Fallcano Rnd 1:Sobe Vs MV - Open For Feed
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we returning to the grind, same position but thats were the similarities stop
i got back up, face down writin to top Pleth...ur facedown, backup tryna give pleth top
bout to put'em on the spot, disrespectful as fuck but this's my way
if i drop first and disobey, from that point these niggas aint gonna listen to shit you say
been waiting for a body to put on display, and bomb chose this prick
asked him for a sacrificial lamb, he said "Have your way" now here we are so be it
i shoulder shit then reload the clip, in the front seat they'll find you slumped
be in the newspaper faster than joeboston researching a battle for 1-2 punch
im leaving him skunked, everyday of the month ya bae's face can get humped
sucking until her jaws connoisseur...but she cant get enough of the taste of my cum
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Re: Fallcano Rnd 1:Sobe Vs MV - Open For Feed
we returning to the grind, same position but thats were the similarities stop
i got back up, face down writin to top Pleth...ur facedown, backup tryna give pleth top
-decent opener here. concept was good: yall on the same level, but not the same. i dig it
bout to put'em on the spot, disrespectful as fuck but this's my way
if i drop first and disobey, from that point these niggas aint gonna listen to shit you say
-this is nice. idk if its pronounced so-bee or so bay. As is, this works
been waiting for a body to put on display, and bomb chose this prick
asked him for a sacrificial lamb, he said "Have your way" now here we are so be it
-not feeling how u executed this idea.
i shoulder shit then reload the clip, in the front seat they'll find you slumped
be in the newspaper faster than joeboston researching a battle for 1-2 punch
-this was wack imo.
im leaving him skunked, everyday of the month ya bae's face can get humped
sucking until her jaws connoisseur...but she cant get enough of the taste of my cum
-good concept. But the wp is forced. This a no for me
overall. good drop. just tweak those executions a bit
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didnt like the opener, disobey could have been much more dis sobe bay was what i thought u were going for, lamb line was a filler, nothin special about the JB line, completely didnt like the closer.
Try to be more concise. less is more.
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Originally Posted by
MV
we returning to the grind, same position but thats were the similarities stop
i got back up, face down writin to top Pleth...ur facedown, backup tryna give pleth top
Funny
bout to put'em on the spot, disrespectful as fuck but this's my way
if i drop first and disobey, from that point these niggas aint gonna listen to shit you say
Fire
been waiting for a body to put on display, and bomb chose this prick
asked him for a sacrificial lamb, he said "Have your way" now here we are so be it
EH nah
i shoulder shit then reload the clip, in the front seat they'll find you slumped
be in the newspaper faster than joeboston researching a battle for 1-2 punch
Lolol I dig
im leaving him skunked, everyday of the month ya bae's face can get humped
sucking until her jaws connoisseur...but she cant get enough of the taste of my cum
Don't really get lol
Disobey and Boston were fire imo
Good drop homie
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Originally Posted by
MV
we returning to the grind, same position but thats were the similarities stop
i got back up, face down writin to top Pleth...ur facedown, backup tryna give pleth top
This was low key dope. I like this.
bout to put'em on the spot, disrespectful as fuck but this's my way
if i drop first and disobey, from that point these niggas aint gonna listen to shit you say
This was okay. Disobey struck me as a bit forced as I would assume A one is pronounced like so be.
been waiting for a body to put on display, and bomb chose this prick
asked him for a sacrificial lamb, he said "Have your way" now here we are so be it
This was okay. The so be it part feel underplayed, and could have been set up better. Still lands though.
i shoulder shit then reload the clip, in the front seat they'll find you slumped
be in the newspaper faster than joeboston researching a battle for 1-2 punch
This was nice. And true af. Good shit.
im leaving him skunked, everyday of the month ya bae's face can get humped
sucking until her jaws connoisseur...but she cant get enough of the taste of my cum
Wordplay missed. Connoisseur is pronounced con uh sewer. Doesn't really work phonetically with what I believe you were going for, "kind of sore". But I can appreciate the creativity
ALL in all, a pretty solid verse. Some of the wordplay wasn't as concise as I like, but every bar had elements I liked. The opener and newspaper flip were fuego. Good shit.
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In my favor or not I appreciate the feedback fellas. Thanks and good luck in all of your battles
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