LLL Week 7 Championship: Blue Bayou (5-0) vs Dominate (5-1) - DOM WINS

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Check. G/l man. Your call on how many lines. Know you’ve got some personal shit going on.

You too Dom Juan

16-20 would be preferable as I won't even be home until late Wednesday... Thanks man

No probs. 16-20 it is.

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Originally Posted by Blue

posted 4 days late vs. Let then moved the thread quick to the bin
when pressures on artichoke. then do a wholee buncha fishy shit for a win

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Originally Posted by Dictionary.com

Artichoke: a tall, thistlelike composite plant

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Originally Posted by Blue

truth is he's average. a cry baby that’s NEVER been above the grade..
& judging by Dawali posts after a loss u'd think he was celebrating Muslim Faith

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Originally Posted by Dictionary.com

Diwali: the Hindu festival of lights

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so a nice rack that's fine?! crack baby ur never gunna smash a dime..
keep sayin the ‘Tattle’ get u laid but let's be honest man… we all know that's a LIE

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Originally Posted by Dictionary.com

Tattle:
1. to let out secrets.
2. to chatter, prate, or gossip.

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Dictionary.com is a free resource, FYI. :)


Your wordplay’s weakening nerd. I peeped that shit & couldn’t believe it at first
I was hoping to Redefine display. Not watch you butcher the meaning of words
Get a dictionary and check your shit. You fucked up one bar after another man
If the devil’s in the details u been writing pamphlets for Christian summer camp
Enough of ur talking. Reading ur muddled ass concepts is fuckin exhausting
What comes out your head is patchy these days - it’s no wonder you’re balding
Chest shot - get the sights on you. Head shot - get marked with the beam
Fuck ur attention to detail. You’ll get the dot on ur eye & the cross on ur T
I came back after five years and you’re still chasing that ultimate text hype?!
I just do this shit for the lulz, Blue … you do it for the lulls in your sex life
Lie & pretend you’re the GOAT. You’re all about quantity, harmless w/ bars
Tell defibrillating to status all u want man. I know u take those charges to heart
& ur wife’s a slutttttt for the D. I only let her suck it a couple of weeks
She got shoved aside cuz I ain’t colorblind but Blue, that pigment nothing to me
Your boys TOLD you she was whoring. You went and proposed you coward
Can’t believe you gave that muttering when everyone talked so low about her

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Originally Posted by previews

The bastard that dies but comes back alive time after time Bluebayou Snow

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Yahh you know nothing.. and the love you get from your fam is absurd lame
I don’t care how much ur Antidote. You need a cure for ur garbage wordplay

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Dominate vs. Barcotic last week
Need to stop all that vet talk. Too late to pretend ur one of the best dawg
I’ve seen how u disembark… that ship has sailed & it's time u stepped off

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Blue Bayou vs. Barcotic on NC
tellin Inf his bars are wack & would quickly get ripped apart..
i get it, he caused ur ‘exit from the Ship’.. it makes sense that you'd Disembark

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First cauterize now again?!

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Originally Posted by Dominate

I'm moving house next week too. I have so much goddamn stuff. It's not the big furniture that gets you, it's all the little shit you gotta put in boxes. So many DVDs I'll probably never watch again, so many books I'll probably never read again, shit in the kitchen like a slow cooker and a popcorn maker we've used like... maybe 5 times each?... still don't wanna just toss them though... I've barely started packing and I already fucking hate it :(

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the timing is PERFECT. you'll catch me havin a laugh as he packs tonight
cuz i’m putting some little shit in a box too, only place he’s moving now is the afterlife
i hate to have to do this, but you need to stop writing n’ quit
it’s hard not to make an example out of you when there's sooo many of u biting my shit
body shots & blood. i’m crackin ribs if you got the nerve for some fighting
trust me Domicile be evident...then you’ll run to a place of permanent hiding
they say he’s a tactician. puzzles opponents & there’s no doubting his power
i call bullshit...his punches only mystify shoulder roll n’ knock em out w/ a counter
Dom your whip is garbage. shit is charmless & that is why you never see ass
carbon broke down so many times i swore you were teachin your chemistry class
fiancé admitted shes cheating. can’t stop herself from slummin & hoein
if honesty’s the best policy, it’s no wonder Australia’s got the best govt goin
my girls into freaky shit, handcuffs & ropes when we go a real five rounds
your girls similar, but means something totalllly diff when she says she feels tied down
always archin her back to twirk, one look that bitch lacks a skirt
it’s crazy...you’d think after she Engaged in multiple orgies u wouldn’t get THAT w/ her
proved he’s no King Slayer. he won a tag belt cuz of the goat, not his work involved
it’s true his partner carried him...only when he’s next to Aerys able to BURN THEM ALL*


*Episode 2 Sunday fuck ya bitches... g'luck Dom

Dominate -

Your wordplay’s weakening nerd. I peeped that shit & couldn’t believe it at first
I was hoping to Redefine display. Not watch you butcher the meaning of words

Lmao, cool.


Get a dictionary and check your shit. You fucked up one bar after another man
If the devil’s in the details u been writing pamphlets for Christian summer camp

Lmao, cool bar.

Enough of ur talking. Reading ur muddled ass concepts is fuckin exhausting
What comes out your head is patchy these days - it’s no wonder you’re balding

Lmao, okay.


Chest shot - get the sights on you. Head shot - get marked with the beam
Fuck ur attention to detail. You’ll get the dot on ur eye & the cross on ur T

This was cool, nice.



I came back after five years and you’re still chasing that ultimate text hype?!
I just do this shit for the lulz, Blue … you do it for the lulls in your sex life

This was nice.

Lie & pretend you’re the GOAT. You’re all about quantity, harmless w/ bars
Tell defibrillating to status all u want man. I know u take those charges to heart

This was really nice, cool.



& ur wife’s a slutttttt for the D. I only let her suck it a couple of weeks
She got shoved aside cuz I ain’t colorblind but Blue, that pigment nothing to me

This was cool, nice.

Your boys TOLD you she was whoring. You went and proposed you coward
Can’t believe you gave that muttering when everyone talked so low about her

Lmao, nice.

Blue Bayou -

the timing is PERFECT. you'll catch me havin a laugh as he packs tonight
cuz i’m putting some little shit in a box too, only place he’s moving now is the afterlife

Lmao, nice.


i hate to have to do this, but you need to stop writing n’ quit
it’s hard not to make an example out of you when there's sooo many of u biting my shit

Lol, cool.


body shots & blood. i’m crackin ribs if you got the nerve for some fighting
trust me Domicile be evident...then you’ll run to a place of permanent hiding

This was okay.



they say he’s a tactician. puzzles opponents & there’s no doubting his power
i call bullshit...his punches only mystify shoulder roll n’ knock em out w/ a counter

This was NIICE! Good job.


Dom your whip is garbage. shit is charmless & that is why you never see ass
carbon broke down so many times i swore you were teachin your chemistry class

LOL, nice one.

fiancé admitted shes cheating. can’t stop herself from slummin & hoein
if honesty’s the best policy, it’s no wonder Australia’s got the best govt goin

This was NICE, good job.

my girls into freaky shit, handcuffs & ropes when we go a real five rounds
your girls similar, but means something totalllly diff when she says she feels tied down

Lol, nice.

always archin her back to twirk, one look that bitch lacks a skirt
it’s crazy...you’d think after she Engaged in multiple orgies u wouldn’t get THAT w/ her

Lol, cool.



proved he’s no King Slayer. he won a tag belt cuz of the goat, not his work involved
it’s true his partner carried him...only when he’s next to Aerys able to BURN THEM ALL*

This was okay.

This was a good battle, a nice one. But I'm giving the slight edge to Dominate. Nice one, guys.

just upping this it needs some votes. props to both. i'll vote on this 2moro when i can read it again and give a solid vote.

Dom:
Opener- nice
Devil/details- ok
Patchy- ok
Cross i/dot t-fire
Defibrillator- nice wp
Pigment- nice concept. This was good
.vs

Blue:
Example- good personal
Mystify- decent
Tied down- i fk w this


Good battle. Blue was outmatched here imo.
Two similar styles. But dom did it better.
Votw dominate

This battle was kind of a letdown tbh. A lot of the punches were very indirect.. more concept than actually punching.. and it gave the entire battle a very lighthearted, passionless feeling. Dom came surprisingly soft in comparison to other verses I've seen from him, and Blue had a couple more misses than I'm used to seeing in his verses. Definitely a weak champ match IMO. I'll give this to Dom but mainly because Blue beat himself here with a couple of reaches, and after the disembark flip quote I expected some fire but it just wasn't delivered.

v/ Dom

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Originally Posted by Dominate

Dictionary.com is a free resource, FYI. :)
again with your one liners

Your wordplay’s weakening nerd. I peeped that shit & couldn’t believe it at first
I was hoping to Redefine display. Not watch you butcher the meaning of words
nice flip and wp
Get a dictionary and check your shit. You fucked up one bar after another man
If the devil’s in the details u been writing pamphlets for Christian summer camp
the flip was cool but the punchline doesn't connect hard, still scheming tho i like it
Enough of ur talking. Reading ur muddled ass concepts is fuckin exhausting
What comes out your head is patchy these days - it’s no wonder you’re balding
funny, not sure if there's any merit to him actually balding but the line is good
Chest shot - get the sights on you. Head shot - get marked with the beam
Fuck ur attention to detail. You’ll get the dot on ur eye & the cross on ur T
clever wording here, the multiple scopes ur bringing is gonna take some quick hands to pull off tho
I came back after five years and you’re still chasing that ultimate text hype?!
I just do this shit for the lulz, Blue … you do it for the lulls in your sex life
i like the set up and angle but the punch was lite
Lie & pretend you’re the GOAT. You’re all about quantity, harmless w/ bars
Tell defibrillating to status all u want man. I know u take those charges to heart
supa hot fire
& ur wife’s a slutttttt for the D. I only let her suck it a couple of weeks
She got shoved aside cuz I ain’t colorblind but Blue, that pigment nothing to me
saw this wordplay in a couple battles actually, well worded tho
Your boys TOLD you she was whoring. You went and proposed you coward
Can’t believe you gave that muttering when everyone talked so low about her
nice punch there


Yahh you know nothing.. and the love you get from your fam is absurd lame
I don’t care how much ur Antidote. You need a cure for ur garbage wordplay
wordplay was clever but this was pretty lite..

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endless barrage of wordplay, started off scheming a nice personal angle. only 2 bars i didn't like the rest was very good. i can always appreciate the personals this was funny.

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Originally Posted by Blue Bayou

First cauterize now again?!
damn...




the timing is PERFECT. you'll catch me havin a laugh as he packs tonight
cuz i’m putting some little shit in a box too, only place he’s moving now is the afterlife
Ok, get at him blue lets go
i hate to have to do this, but you need to stop writing n’ quit
it’s hard not to make an example out of you when there's sooo many of u biting my shit
hard punch
body shots & blood. i’m crackin ribs if you got the nerve for some fighting
trust me Domicile be evident...then you’ll run to a place of permanent hiding
that was slick, fire, still not a fan of adding the apostrophe 'll for wp but i this 1 gets a pass
they say he’s a tactician. puzzles opponents & there’s no doubting his power
i call bullshit...his punches only mystify shoulder roll n’ knock em out w/ a counter
wording was good, can't help but feel like ive seen that wp a few times tho, set up was ok
Dom your whip is garbage. shit is charmless & that is why you never see ass
carbon broke down so many times i swore you were teachin your chemistry class
i liked the wordplay and the personal but the punch felt a lite
fiancé admitted shes cheating. can’t stop herself from slummin & hoein
if honesty’s the best policy, it’s no wonder Australia’s got the best govt goin
kinda funny, feels incomplete like there should be more to this. damn i don't know if i'm missing something or if it's simple and lite
my girls into freaky shit, handcuffs & ropes when we go a real five rounds
your girls similar, but means something totalllly diff when she says she feels tied down
funny flip
always archin her back to twirk, one look that bitch lacks a skirt
it’s crazy...you’d think after she Engaged in multiple orgies u wouldn’t get THAT w/ her
i like this it's slick if u catch the wording. nice 1
proved he’s no King Slayer. he won a tag belt cuz of the goat, not his work involved
it’s true his partner carried him...only when he’s next to Aerys able to BURN THEM ALL*
haha dope, took me a second to get the other side of the flip relating to the tag belt but the punch reference for GOT was sick

*Episode 2 Sunday fuck ya bitches... g'luck Dom

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solid showing from the champ, even when u got problems in ya life u still show up and bring bars. real shit


over all: another dope championship battle this season. each was able to find entertaining dirt on the other and bring a mix of humor and crafty wordplay. most categories were equal. 3-4 syllable rhyme schemes, wordplay, personals. all together a fun read. both battlers still going strong this season. all in all i was impressed with both staying this consistent week after week.

my indecision is final i have this as a TIE. i can't decide who won i thought it was equal. run it back

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Originally Posted by King

Your wordplay’s weakening nerd. I peeped that shit & couldn’t believe it at first
I was hoping to Redefine display. Not watch you butcher the meaning of words
Didn't really care for this, particularly as an opener
Get a dictionary and check your shit. You fucked up one bar after another man
If the devil’s in the details u been writing pamphlets for Christian summer camp
Decent, executed this concept a bit simply tho imo
Enough of ur talking. Reading ur muddled ass concepts is fuckin exhausting
What comes out your head is patchy these days - it’s no wonder you’re balding
Light jab, bit predictable. Wish you had rhymed it cleaner
Chest shot - get the sights on you. Head shot - get marked with the beam
Fuck ur attention to detail. You’ll get the dot on ur eye & the cross on ur T
This is okay. Feels a bit redundant after just using that "devil's in the details" concept two bars ago
I came back after five years and you’re still chasing that ultimate text hype?!
I just do this shit for the lulz, Blue … you do it for the lulls in your sex life
Nice concept/punch. Would have been even better if you'd tied the set up in with the shitty sex life angle more directly than implying he texts too much to get laid
Lie & pretend you’re the GOAT. You’re all about quantity, harmless w/ bars
Tell defibrillating to status all u want man. I know u take those charges to heart
Dope. Never seen this wp before and I like the personal aspect you executed it with
& ur wife’s a slutttttt for the D. I only let her suck it a couple of weeks
She got shoved aside cuz I ain’t colorblind but Blue, that pigment nothing to me
Ok I can rock with this. You worded this shit about as well as possible too
Your boys TOLD you she was whoring. You went and proposed you coward
Can’t believe you gave that muttering when everyone talked so low about her
Yoga flame
Yahh you know nothing.. and the love you get from your fam is absurd lame
I don’t care how much ur Antidote. You need a cure for ur garbage wordplay
Decent closer

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Originally Posted by Blue Bayou

the timing is PERFECT. you'll catch me havin a laugh as he packs tonight
cuz i’m putting some little shit in a box too, only place he’s moving now is the afterlife
Decent concept, executed a bit predictably tho
i hate to have to do this, but you need to stop writing n’ quit
it’s hard not to make an example out of you when there's sooo many of u biting my shit
Nah
body shots & blood. i’m crackin ribs if you got the nerve for some fighting
trust me Domicile be evident...then you’ll run to a place of permanent hiding
Ehh ok-ish
they say he’s a tactician. puzzles opponents & there’s no doubting his power
i call bullshit...his punches only mystify shoulder roll n’ knock em out w/ a counter
Not feeling the wp much or the actual wording of it
Dom your whip is garbage. shit is charmless & that is why you never see ass
carbon broke down so many times i swore you were teachin your chemistry class
Cool
fiancé admitted shes cheating. can’t stop herself from slummin & hoein
if honesty’s the best policy, it’s no wonder Australia’s got the best govt goin
Didn't care for this
my girls into freaky shit, handcuffs & ropes when we go a real five rounds
your girls similar, but means something totalllly diff when she says she feels tied down
Worded cleanly but not much here concept-wise for me
always archin her back to twirk, one look that bitch lacks a skirt
it’s crazy...you’d think after she Engaged in multiple orgies u wouldn’t get THAT w/ her
See above
proved he’s no King Slayer. he won a tag belt cuz of the goat, not his work involved
it’s true his partner carried him...only when he’s next to Aerys able to BURN THEM ALL
Never seen the show so I'll assume this makes sense in that storyline and say cool closer

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Dom started off slow, thought Blue would take this for sure but then he really picked it up because I thought the last half of his verse was all good with a couple of hitters like "pigment" and "muttering." I liked those two better than anything from Blue and felt like he had less misses overall. I was looking forward to this battle so it's a shame Blue has whatever personal stuff going on right now. I can tell this is a bit rushed overall and not quite up to the usual standard of verse crafting from either. But Dom was better to me.


v/ Dominate

Dom wins