FRONTLINES PRESENTS:
CONTENDERS MATCH
@Joe Boston
vs
@Boyznblack
House Rules
Check-in by Wednesday 11:59pm EST
Verses due by Friday 11:59pm EST
One 24 hr extension available upon request
10 lines min.
16 lines max.
good luck!!
:cool:
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FRONTLINES PRESENTS:
CONTENDERS MATCH
@Joe Boston
vs
@Boyznblack
House Rules
Check-in by Wednesday 11:59pm EST
Verses due by Friday 11:59pm EST
One 24 hr extension available upon request
10 lines min.
16 lines max.
good luck!!
:cool:
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10 @Boyznblack @KnowP
Stop talking about how ur bankrolls big cuz from bitches u get ignored
Everyone knows "You Aint Got no Job!" so do us a favor n die like Tommy Ford
Im assured you'll catch a hot one so i suggest u stay in ur place
Once i shoot n hit youll Fade to Black the way this Metallica face
Im your worst case scenario someone youd never wish to mention
Peep the gun selection if u wanna talk overheat catch fire quicker than the fuckin note 7
Youll get a one ticket to heaven its ur choice to die this way
Once that barrel make a Soundboy youll be dressed in ur casket like a Jamaican DJ
Your bitch is giving me Play i know down right ur jealous
N with that tight end shell let me Bennett over then work it like Brady n Martellus
Joe has 10 hidden @Boyznblack your verse is due tonight.
Quote:
Originally Posted by Joe Boston
..Or we can snap back to reality...Quote:
Originally Posted by Joe Boston
Boyz spit in the booth, blow pistols & hold gats tight with clips on by/
YOU?...sit in a booth with a blow whistle, patrol flashlight & a clip-on tie
Step in MY ring?, your defeat is expected & the crowd will go crazy, hell....
You aint even gotta be a wrestling fan to start cheering at this J.B. L
Yeah, I'm a bit arrogant, but lemme keep it a buck with the truth/
I haven't beaten any legends, but that's cause im new here...whats YOUR fuckin excuse??:facepalm:
fuck what Boston bruin, how come u get roasted in every tournament bro??/
it all makes sense now... u wanna see a star....bucks grow, all u gotta do is keep serving up Joe
If that's the case, after this i'll stack a fortune for killing the kid quick... a fast abortion/
I see u from Boston, Mass?..,,well, once I flip the script,... they'll hold a Mass for Boston
Stop talking about how ur bankrolls big cuz from bitches u get ignored
Everyone knows "You Aint Got no Job!" so do us a favor n die like Tommy Ford
Lmao this was terrible tbh. this is in poor taste because of how rushed and forced the Tommy reference sounded. sounded like a bully in school that ran out of clever things to say. miss.
Im assured you'll catch a hot one so i suggest u stay in ur place
Once i shoot n hit youll Fade to Black the way this Metallica face
Light jab. I thought the delivery was a failure overall, but it's very creative
Im your worst case scenario someone youd never wish to mention
Peep the gun selection if u wanna talk overheat catch fire quicker than the fuckin note 7
Not bad, this is a decent jab. overall it's not that impactful in its poor setup and rushed delivery
Youll get a one ticket to heaven its ur choice to die this way
Once that barrel make a Soundboy youll be dressed in ur casket like a Jamaican DJ
Repeat of the Tommy bar, another forced reference. miss.
Your bitch is giving me Play i know down right ur jealous
N with that tight end shell let me Bennett over then work it like Brady n Martellus
I read this at almost 2 in the morning and thought it was a decent. naw. this was forced. creative enough to be a light jab though. "ben" vs. "bend" is the issue here.
vs.
Boyz spit in the booth, blow pistols & hold gats tight with clips on by/
YOU?...sit in a booth with a blow whistle, patrol flashlight & a clip-on tie
Light jab, a little funny. decent multis used.
Step in MY ring?, your defeat is expected & the crowd will go crazy, hell....
You aint even gotta be a wrestling fan to start cheering at this J.B. L
Feel like I've seen this, but it's not too bad. I give it a decent jab. the concept is kinda soft and the delivery is unexpectedly soft as well, so that stopped it from being stronger.
Yeah, I'm a bit arrogant, but lemme keep it a buck with the truth/
I haven't beaten any legends, but that's cause im new here...whats YOUR fuckin excuse??
This was funny because JB is average-grade, but he's actually beaten people that you'd 9/10 struggle to beat, honestly.
Like Capcom, Smog, KnowP, Bash, etc. and beating a 'legend' is pretty rare for anyone. +, when you do beat them they're probably retired or registered on this site like 10+ years ago and rusty as hell. Overall it's an inaccurate statement, so it's a miss.
fuck what Boston bruin, how come u get roasted in every tournament bro??/
it all makes sense now... u wanna see a star....bucks grow, all u gotta do is keep serving up Joe
honestly, this was the worst bar I've ever seen from you. jesus christ I do not like this. also, the concept is played on him. miss.
If that's the case, after this i'll stack a fortune for killing the kid quick... a fast abortion/
I see u from Boston, Mass?..,,well, once I flip the script,... they'll hold a Mass for Boston
Decent jab. overall, it's not that hard hitting. the setup being so distant from the scheme of the punch contributes to how much power it lacks.
JB: 2 light jabs, 1 strong jab
BIB: 1 light jab, 2 decent jabs
MVGT: JB
Well this was closer than it appeared. both their ratings cancel each other out making it an even game.
I decided to give it to JB because of how creative his concepts were. I have a personal preference for original angles. So, BIB's Mass/Boston/Bruin/Coffee/Mall Cop bars weren't very effective here.
Stop talking about how ur bankrolls big cuz from bitches u get ignored
Everyone knows "You Aint Got no Job!" so do us a favor n die like Tommy Ford
lite on a current event jab
Im assured you'll catch a hot one so i suggest u stay in ur place
Once i shoot n hit youll Fade to Black the way this Metallica face
forced wp here. didn't like this one.
Im your worst case scenario someone youd never wish to mention
Peep the gun selection if u wanna talk overheat catch fire quicker than the fuckin note 7
jumbled your wording in the second line. andn wording was sloppy h
Youll get a one ticket to heaven its ur choice to die this way
Once that barrel make a Soundboy youll be dressed in ur casket like a Jamaican DJ
aight flip here.
Your bitch is giving me Play i know down right ur jealous
N with that tight end shell let me Bennett over then work it like Brady n Martellus
lmao I functions with this
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Boyz spit in the booth, blow pistols & hold gats tight with clips on by/
YOU?...sit in a booth with a blow whistle, patrol flashlight & a clip-on tie
lmao good personal
Step in MY ring?, your defeat is expected & the crowd will go crazy, hell....
You aint even gotta be a wrestling fan to start cheering at this J.B. L
aight on a weak flip but I see where u went here
Yeah, I'm a bit arrogant, but lemme keep it a buck with the truth/
I haven't beaten any legends, but that's cause im new here...whats YOUR fuckin excuse??
good personal again
fuck what Boston bruin, how come u get roasted in every tournament bro??/
it all makes sense now... u wanna see a star....bucks grow, all u gotta do is keep serving up Joe
the bucks part threw off the punchline. it was fire before that. it ended pretty off at the end
If that's the case, after this i'll stack a fortune for killing the kid quick... a fast abortion/
I see u from Boston, Mass?..,,well, once I flip the script,... they'll hold a Mass for Boston
nice haven't seen this before
well this is going to be a close one to call but I gotta give it to the one with crisper wording and better overall personals and less misses. good shit from both and some sick bars in here but a few fell off near the end from making this a dope battle.
v. boyz
Boyz spit in the booth, blow pistols & hold gats tight with clips on by/
YOU?...sit in a booth with a blow whistle, patrol flashlight & a clip-on tie
>>Lmfao 3/5
Step in MY ring?, your defeat is expected & the crowd will go crazy, hell....
You aint even gotta be a wrestling fan to start cheering at this J.B. L
>>No 0/5
Yeah, I'm a bit arrogant, but lemme keep it a buck with the truth/
I haven't beaten any legends, but that's cause im new here...whats YOUR fuckin excuse
>>Lol lite tho 1/5
fuck what Boston bruin, how come u get roasted in every tournament bro??/
it all makes sense now... u wanna see a star....bucks grow, all u gotta do is keep serving up Joe
>>Niice 4/5
If that's the case, after this i'll stack a fortune for killing the kid quick... a fast abortion/
I see u from Boston, Mass?..,,well, once I flip the script,... they'll hold a Mass for Boston
>>Fuego!! 5/5
Total: 13/25
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Stop talking about how ur bankrolls big cuz from bitches u get ignored
Everyone knows "You Aint Got no Job!" so do us a favor n die like Tommy Ford
>>Lol 2/5
Im assured you'll catch a hot one so i suggest u stay in ur place
Once i shoot n hit youll Fade to Black the way this Metallica face
>>Dope 4/5
Im your worst case scenario someone youd never wish to mention
Peep the gun selection if u wanna talk overheat catch fire quicker than the fuckin note 7
>>Ok 2/5
Youll get a one ticket to heaven its ur choice to die this way
Once that barrel make a Soundboy youll be dressed in ur casket like a Jamaican DJ
>>No 0/5
Your bitch is giving me Play i know down right ur jealous
N with that tight end shell let me Bennett over then work it like Brady n Martellus
>>No 0/5
Total: 8/25
Vote- BNB
Stop talking about how ur bankrolls big cuz from bitches u get ignored
Everyone knows "You Aint Got no Job!" so do us a favor n die like Tommy Ford
nah don't work. no real punch.
Im assured you'll catch a hot one so i suggest u stay in ur place
Once i shoot n hit youll Fade to Black the way this Metallica face
not sure what u mean here
Im your worst case scenario someone youd never wish to mention
Peep the gun selection if u wanna talk overheat catch fire quicker than the fuckin note 7
stretched
Youll get a one ticket to heaven its ur choice to die this way
Once that barrel make a Soundboy youll be dressed in ur casket like a Jamaican DJ
nah
Your bitch is giving me Play i know down right ur jealous
N with that tight end shell let me Bennett over then work it like Brady n Martellus
pretty decent
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Boyz spit in the booth, blow pistols & hold gats tight with clips on by/
YOU?...sit in a booth with a blow whistle, patrol flashlight & a clip-on tie
decent opener
Step in MY ring?, your defeat is expected & the crowd will go crazy, hell....
You aint even gotta be a wrestling fan to start cheering at this J.B. L
I like the concept
Yeah, I'm a bit arrogant, but lemme keep it a buck with the truth/
I haven't beaten any legends, but that's cause im new here...whats YOUR fuckin excuse??
lol ok
fuck what Boston bruin, how come u get roasted in every tournament bro??/
it all makes sense now... u wanna see a star....bucks grow, all u gotta do is keep serving up Joe
nah.. kinda forced
If that's the case, after this i'll stack a fortune for killing the kid quick... a fast abortion/
I see u from Boston, Mass?..,,well, once I flip the script,... they'll hold a Mass for Boston
not really feelin that one
V.Black. Had the batter verse overall.
3-1 BNB upping for more votes
BNB wins