When the Children Cry

When the children cry
https://youtu.be/dlul8x4o70w

V: What you want you never get
So why is it in your heart so set
Preset to go one way or the other
Brother, brethren the cult of an odyssey together
When all I ever wanted was to be a mother
So the only one left out of my story is me
Those roots were scarred but imbedded in that tree
It used to be a nut too
Seriously questioning if I should’ve been different upon due

“What have we become, just look what we have done... all that we destroyed you must build again”

((Chorus))

V: I tried my best who knows why I initially chose to pack a vest
Always surrounded by the ones who never had a choice
I guess in a way i wonder if it was to give them a voice
My god your god it doesn’t even matter who
Cause all those prayers for protection he answered too
Born in a cell or still alone at two days old brought to me 14 thousand and 600 more cold
And as every fathom unfold, as I was drowning I told

((Chorus))

(Over guitar) v: Pay attention to the voices not yet conformed to society
The ones who spit straight honesty
They don’t know yet to need acceptance
They don’t feel that real or suffer a penance
Cause they just see what they see
And tell it how it be
But soon they’ll learn it goes one after another
And all their candid will start to smother
Maybe that’s why... cause there would’ve been another me
In all my strength considered weak just waiting for the next life to justify free

((Chorus))

Link one: http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...ot-good-enough

Link two: http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...-Daily-warm-up

You knew the entire time and let them... you STILL fucking do. good! I don’t have any respect for you either - we’re even. See you in hell

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Ps... FUCK YOU privy bitch

Hmmm i want to say i liked this.... i think you couldve gone deeper i mean why chorus verse was this like a song er sumn??? Lol i liked that you stuck to the rules of text in the song or at least topical text i guess but it just felt like you were still trying to figure out what a topical was by putting a chprus and a verse shit in there just go with the piece man im not looking for songs.... i mean you can turn it into a song er whatever i guess whatever....

Thanks @Messiah I wrote it to the song so if you play it in the background the words line up with the quoted phrases and chorus and such. My inspiration always was music

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@Messiah btw what are the topical rules?