & disgusting it’s a sin, if it’s fist to cuffing bitch I’d win
man I really wish I hadn’t senior pics.. now it’s time to put the knuckle to his chin
haha this your best bar imo
ur wordplay is random as fk..I’m throwing bows at this loser & wrecking his face
so watch as I knock out a bluetooth <— the only relevant connection you’ll make
ehh seen Muff do this better
fuck ur thought process & wordplay even if u’ve champed & had a few stints
how is his text created? it’s never asked we don’t give a fuck about what blueprints
cool


Mad nameplays Blas some were good but others missed bad which swung this battle in Blues favor. Props on dropping early on a dope battle fellas

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Originally Posted by Blue Bayou

My guy, what do you have to say for every other week you’ve posted hot garbage?!

YOURE FUCKING DEAD!!!!!!!!!!

DUN DUN DUN, Blue Bayou prepares a Final kamehameha. He focuses his inner ki to chaotic proportions.

Clout said it best..

i’m STUNNING at golf. i spend all summer putting the ball
& while i’m busy chipping in.. ur family’s PISSED you contribute nothing at all

LMAO <3 you do love me. I liked this, you got the comedy set it up well.

of course i dogged em in the mag & didn’t give this bum some shine
i mean i’d give em attribute, but ‘wack’ is the only characteristic that comes to mind

good lil play on words here. A slick jab to solar plexes.

i have eventful nights at the club & that is why i happily diss you
you have 'eventful' nights too.. bouncers don't let you in due to "capacity issues"

Utilizing the double entendres, its landing nothing heavy but its consistent

my misdirection’s involve witty punchlines & assaults w/ the led
your misdirection’s involve not getting hard while ur girl sulks in the bed

lol, i knew a dick joke was coming.

Blas’ a narc so i finna leave’em slumped to the death
no arcade in sight; but i’ll still Wack-a-Mole with a club to the head

Although worded well this was a bit corny to me

actually thinks he’s got talent haha bless this kid
he’ll never Peaky’s just had Blinders on so long Netflix is checkin’ in

Fire. thats my show man.

voters agree you’re awful when it comes to the rhymes ya pen
those punches just aren't working.. my verse their gonna Pickett time n’ time again

cool

crazyy thinkin’ ur beaten me, you don't wanna rap n’ want war
if ur gunna tripwire u messing with me, i just set one at your front door

Slick

16.

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Originally Posted by Blas

Do you have a wife or are you married to wordplay? Fucking loser.

TIME TO DIE FAGGOT.

Blas Charges up his Final Form.

I'm up next, you’re expecting to win cuz you know voters suck vets?
nah, if it's vs BLUE I'm out for BLOOD, looks like I’ll be throwing UpSets

Blood n crip plays are older than i dont even know. Worded well though

this faggots crying, he’s heated.. you’ll die when I squeeze clips
I just can’t wait to blast BlueFace, no fucking surprise that I’ll bleed it

This one was cool.

such a yes man, he’s “for the culture” but ur really lame at best bitch
he thinks fitting in’s the only way to win but this isn’t a game of tetris

I liked this, i know its old concept but i liked it champ at the bit boys; champ at the bit.

he’s got no squad.. if he sticks around? no question this clown will die
we’ll watch bluebook it <— no wonder there’s no value in him being down to ride

A bit heavy on the name flips my dudeski. This was ok.

this faggots through, hit up an AA meeting you’re literally an addict dude
still, you’re winning this once in a blue moon even IF this alcoholic has a few

I like that kind of beer just didn't like this kind of bar.

you’re so hideous & disgusting it’s a sin, if it’s fist to cuffing bitch I’d win
man I really wish I hadn’t senior pics.. now it’s time to put the knuckle to his chin

Senior/seen your pics is nice and all. but you really didn't tie in the old age dig to make this a legit wordplay that works both ways.

ur wordplay is random as fk..I’m throwing bows at this loser & wrecking his face
so watch as I knock out a bluetooth <— the only relevant connection you’ll make

Cool, still od'ing on nameflips man.

fuck ur thought process & wordplay even if u’ve champed & had a few stints
how is his text created? it’s never asked we don’t give a fuck about what blueprints

Nah

UPSET CITYYYYYYYY

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Well Blue had the better worded bars. Blas had some cool bars but he OD hard on Nameflipping. You Should know not to use a blood/crip punch lol. Wack a mole was corny by blue too but the rest was a solid consistent verse. I think Blas slipped up here. Blue gets him on cleaner execution & Lands.

v/ Blew By You

Blue Bayou -

i’m STUNNING at golf. i spend all summer putting the ball
& while i’m busy chipping in.. ur family’s PISSED you contribute nothing at all

Lol..this was okay..


of course i dogged em in the mag & didn’t give this bum some shine
i mean i’d give em attribute, but ‘wack’ is the only characteristic that comes to mind

This was cool..


i have eventful nights at the club & that is why i happily diss you
you have 'eventful' nights too.. bouncers don't let you in due to "capacity issues"

Lol..this could be better..



my misdirection’s involve witty punchlines & assaults w/ the led
your misdirection’s involve not getting hard while ur girl sulks in the bed

This was okay..needs to be better..

Blas’ a narc so i finna leave’em slumped to the death
no arcade in sight; but i’ll still Wack-a-Mole with a club to the head

This was cool..

actually thinks he’s got talent haha bless this kid
he’ll never Peaky’s just had Blinders on so long Netflix is checkin’ in

This could be better..

voters agree you’re awful when it comes to the rhymes ya pen
those punches just aren't working.. my verse their gonna Pickett time n’ time again

This needs to be better in ways..

crazyy thinkin’ ur beaten me, you don't wanna rap n’ want war
if ur gunna tripwire u messing with me, i just set one at your front door

This was cool..

Blas -

I'm up next, you’re expecting to win cuz you know voters suck vets?
nah, if it's vs BLUE I'm out for BLOOD, looks like I’ll be throwing UpSets

This needs to be better..lol..


this faggots crying, he’s heated.. you’ll die when I squeeze clips
I just can’t wait to blast BlueFace, no fucking surprise that I’ll bleed it

This was okay..needs something more..


such a yes man, he’s “for the culture” but ur really lame at best bitch
he thinks fitting in’s the only way to win but this isn’t a game of tetris

This was cool..

he’s got no squad.. if he sticks around? no question this clown will die
we’ll watch bluebook it <— no wonder there’s no value in him being down to ride

This was cool..



this faggots through, hit up an AA meeting you’re literally an addict dude
still, you’re winning this once in a blue moon even IF this alcoholic has a few

lmao..this was cool..

you’re so hideous & disgusting it’s a sin, if it’s fist to cuffing bitch I’d win
man I really wish I hadn’t senior pics.. now it’s time to put the knuckle to his chin

lol..this was cool..

ur wordplay is random as fk..I’m throwing bows at this loser & wrecking his face
so watch as I knock out a bluetooth <— the only relevant connection you’ll make

wording needs to better..this was okay..

fuck ur thought process & wordplay even if u’ve champed & had a few stints
how is his text created? it’s never asked we don’t give a fuck about what blueprints

This was cool..

V/ Blue

i’m STUNNING at golf. i spend all summer putting the ball
& while i’m busy chipping in.. ur family’s PISSED you contribute nothing at all
- a bit weak on the misdirection IMO because it was predictable the way you delivered it

of course i dogged em in the mag & didn’t give this bum some shine
i mean i’d give em attribute, but ‘wack’ is the only characteristic that comes to mind
- Cool wp, but again feels predictable because the play is obvious before it's delivered

i have eventful nights at the club & that is why i happily diss you
you have 'eventful' nights too.. bouncers don't let you in due to "capacity issues"
- This one was cool.. same format as the first two punches but this wp was harder to discern in advance

my misdirection’s involve witty punchlines & assaults w/ the led
your misdirection’s involve not getting hard while ur girl sulks in the bed
- again with the wp coming at the very beginning of the punch, it's now a pattern I can't shake while I'm reading your verse.. still creative writing and a good punch.. just starting to feel repetitive the way it's being laid out

Blas’ a narc so i finna leave’em slumped to the death
no arcade in sight; but i’ll still Wack-a-Mole with a club to the head
- This was OK, different so I liked it, not that impactful but still decent

actually thinks he’s got talent haha bless this kid
he’ll never Peaky’s just had Blinders on so long Netflix is checkin’ in
- Didn't care for this one tbh

voters agree you’re awful when it comes to the rhymes ya pen
those punches just aren't working.. my verse their gonna Pickett time n’ time again
- Not a bad concept per se, but the execution was lacking here and for me it came off cheesy.

crazyy thinkin’ ur beaten me, you don't wanna rap n’ want war
if ur gunna tripwire u messing with me, i just set one at your front door
- there's that format again, and this was a weak concept to me, not feeling this one

vs

I'm up next, you’re expecting to win cuz you know voters suck vets?
nah, if it's vs BLUE I'm out for BLOOD, looks like I’ll be throwing UpSets
- I feel like we just saw a crips & bloods line against me a couple weeks ago.. but not a bad spin on "upset" wp so decent

this faggots crying, he’s heated.. you’ll die when I squeeze clips
I just can’t wait to blast BlueFace, no fucking surprise that I’ll bleed it
- not feeling this one at all

such a yes man, he’s “for the culture” but ur really lame at best bitch
he thinks fitting in’s the only way to win but this isn’t a game of tetris
- just.. no

he’s got no squad.. if he sticks around? no question this clown will die
we’ll watch bluebook it <— no wonder there’s no value in him being down to ride
- this was fire, very creative and I've never seen it.. nice personal angle.. double meaning.. dope.

this faggots through, hit up an AA meeting you’re literally an addict dude
still, you’re winning this once in a blue moon even IF this alcoholic has a few
- I had a better alcohol wp in mine & Blue's battle, not feeling this one

you’re so hideous & disgusting it’s a sin, if it’s fist to cuffing bitch I’d win
man I really wish I hadn’t senior pics.. now it’s time to put the knuckle to his chin
- weak wp no real meaning behind it.. needed more here, something about age in the punch would have helped but a played concept overall anyway

ur wordplay is random as fk..I’m throwing bows at this loser & wrecking his face
so watch as I knock out a bluetooth <— the only relevant connection you’ll make
- ok

fuck ur thought process & wordplay even if u’ve champed & had a few stints
how is his text created? it’s never asked we don’t give a fuck about what blueprints
- this is OK but too many nameplays in this verse for my taste.. need some variety

I got Blue taking this one fairly easily, but that "bluebook it" punch was LOTB for me.. decent battle especially for dropping early. Good to see everyone puttin' it in #FTC

v/ Blue Bayou

golf was a cool start
tribute a little simple but good
eventful was clowning, that hit
wasnt feelin misdirection
wack a mole was corny lol but it still works
netflix was solid
u did a better pickett line last week
trip why’re was solid, i likes it

vs

upsets was nice
bluefave was light
tetris bars been done so u really need a crazy spin on it to work
blue book was simple but fiiire.. alotta blue nameplays so far
i get the blue moon personal but too simple
even tho senior is played, and i’ve seen pound to ur chin like a thinking man pose lines this was a fresh twist for me
nahhh on the closer

blas did a solid job with the nameplays but at the same time went a lil overboard with em.. hurt u at the end bro, blue book was heat tho.. blue was very consistant here and that’s why he took it.. nonchalant wittiness and the eventful line was my fav..

vote Blue

i’m STUNNING at golf. i spend all summer putting the ball
& while i’m busy chipping in.. ur family’s PISSED you contribute nothing at all
Heh, cool. Relevance of a golf bar is made better by it being talked about in that chat thread.
of course i dogged em in the mag & didn’t give this bum some shine
i mean i’d give em attribute, but ‘wack’ is the only characteristic that comes to mind
Strong punch, I thought the wp was forced at first but it works fine if you pronounce attribute in the verb form rather than the noun form
i have eventful nights at the club & that is why i happily diss you
you have 'eventful' nights too.. bouncers don't let you in due to "capacity issues"
decent. Could've been worded better for the punch
my misdirection’s involve witty punchlines & assaults w/ the led
your misdirection’s involve not getting hard while ur girl sulks in the bed
LOL. Good.
Blas’ a narc so i finna leave’em slumped to the death
no arcade in sight; but i’ll still Wack-a-Mole with a club to the head
ehhhh. Nah.
actually thinks he’s got talent haha bless this kid
he’ll never Peaky’s just had Blinders on so long Netflix is checkin’ in
Cool. wp isn't the cleanest but it's worded well for the punch.
voters agree you’re awful when it comes to the rhymes ya pen
those punches just aren't working.. my verse their gonna Pickett time n’ time again
Meh. This feels like you wrote this for Resin and then decided you needed to make the picket concept better, then you just dropped the original version here
crazyy thinkin’ ur beaten me, you don't wanna rap n’ want war
if ur gunna tripwire u messing with me, i just set one at your front door
wp concept is good although I remember a few wire bars on HF, maybe not tripwire though... wording could be better for the punch



I'm up next, you’re expecting to win cuz you know voters suck vets?
nah, if it's vs BLUE I'm out for BLOOD, looks like I’ll be throwing UpSets
the blood wp is played, but the tie ins with the blue nameplay and upsets personal are done quite well, this was a good bar
this faggots crying, he’s heated.. you’ll die when I squeeze clips
I just can’t wait to blast BlueFace, no fucking surprise that I’ll bleed it
Had to look up. This is an OK nameplay
such a yes man, he’s “for the culture” but ur really lame at best bitch
he thinks fitting in’s the only way to win but this isn’t a game of tetris
Good punch and wp concept, could have been executed more harshly but still good
he’s got no squad.. if he sticks around? no question this clown will die
we’ll watch bluebook it <— no wonder there’s no value in him being down to ride
Nice! I haven't seen this nameflip on him before, and this was done very well. Set up perfect, and worded to hit. Good job
this faggots through, hit up an AA meeting you’re literally an addict dude
still, you’re winning this once in a blue moon even IF this alcoholic has a few
I've used a blue moon line on him before. This was different though. Actually this isn't even really a nameplay, it would work exactly as well if his name wasn't Blue. It's a decent flip on his apparent alcoholism
you’re so hideous & disgusting it’s a sin, if it’s fist to cuffing bitch I’d win
man I really wish I hadn’t senior pics.. now it’s time to put the knuckle to his chin
I'm conflicted about this. Seen your wp is so old and played that I was NOPEing on this bar as soon as I read it, but the 'knuckle to his chin' bit is fresh and pretty decent. I would've liked this a lot more if you'd just said I'll put the knuckle to his chin like a senior pic...
ur wordplay is random as fk..I’m throwing bows at this loser & wrecking his face
so watch as I knock out a bluetooth <— the only relevant connection you’ll make
Nah that one has been done a lot on him
fuck ur thought process & wordplay even if u’ve champed & had a few stints
how is his text created? it’s never asked we don’t give a fuck about what blueprints
This one too



This is close IMO. Halfway through reading Blas's verse I had him edging it, but the last few bars hurt him - particularly the last two nameplays. It's frustrating bc I'm sure you thought of them on your own and they were executed quite well, but I've just seen the exact same concepts on him before too many times.

V/ Blue

Typing on. a cell so no quotes, read both verses....blues verse literally had zero personal references to his opponent besides a name mention and a mag reference, which to me werent that significant...Its basically random bars that can aplly to anyone, ....thats always lazy to me bayou...

Blas had a 2 misses but a couple solid hits ..I think u did the opoosite of bayou and beat the "blue" references to death a lil...the closer was bad but besides that the bars were there....mostly....


V-Blas....decent showing IMO....

Blue.....focus on ya opponent ....ya verse literally could a been used on practically anyone else here

Blue
i’m STUNNING at golf. i spend all summer putting the ball
& while i’m busy chipping in.. ur family’s PISSED you contribute nothing at all
aha, nice. i swear u refered to urself in this exact manner via chat like u were setting this up lol
of course i dogged em in the mag & didn’t give this bum some shine
i mean i’d give em attribute, but ‘wack’ is the only characteristic that comes to mind
cool
i have eventful nights at the club & that is why i happily diss you
you have 'eventful' nights too.. bouncers don't let you in due to "capacity issues"
lmao fire
my misdirection’s involve witty punchlines & assaults w/ the led
your misdirection’s involve not getting hard while ur girl sulks in the bed
lol good
Blas’ a narc so i finna leave’em slumped to the death
no arcade in sight; but i’ll still Wack-a-Mole with a club to the head
dece
actually thinks he’s got talent haha bless this kid
he’ll never Peaky’s just had Blinders on so long Netflix is checkin’ in
nahhh
voters agree you’re awful when it comes to the rhymes ya pen
those punches just aren't working.. my verse their gonna Pickett time n’ time again
this was done better already recently n tbh i dont think i was fond of the other
crazyy thinkin’ ur beaten me, you don't wanna rap n’ want war
if ur gunna tripwire u messing with me, i just set one at your front door
ok

4 gd punches
2 jabs
2 misses

Blas
I'm up next, you’re expecting to win cuz you know voters suck vets?
nah, if it's vs BLUE I'm out for BLOOD, looks like I’ll be throwing UpSets
aw nah, too old of flip to get any play from me
this faggots crying, he’s heated.. you’ll die when I squeeze clips
I just can’t wait to blast BlueFace, no fucking surprise that I’ll bleed it
miss
such a yes man, he’s “for the culture” but ur really lame at best bitch
he thinks fitting in’s the only way to win but this isn’t a game of tetris
ok, decent. cud have maybe incorporated "blue block" or "blue square" n made this fire w/ a little rewording
he’s got no squad.. if he sticks around? no question this clown will die
we’ll watch bluebook it <— no wonder there’s no value in him being down to ride
dope
this faggots through, hit up an AA meeting you’re literally an addict dude
still, you’re winning this once in a blue moon even IF this alcoholic has a few
ok
you’re so hideous & disgusting it’s a sin, if it’s fist to cuffing bitch I’d win
man I really wish I hadn’t senior pics.. now it’s time to put the knuckle to his chin
old wp
ur wordplay is random as fk..I’m throwing bows at this loser & wrecking his face
so watch as I knock out a bluetooth <— the only relevant connection you’ll make
this was well done but also old
fuck ur thought process & wordplay even if u’ve champed & had a few stints
how is his text created? it’s never asked we don’t give a fuck about what blueprints
overdoing it w the blue np man, & not getting creative enough w them

no need to tally
v/bb

Blue wins.