Re: Abstract Human Condition
The poem ends very well, last couple of lines are good.
Didn't like the repetition of "brand", nor the alpha-beta thing.
Re: Abstract Human Condition
So are you a psychologist or something? Would you tell your patient that? Lmao, just playing. Either way, the concept reminds me of Aesop Rock; was rather good in it's way. Good stance, with forefront writing; nice clarity; and decent grasp of language. Didn't really say anything spectacular, but it was rather entertaining to read. Good work, man. Hope to read more.